Shivi FF: Chooriyan (Part 17- Pg.74) (complete) - Page 13

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Annaya main dekh rahi hoon jaise tumhare ff aa rahe waise hi tum Raavi ko aurr dobi banahti hi ja rahi banati ja rahi ho…

But I am loving this 😃

Hain na? 🤣

I don’t know why 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: freebird_dd

Omg m still laughing bt u knw this is very unique story...

Your timely update cherry on the cake...

For me raavi is innocent n pure because this is what she understood the significance of green chooriya...

Pandya reactions done I want mami reaction fast please this time i want next part right part..

Ananya u give blockbuster back 2 back.. everytime hw u managed ...

Today only I again read liar liar, fake dating again ...

Next part fast please...

Aww thanks!

Maami ka reaction milega par thoda sa wait karna parega uske liye 😆

Originally posted by: sangy

Ananya, by God!!!! With every story you prove that you are a master storyteller!!! The makers by God should learn from you!!!!

This chapter was so hilarious, I just couldn't get enough of Dobi Raavi....she is the cutest!!!!

Poor Chattan Pandya is going to have to protect this precious soul from this big bad world!!!

Man to this jodi has so many possibilities and you my dear explore each and every one of them....

The Fandom is blessed to have writers like you!!!

Again I can't thank you enough for your phast phast updates.

Yaar ek chotu sa suggestions - Index bana lona!!!

Aww thank you! 😳
Haa I’ll make an index soon

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

What was this🤣🤣

I still cannot stop laughing🤣🤣

This Dobiness is ultra pro max level and I am loving each bit of it❤️

Shiva is going get more mad....He has already started unleashing fire🤣

The entire chapter had me splits...starting from Dev-Raai's conversation..Lol Dev Abhi toh 10 baje hua hein🤣

The family's reaction was super hilarious🤣

Update soonisssshhhhh!!!

Dev is a bigger dobi than Raavi 🤣

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Ananyaaa

Loved ittttt

One more update today???

Waiting for this craze🤣

2 updates per day. Kal ka quota khatam ho gaya tha 🤣

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

Yeh ladki bilkul paagal hai 🤣 she actually took the story so much to heart ke she changed her mind about whom she wants to marry

Oh god my poor Shiva. Kya karega is ladki ke saath😆

Dhara ko tho har jagah faint karni hai 🤣

Wondering how this is going to turn out. Excited *rubbing my palms*

Dora maata ko shock deke faint karne mein maza aata hai 🤣

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

no updates for you 😭💔

Me gonna update now. 🤗

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

"Shiva didn’t know the true implication of gifting green bangles to any girl. She had to educate him." - the way this was the beginning of the chapter and I laughed so hard 🤣

Gosh, I love this version of dobi Raavi! She's the cutest 😆

The update was packed with hilarious moments and I loved, loved, loved them all!❤️

Shiva's reaction was exactly what I expected 🤣

Can't wait to read more 🤗

Thanks! Now we’ll get to see two ziddis children fighting 🤣

Originally posted by: IshqKaRang

I’m so upset I missed this story so far! How did I?

But I’m loving it! I expect nothing less than Dobi Raavi pulling all stops in making Shiva agree to the marriage! Haaaaaaayyyyyyyeeeeeee!! I’ve never been more in love with green glass bangles before.

I’m so excited!! Please continue soon!

Aww thanks!!

Green bangles ne bana di jodi

Originally posted by: barkhaa_tpm

I read this. Again.

Spat out my water. Again.

I wish I could see Shiva's face🤣

Uss bechare ko shock laga aur tumhe maza aa raha hai 🤣🤣

Poor baby 🤣