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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kfof

Family meeting Raavi was amazing❤😍

Shiva and Raavi conversation and confession😂😂❤❤😍

Great update❤

Thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: barbieflora

I don't know if I have commented on this so far, but I'm absolutely in love with this story!

I love how they didn't get married then and now they are slowly building a connection.❤

Finally they are together!!! 😍

Thank you so much

Yup they are finally together but with a twist

I hope you like further chapters too updating soon 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Amazing.

Finally they are together

Thank you

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Anupama🤗!! Loved the update... Rishita still seems to be her haveli self right now, hopefully this means full on protective Shiva at some point of the story! I love that Suman is being super observant here, but, I'll be continuing my love-hate relationship with her🤪.... Still loving Krish here, because no matter that he didn't intend to do it, he got Raavi jealous, and Shiva to talk about his feelings😆.... The Shivi I became your girlfriend accidentally moment was, ❤️!!

PS You were really looking forward to my review?!!! I feel so loved right now.... ☺️

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Ab itne se pyaar se review karogi to intezaar to rahega hi

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful update👏💓💞

Krish is so cute, he made Raavi jealous😉

Suman's pov was nice, she understood Shivi's relationship😊

Shivi's conversation and confession was beautiful ❤️💞

Thank you so much

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loved it!! Shiva not hiding his feelings, Krish being the cupid, and Raavi understanding his said and unsaid words.


And seems like there's Suman's approval too! Can't wait to see how they explore this relationship and Shiva learning about what BJ stands for😂

Suman is going to be #SHivi ship sailor here

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Posted: 4 years ago

Raavi held his shoulder and hop on his bike she is blushing so hard her cheeks are all red, Shiva smiled in her gesture… What happened few second before seems like a dream to them? Shiva never in his wildest dreams thought her to be his girlfriend they were always poles apart… Fighting throughout their life they even doesn’t know from when the other person become their entire world… It’s a different feeling being accepted by someone, having all kind of emotions when you are around them… Shiva looked through his rear view smile is not escaping her lips, Is she really happy to be with him? All he wanted an apology from her side but that’s a gone topic now, She is his girlfriend… His… Even this sentence makes him having all the beautiful dreams the only thing he knows that he will always cherish her…

They reached to Maami’s house in few minutes, Raavi frown thinking she has to be away from him now… “Flat mein kab jaayegi?” Shiva asked hoping it will be easier to met her there then here, Maami will never like his frequent visits and neither he is interested to see her face and ruin his mood… “Ab yahin rahungi… Samaan lene jaana hoga BJ se kahaa hai shayad kal shaam ko hum dono jaaye” Raavi said smilingly… She is happy that she is here now… Meeting him is easy otherwise they have to travel such a long distance just to have one glimpse of each other… After hearing BJ’s name, Shiva face fell why his girlfriend is still very interested with that guy… She is his now… No matter what he won’t let that guy to be with her for longer duration… Since she said first that she wanted to be his girlfriend he is sure that there is no feeling from her side but what about that guy he won’t be sure for that…

Nahi… Kal hum saath mein jaayenge tere flat… Jo bhi samaan laana hai le aayenge… Main help kar dunga, aur kissi ki zaroorat nahi” Shiva said this authoritatively… Raavi looked at his eyes, this is the first time she can feel possessiveness in his voice… It gives her sense of relief as if after all those years of yearning, having no one beside in her life she got one person who want to be there for her… And that person want her for him completely… Raavi smiled and nodded… She starts going when Shiva held her hand… She turned around and looked at him, Shiva doesn’t know why he stopped her? He just doesn’t want her to go… He wanted to be with her for long time… They were so engrossed with each other that they never noticed the eyes looking at them, their relation is already a spread news in this surrounding… Everyone around here are all ready with their speculations, the two rivals who spend all the time fighting with each other now looking towards each other with smile and love that no one can left unnoticed…

