Shivi FF: Chooriyan (Part 17- Pg.74) (complete) - Page 30

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Gaumbi saw them, shaadi pakka, Shiva CAN'T back out now🤣!!! Unless you become a sadist again😲. Please don't baby Ananya😭!!! Not noooow😭!!!! My dil has become toots because of our stupid, favorite otp... 🥺Mujhse aur bardaasht naa hobe!!!

*the moment where I have one forearm covering my forehead with the other thrown behind me dramatically like I'm a 60s heroine in a love failure song? This is that moment...

Tada!!!

Thoda sa angst toh banta hai 🤣

I’ll turn into a sadist for one or two chapters only 😆

Originally posted by: prernapewdie

It is cutesttttttttt. Damn it was so so so well written. Aise mein admi chobe ka sarr na fode toh kya kare batao 🤪

Thanks! Fod do Chaubeys ka sarr 🤣

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

Aye haayeeee!! These two fools in love!! Please, I am down on my knees begging you, keep this lighthearted and sweet.. after the heartache the show has been giving us, this is my only reprieve. Please!

And I was wondering what came of the application I submitted to get longer updates???

Long honge toh frequent nahi honge 🤣 So it’s best to keep it short.

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

Ananya ... every time I thought about giving up on this ship ... you and your stories held me back .. y joo do this 😒

This chapter was everything I want to see in ShiVi .. sadu Shiva being soft for Raavi ... never quite immune to her infectious charm and guileless Dobiness ... this boy is already a goner hain na ? Him phisloing slowly in this chapter got me like... jealous Kaddu revelling in Dobi Raavi barsaaoing pyaar and pappis .. ☺️

Yet another beautiful update. You're the best yaar 🤗

Aww thank you!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

“Ae maami ki behen ki beti. Tu bigadti jaa rahi hai. Pehle shaadi karni thi ab kiss. Kalko tujhe… kuch aur karne ka mann hoga.” - i loved this line by Shiva, and very true is ladki ki koi bharosa nahi.

Shiva walked upto them and put his arm around her waist, - ooooooooo possessive (read as geet from JWM)

Hone wala pati - i love possessive Shiva.

Loved the update Ananya, thankyou

Oooh possessive- in Geet’s voice 🤣
Love that

The way twitter wale are sitting on this thread .. watching it .. like bhooke nange 🤣

The bhooke nange of twitter fd are here 🤚🏽

BRO.

Sab kuch baad mein.

.. she went and sat on the bed, waiting for Shiva to enter. Raavi tried a seductive pose but she almost fell off the bed, so she sat normally waiting for him ..

This had me in SPLITS 🤣🤣🤣

This is SOOOO Raavi 🤣

Also .. Shiva Pandya naa naa karte karte .. almost sab kar gaya 🤭 ... nahin matlab yeh toh aise itraa raha tha jaise Chattaan hai .. so sakhth ... but end mein .. phisal hi gaya ☺️

Good job Dobi, attagirrrrl 😎

Oh man, Raavi!!!

I kind of get how and why Shiva exercises so much control with her. But I really really hope he doesn’t think she is using him for time pass.. I mean they are way beyond that point, right? I’m so excited to see what happens next?

As for the request, *sigh* yes, I’ll take more frequent updates any day. Thank you!