FF - SaiRat:A journey to the past (updated on page 6)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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So this is the chapter one. I am inexperienced in writing so updates will be very slow and it may not turn out according to your expectations. And you all can suggest any plot or idea you want me to add. I wanted to write a time travel to some famous historic so you can suggest the era of anything related to that. Let’s not waste each other’s time anymore😂


Part 1 - page1

Part 2 - Page 4

Part 3 - page 6




“But why should we go? Can’t we rest at home?” Sai asked Virat. It was a beautiful day so virat wanted to go somewhere but Sai wants to enjoy at home or binge watch some series.It is very rare for her to get some chill time away from those medical books and she really wanted to enjoy it by watching movies or some series but Virat wanted to go out with Sai so certain someone can’t disturb them.

“Please Sai, please let’s go somewhere it’s very difficult for us to spend some quality time with each other. So why do you want to stay at home. Let’s go outside, I promise we will spend our next free day at home by doing what you want to do.” Begged Virat, as he really doesn’t want Patralekha to disturb them like always and spoil their mood . And he just wants to go on a long drive with Sai.

“Okay, but where do you want to go?”, asked Sai after giving in his demands to spend their day somewhere away from her comfy bed which was too tempting to leave behind but she can do atleast this much for love of her life.

“I love you”, Virat says in excitement, making Sai smile. “ okay so let’s go on a drive and from there on we will decide where should we go”, completed Virat.

“What, you don’t have any plan but still wanted me to go with you. It’s not fair Virat sir”, pouted Sai and yeah she still calls him Virat sir- old habits die hard as you all know.

“Sai please, let’s go na I have a place in my mind and I am sure you will like it”. Said Virat while picking up his wallet and car keys.

“Okay, atleast let me take my bag or phone. you go wait in car, I am coming in five minutes”. Said sai, Virat nods and turned to leave when sai called him again and he looks at her to listen what she wants to say. “ I love you too virat sir”. She says which made him smile.

“Let’s go fast, we need to come back before sunset otherwise you know na what kaku and Pakhi didi will do”. Said Sai while putting on seat belt.

“ Don’t worry my dear wifey, we will be back before sunset, you just enjoy this drive and leave your worries to me”.

Said Virat making her smile. They were enjoying their drive with small talks related to anything or everything. In short they were enjoying each other’s company.

“What the hell”, exclaimed virat , his car suddenly stopped in middle of nowhere and is not starting again. They have just started their day and Virat has so much in mind but it looks like someone do not want them to enjoy. Sai looked at Virat to ask what’s the problem but he shakes his head indicating he has no idea of what happened to his car. They got out of car to check the problem and then they noticed that they are at outskirts of city.

Virat was busy in checking his car and Sai was freaking out thinking what would happen when they would go back to house. She is stressed as she can imagine the reactions and expressions of their family members very well. And suddenly they heard sound of lightning, it was sunny day and weather department did not give any warning regarding bad weather thought Virat as he had made sure of this before coming out.

They looked at each other wondering what to do now. Virat took out his phone to call mechanic as he has figured out that he can’t solve the problem by himself but there was no network in his phone so asked Sai to check her phone and the result was same.So they thought to go and find a mechanic nearby.

“ I am sorry sai, I spoiled our day.” Virat apologies as he knew that Sai wanted to enjoy her day at home but it was on his insistence that she came.He was feeling very bad and his ruined plans were also the reason he felt like this.

This stupid car and mobile , he cursed them in his mind.

“ No Virat sir, don’t say sorry you just wanted to enjoy and it’s not your fault that your car decided to ditch you” said Sai. “And our day is not ruined because no matter what’s happening but the good thing is we are spending time with each other” she said making Virat feel somewhat good about this situation.

They have covered a little long distance but still didn’t find any mechanic or garage heck leave them they haven’t find a single person anywhere near the area.

When suddenly rains started, so to save themselves from rain they looked here and there to find a shelter but nothing was in sight so they started to run back to their car when suddenly they found a room like structure on roadside which was really weird because they were somewhat sure that it was not there before. But shrugging of this unusual feeling they went to that room and opened the door and from nowhere too much light came and they felt someone was pulling them inside and a sudden black out.


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Posted: 4 years ago
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How was it? You all can suggest ideas as you all are very creative and I request you to suggest so I can write something good.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Really nice chapter! Are you gonna make it a thriller genre though? 🤔

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Beautiful ♥️

Kya mast likha hai

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Happy writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Also may I suggest that you edit the title of your post to say FF/fanfic so that people dont miss it! :)

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This is really interesting please continue soon

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Lovely first chapter

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Very nice! Do write more. By the way, a different genre like time travel sounds fun!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very nicely written. Pleasant read. Btw yaha bhi bichari Sai ko late ghar aane ka khauff hai...😆 khandoba

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Congratulations for your 1st story🥳

Nice start Viru and Sai went out to spend quality time but car broke down and the time travelling started

Waiting for the next part update soon

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