Raavi entered to her room, she is smiling all the time when she felt a tight grip across her shoulder “Aah Maasi!! Dard ho rahaa hai… Kya kar rahi ho?” Raavi rubbed the place while her maasi’s finger left the mark… What she is? A beast… Why she is acting like a crazy person with her now, she is happy and don’t want her to ruin her mood… “Kya kar rahi thi tu uss jaahil gawaar ke saath… Main keh rahi hoon Raavi dur reh uss 10th pass se… Uss junglee ke saath reh ke apna samay kharch mat kar… Kahaan tu, Kahaan vo… Koi mel hai kya? Vo pandya pariwar to tujhe uss Jaanwar ke saath baandhna hi chahta hai bahaana dhundega main keh deti hoon tu usse kabhi nahi milegi” Prafulla said in anger… While Raavi looked at her with mixed emotion why her Maasi hate Shiva as such… She can understand that she won’t be ready for her or Shiva’s marriage but her so called hatred without any reason is not what she ever get… Raavi slightly push her away and engrossed herself preparing for the notes of next class… Prafulla is worried for her daughter, she came back after 7 months to her, the society is having lot more question to her character as well as they were all ready to judge her at any step… Plus, her name is unknowingly joined with Shiva… She cursed Dhara every other day, to come with a stupid plans of hers… Now people are more interested in Raavi Shiva so called wedding then what happened with Raavi and how she is left in alter… She knew once her daughter get to know the taunts Shiva heard she will get ready for the marriage even if it’s in name of sacrifice and that’s what she never wants… She stopped Jagat for telling her the entire truth, even her own husband want Raavi to have good future with Shiva… So that he mend his relationship with his sister… Those two siblings will only think about them and will surely ruin her daughter future to let her get married with that Gawaar for her entire life…

Dekh Raavi… Maine aaj tak tujhe kissi cheez ke liye nahi roka hai… Tere liye, Dev ka rishta lete waqt bheekh tak maangi thi maine par ab, Ab sirf tujhse ek cheez maang rahi hoon… Uss Junglee Jaanwar se dur reh… Nahi to” Raavi get agitated now… Why her Maasi is fill with hatred for that man… She thought, after all the wedding fiasco she must hated Pandya’s specially Dev…. But no, He wasn’t in this picture everyone accepted him with open arms… The only problem they all had with the man who was ready to sacrifice to save her dignity at that day… “Nahi to kya? Kya Maasi? Mujhe nahi pataa ki aapke dimaag mein kya chal rahaa hai I just know that I won’t stop meeting him… Aur aap please usse Junglee Jaanwar bolna band karo mujhe achaa nahi lagta jab koi bhi usse aisa kuch kehta hai” Prafulla can see different emotions in her daughter eyes… Her daughter always took his side, before too but at that time her expressions are different, now it gives her different wave… She went from there feeling anger as well perplexed for the emotions…

Suman is waiting for Shiva all along… As she saw him entering smiling all the time and his eyes are depicting the happiness he is surrounded with… Her eyes can never be wrong, her son is in love with that girl for sure… She is still not sure about Raavi, she loved her elder son for such a long time taking time with her relation is common for her… But her son, it’s his first love, first attraction and that feeling is cherishable for every passing second…

Chod aaya tu uss Kaagdi ki beti ko? Pata nahi kyun aayi thi yahaan… Main to keh rahi hoon aaj ke baad usse iss ghar mein dekhna bhi nahi chaahti main…” Shiva comes out of his dream world… What his mother is talking about? Why she doesn’t want to meet Chipkali she is so beautiful from heart that she came here to meet and say sorry for the thing where she wasn’t in complete fault… “Kyun… Kyun maa… Chipkali ki koi galti nahi hai… Vo to humaara kumbhakaran hai jo so gaya tha… Vo to itni achi hai ki(He stopped in between why he is acting like this? He can help his mother to understand later on too) Maa Raavi yahaan aayegi aur ab to aap usse manaa kar hi nahi sakti ab vo aur main….” He stopped once again and bit his tongue why he is so excited? Why he wanted to tell entire Somnath that she is his… His girlfriend… Suman smiled looking at him she put her hand at his head “Mera aashirwaad hai tere saath… Main to bas yahin chahti hoon ki tum dono khush raho humesha… Tu pati banke aur vo Patni banke” Shiva smiled hearing her mother… Did she caught him so easily, is it written all over his face that Chipkali is in his heart? “Maa… Kahaan tu shaadi pe pahuch gayi… Abhi to hum Girlfriend Boyfriend hai…” Shiva said and blushed it seems good to share this with his mother she understands him better than anyone and also he wants to share this with someone… “Kya bola tu yeh Girl Friend… Yeh kya balaa hai?” Shiva smiled looking at his mother she is indeed cute… But yeah, less then his Chipkali… His chipkali who is his girlfriend now… “Maa main aur vo kuch samay ek dusre ko jaanege samjhenge… Phir agar sab sahi rahaa to jo aapne kahaa vo bhi” Shiva blushed while completing his sentence… He put his head in Suman’s lap while she caressed his head with all love… Suman is not able to comprehend what he meant… But she is happy that end result of all this is that her son is going to be happy…

