Shivi FF: Agar Tum Saath Ho (Part 20- Pg.91) (complete) - Page 55

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was perfect❤❤

Raavi needs to respect Shiva😊

Also, needs to first understand what she wants and not go back and forth

Shiva has been thorough gentle throughout the time....Loved this Shiva

One of the best story of mine

Cant wait to read further🤗


Aww thank you!! 🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago

Ughhh great IF. My comment did not go through. As I woke up, even before checking my messages i read the entire part which made me late for the gym 😎😭😭😂😂😂😂😂



I loved it. I'm So glad SHIVA stood ground for himself. Raavi so so dumb tho. Which world is she living in, if she keeps telling her husband she wants the marriage to work, dress hot as ever, play with the man's hormones, kisses him and more, then pushes him off. Flat like that. A man does not play with that. Poor girl she has so much to learn.


As heartbreaking it is, i trust your writing. Can't wait for more. Thank you so much for this sanity FF

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya.2


Find your zen 🤣

But you are right. Good things come to those who wait 😉

You mean I have to wait even longer😭!!! Okies.... I'm just going to walk over to the closest India Post and courier you my heart💔. Send it back once you've fixed it, hmm?

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: mpks1

Raavi is proving to be worse than Raavi in the show whereas Shiva is proving to be the better than Shiva in the show😆

Saari zindagi friends bsn ke guzaar lete hai, kaun kehta hai aisa😆

Ravvi ko lagi shock treatment aur zor ka jhatka😆

She never understood Shiva and his pain. I am so glad Shiva told her that she doesn’t even respect him and informed about the divorce. Her words to him from before is coming back to haunt her.

I am eager to see what she is going to do to undo her stupidity😆


Only Raavi can friendzone her husband 🤣

I’m so pissed at Raavi in the show that this is how she came out when I started writing this one.


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Miyas_Scribbles

My heart hurts for both of them in this chapter.

It was a rude awakening Raavi needed.


Arghhh ab mujhe next update chahiye.. abhi ke abhi chahiye 😭


Aa jao phir! 🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ItsmePriya

Hi Ananya..❤️

First of all thank you for the super quick updates. I really look forward to reading this story. Really excites me more than the episodes. You are writing this so beautifully. Apologies for nagging you again and again with the update requests. I hope you don't mind it.


Coming to this chapter, It was amazing. I am so glad Shiva is strong with his stand. He is completely right that husband and wife cannot remain friends whole life. Raavi's going out with him everywhere dialogue made me want to bang her head on the wall. Dobi is still not come to terms as to what she wants. Glad she got a rude awakening in the form of the divorce papers. Finally Dobi is understanding at Kachua pace. This chapter was equally painful and heart breaking. My heart leans towards Shiva more.


Waiting to know what Raavi does to stop the divorce and how she is going to realise her feelings. Do update soon❤️🤗


Aww thank you so much!!! ❤️

I don’t mind at all.


My heart leans towards Shiva more too but time for this kachua to pick up speed 😆


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss_SR

What a beautiful piece of writing, I just read it all in one go...and want the next chapter already. I'm desperate to know what happens!


My heart really broke for Shiva 💔 but I'm loving how clear he is with his words. Raavi's feelings are alot more complicated, some of her actions defo don't match up to her some of her words. Divorce might give her that push, but I'm scared 😭. I really really love Sanjana! She's such a great addition, hoping she can help Raavi realise a few things as she has done before.


Can't wait to read the next chapter! ❤️


Aww thank you! ❤️🤗


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Sigh.. dobi Raavi. I kept thinking and wishing, now, Sanjana will come with her devine intervention to tighten some screws in Raavi's head. Like what the hell was she thinking while saying it? Don't blame Shiva at all for the Divorce thought with the words she used like I learn to deal with your touches. Ouch. It made it seem like he was forcing himself on her while she was an equal willing participant.


But finally, this is bringing some brain in her. Hopefully, she'll depend and Shiva will give up the divorce thought. Maybe this was the dhakka she needed to know what he means to her. But I still think that this dobi Raavi won't connect the dots of her heart and mind in this matter and probably still needs intervention from Sanjana.


Continue soon!


I tried to make Raavi figure it out herself but she couldn’t. So I had to bring in Sanjana 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ZaaraBB

Ughhh great IF. My comment did not go through. As I woke up, even before checking my messages i read the entire part which made me late for the gym 😎😭😭😂😂😂😂😂



I loved it. I'm So glad SHIVA stood ground for himself. Raavi so so dumb tho. Which world is she living in, if she keeps telling her husband she wants the marriage to work, dress hot as ever, play with the man's hormones, kisses him and more, then pushes him off. Flat like that. A man does not play with that. Poor girl she has so much to learn.


As heartbreaking it is, i trust your writing. Can't wait for more. Thank you so much for this sanity FF


Aww thank you so much for trusting me!! 🤗
Now go to the gym!!


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

You mean I have to wait even longer😭!!! Okies.... I'm just going to walk over to the closest India Post and courier you my heart💔. Send it back once you've fixed it, hmm?


It won’t be long. Also, India Post takes forever. I’ll make things better sooner than that. Promise ❤️


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