MG FF: The Innocent - Chapters 20-27 on p. 41 - Complete - Page 37

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Posted: 4 years ago

@ ferdouz - Many thanks for always posting such lovely and kind feedback, I appreciate it so much! So glad you enjoyed the last chapters! Thank you again. :)


@ Alamelu - Thank you for always following along with the story and posting your thoughts, much appreciated! Great points!


@ aparna3011 - Ahh, please do not apologize! I'm so sorry to hear that and I hope you are feeling much better and getting lots of rest! Many thanks for always leaving such great feedback, I am so grateful! Thank you again and best wishes to you!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 3 - 5


So Geet is at Maan's house, and Pinky looked after her. I liked the descriptive touch of the observations Geet made on her way to Maan's office/study room. presence of Sameera and their display of affection(?) shocked me a little. But then the conversation between Maaneet was fiery, showed Maan's intimidating and authoritative persona, and Geet not too submissive or weak, yes scared and frightened with the turn of events but she answered with brevity. As he said, he could have killed her but he did not, that tells he may not be involved into the killing and there is a different side to this whole gunshot story.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Very nice updates dear

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Posted: 4 years ago

Fabulous part

Beautiful date on yacht

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@ Flame_of_Forest - Thank you so much for reading and posting your thoughts on those chapters! Glad you liked the observations! :)


@ Charanjeetkaur - Many thanks for following the story and for your sweet comments! :)


@ priya_21 - Yay, so glad you liked the yacht scene! Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. :)

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Posted: 4 years ago

💘😻💜💛💚🧡💘 lovely ending 😍❤💖💕💓♥

Maan get geet

Neil get mother

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow. So many chapters all at once.

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Posted: 4 years ago

chapter 20

So it was true after all. Rocky was gunned down in that alley.

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Posted: 4 years ago

This would be so heartbreaking. To have been so close and not even get to see a loved one.

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Posted: 4 years ago

chapter 21

Of course Geet now has reason to suspect Maan's kindness towards her.

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