At night

Shiva is not able to sleep that Chipkali is all over his mind… They used to talk in wattsapp before too but now sending her a message gives him chill, he doesn’t understand what to say or not? The only thing he knows he wanted to talk with her it’s more than 10 hours 43 min 56 seconds now… He is typing the message and deleting them but is not ready to send her a message… His phone beep with a message Shiva opens and saw it’s from the Chipkali his happiness have no bounds…

Kal free hoga na tu? Agar dukaan mein kaam ho to koi nahi main BJ ke saath chali jaaungi” Raavi messaged… She is being extra formal after what happened today… She even doesn't talked to him like this when they were sworn enemies… And what about this BJ, why he is everywhere?

Tere liye to bilkul free hu main… Humesha rahunga tere saath” He said trying to be flirty with her…

She didn’t messaged him further he waited… And waited, it’s more than one hour of wait then finally he gives up and decided to call her…. Raavi looked at the caller id, she doesn’t know why she is getting scared of all these? It was Ok in morning but later on she realizes what she had done? She said Yes to be his girlfriend and he readily accepted, it means he may have feelings for her but what about her? Do she like him? Whatever Maasima said impacted her after she process the thoughts… She spend 10 years chattering Dev name and now she is being his girlfriend… His… What will other think? They must found her characterless… She wanted to refuse him… She wanted him to forget whatever she did in morning… But, she doesn’t know why she can’t? She tried to write numerous messages and deleted them and finally come with the conclusion that she will stop herself to meet him… And yeah, that’s way she will understand what she wanted… But why he is calling her…. How far she can avoid him after doing all those nonsense… He wasn’t asking her to be his girlfriend it was she who said yes as if it’s dream comes true… Now she is scared, angry, blushing , happy, sad all at the same moment… She decided to pick his call and end it… yes she will end it…

Kitna samay leti hai tu Jaaneman?” Is Raavi heard it right… He called her Jaaneman, Now how she will end this relationship why he needed to be so flirty and cute at the same time… “Vo… Vo main… Main na… Main kaam kar rahi thi kuch college ka” Raavi lied that’s the better way she is not getting words to stop him so it’s better to be like this… “Acha phir koi nahi… Tu kaam kar mann lagaa ke… Hum kal milte hai” Shiva said in toned down voice… He is literally making this hard for her, with all his new sentence his new avatar she feels more attracted to him… And even started questioning herself… “Nahi… Mera matlab ab kaam ho gaya hai… Bol… Kya bolna hai” She doesn’t want phone call to be ended not when he sounded so gloomy because of her tone…”Arre apni girlfriend se baat karne ko sochna thore na padhta hai… Kahin tu to nahi soch rahi ki ab meri girlfriend rehna hai ya nahi?” Shiva said and chuckled… While Raavi felt she is caught in between her lies… She is already giving second thoughts she is more worried about others then her own feeling, also she is confused by herself… She doesn’t want to hurt him… She doesn’t want to lose him… But, is that all is love? He may have expectations from her, how long he will wait for her if she kept moving as pendulum?

Shiva waited patiently he thought she will say “Gadheda hai tu… Aisa main kabhi soch bhi sakti hu kya?” but her silence making him feel indifferent… Is she really fine with this relationship… Yes, she is… Why he is questioning her she must be worried because of all the work… “Acha tu bataa… Main to sirf subah se tere baare mein soch rahaa hu kya tu bhi” Shiva asked with lot’s of hope…”Aur nahi to kya? Subah se replay mein tu hi chal rahaa hai mere dimaag mein… Kuch zyada hi soch rahi hu” Raavi said the truth as soon as he completes his sentence… Shiva smiled, he is sure she felt something for him her eyes were portraying the unknown feelings, she may be little confused as she is Dobi… Soon, they start talking about so many things their childhood equation… How they kept fighting for everything? But still end up together while talking Raavi remembered how he was there at every step of her life… He was always an important person in her life… Talking to him soothe her heart… She never care about surrounding when it’s him… May be that’s why she can’t say no to him… They were talking when Raavi heard sound of his snoring, her bhootnath slept while talking to his girlfriend… If someone else is at his place she must have killed that person… But, she knows how hardworking he is? He must have worked all night that’s why slept soon…

Next Evening

The store is filled with customer… Shiva had promised Chipkali that today they will go to her flat and take her essentials from there… But it’s getting late also he won’t be free at least for an hour… “Chipkali… Shayad nahi ho paayega… Aaj Gaumbi ko Bhabhi ko le ke Doctor ke paas jaana padha aur yeh Dev bhi kahin nazar nahin aa rahaa…. Kaka hai nahi mujhe dukaan dekhni hogi tujhe tera samaan khud hi laana padega” Shiva said in sad tone… He really want to spend time with her… But right now he is struck between his duty and love… And he must choose his shop…

Arre koi nahi… Tu kaam kar le… Hum na raat mein milte hai ussi park mein jis mein tu aur main” Raavi stopped and tried to find words “Boyfriend aur Girlfriend bane the… Tu isme sharmaa kyun rahi hai… Chal theek hai raat mein milte hai phir” Shiva smiled and thank his stars that he got a girl like her, she understands his work and ready to adjust her schedule for him… He is indeed lucky, Dev has told him that how Rishita always get angry when he was not on time… But here he was the lucky one to got his Chipkali… Also, she let go the matter when he slept while she was talking on phone and she indeed call him cute... "Sweet Dreams... Mera Kharaata(snore) Pandya... Itni boring hoon main ki baat karte karte so gaya" her message from last night he read it more than 200 times from morning...

Soon, Dev came back… And Shiva checked his watch there is still a lot of time… Chipkali may have reached there as of now… He just have to sped up and surprise her… Shiva took his bike keys and rushed towards her flat…

Raavi went with BJ to her flat… She has packed all the stuff already in boxes just have to call rickshaw and send them off… BJ is constantly giving her looks, he wanted to know the complete story as he got the masala that finally his ship sails and #SHIVI are official couple… She tried to run away but at last fed up of his acts and turned to him “Kya janna hai aapko ab? Maine bataaya to ki Shiva aur main ab GF BF hai”…

Bas itna… Arre love story mein spices naam ki bhi cheez hoti hai… Arre kaise bane tum couple yeh bataa… Usne kaise propose kiya tujhe… Ya pehle tune propose kiya… Ya tune usse bataa diyaa ki tu usse pyaar karti hai… Aur tujhe pyaar ka realization kaise hua? Kab hua ? Aur hua to mujhe kyun nahi bataaya” BJ started his questionnaire while Raavi is feeling irritated she is still confused with her feelings… She is a Dobi for sure but whatever she had, she wanted it to be discussed with Shiva and Shiva only… May be he is the only person who can limelight the feeling unshed… BJ continues questioning her and it is making her agitated and in anger she responded “Nahi karti main pyaar Shiva se… Koi realization nahi hua hai mujhe… Vo bas, in heat of the moment nikal gaya tha mere muh se pan vo Gadheda usse sach maanne lagaa… Aur uska dil todne ki himmat nahi thi mujh mein”…

Shiva heard her sentence… He just about to enter to her flat, the smile he had in his face is vanished it seems his entire world trembles on… All the hopes, dreams he made from yesterday are nothing… This Chipkali, not only left him at alter… She did exactly same with him what his brother did few months back… He can’t be here… Not for now , at least… He kept the rose he had for her at her entrance and went from there void of any expression, void of any feelings….

Kya bakwas kar rahi hai… Tu bhi jaanti hai ki pasand karti hai tu usse… Haan, ho sakta hai utna pyaar na ho abhi but atleast apne confession ko aise mat bol” BJ shouted he raised his voice in front of her for the first time in his life… She was always as his younger sister… He felt that she is wrong for marrying a wrong person when she is meant for someone else, still she lead her marriage but after that he felt proud when she put all the pieces together and worked for her life and future and finally when everything is in track she is hell of confused of having a person in her life who loved her…

Main kya karoon Bhai Jaan… Darr lag rahaa hai… Aisa lag rahaaa hai jaise sab ek sapna hai aankhein kholungi to Shiva bhi sabki tarah peeth dikhayega aur chalaa jaayega… Acha lagta hai mujhe uske saath… Par kya? Kya main uske pyaar ko deserve bhi karti hu? Kya main jaanti bhi hoon ki pyaar kya hota hai? Shiva deserves a world BJ but I am not even a small particle… I never had anyone in my life who can tell me what’s right or wrong… What’s love or hate… To kaise kahun ki pyaar hai mujhe usse… Shiva bahut acha hai Bhai Jaan par kya main uske liye achi hu… Mujhe to kuch nahi aata… Kaise karungi uski koi expectations poori… Kaise bitaaungi uske saath poori zindagi… Logon ke taano ka darr… Samaaj ka darr…. Bahut peeche dhakel rahaa hai mujhe” Raavi said all she had in her heart… She doesn’t know anything her feelings are hell of confusing… She is scared of everything now… The only things she knows that she felt happiness with him and that’s why moving towards this direction is right choice…

Waqt de… Aur yeh baat ek baar usse keh… Meri jagah vo tujhe ache se samajh bhi sakta aur tera darr bhi dur kar sakta hai… Mujhe bas itna pataa hai that you guys are made for eah other… Just keep your hold tight off him, never ever let him go for anyone” Raavi nodded this is what she thought at first too… She wanted to share her insecurities with Shiva at night, she knows he will understand her and give her sometime… Why BJ has to trigger her and let her speak the words in a manner she never meant…

AT NIGHT

Raavi is all confused and trying to get herself ready to meet the Bhoot nath… Today, she will tell him every thing and sort this matter off… She took the red rose she got from her entrance it's a perfect gift for her bhoot naath he will be very happy... She is indeed lucky to find this flower at her door step... She saw him seated at the same bench, his back is faced to her… She run to his direction and covers his eyes from back… She can feel the tears, she can feel the stains of it… Her heart sank… Her bhootnath is crying… But why? And for how long… She took small steps and reached to his side… His eyes are all red, she can feel he is crying for hours… Shiva was always her support system… Always her shield… She never saw him broken once… But today, it is different… Everything is different… She is feeling as if she is not able to breathe anymore… This is the moment, she got to know her feeling for him is beyond words… She can see anything but not him broken… Not even in her wildest dreams…

Shiva trembles and still held her shoulder “Maine tujhe kabhi nahi bandha naa… To tu kyun nahi chali gayi… Aaj se… Aur abhi se tera mera Rishta Khatam… Sab khatam”…

Pleasure of love lasts for a moment

But Pain held you for the lifetime

Think before what you spoke to the loved ones

Your one sentence can shatter their entire soul...

Edited by Khoobsurat123 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Ok, I'll comment properly once I'm done crying Anupama😭... Aaj kyun kaand pe kaand ho raha hain😭?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yahan bhi MU?? Abhi abhi tog shuru hua that sab Kuch. 😢😢😢

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Posted: 4 years ago

Anu baby...read the last two parts now. The story took a turn...a heartbreaking turn💔

I loved the previous chapter...It was so cute and adorable. Raavi coming to meet the family and her whole interaction without any past baggage made me so happy. Krish is the cutest cupid and we finally got Shiva's feelings. I loved the fact that Raavi understood his unsaid feelings and readily accepted his proposal. Also their texting and the whole BF-GF thing was so cute!!1

Coming to the next chapter, I can very well understand Raavi's confusion. The pain of undergoing another heart break and she is fearing abandonment issues would come true. I liked the conversation between BJ and Raavi but Shiva heard it and is now heart broken💔

My heart goes out to both of them. Please update next part soon!!

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