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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update


Was eagerly waiting for maan sharing his problem but he didn't ☹️


Geet asked clearly still when maan didn't open up geet was disappointed but still geet understand maan

U made geet too much understanding wife 🙈

Lucky maan


Maan determined to bring mansi n complete his family 👍


Geet bring back naughtiness in their life

Love their convo 💓


Geet surprised with maans bossy behavior 🤔


Eagerly waiting for maans surprise

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet realize she actually hurting Maan asking about his problem bz his problem might related to past and Maan cleared her when he confess his love

Maan feel happy and he don't want to hurt her he loved her and want his family safe

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Posted: 4 years ago

Good part

I hope maan ko manshi mil jaaye

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great part

So happy with maans this step

Cont soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part – 54

Maan doesn’t come back for a long time…

Its almost lunch time but there is no sign of Maan…

Geet keeps waiting for him..

Where is he? File lekhe kahan gayab ho gaya? Aaj koi meeting bhi hai…

Adi comes to meet Geet then…

Adi: Geet, Geet

Geet is not in a good mood…

Geet: kya hai Adi sir? Aapka file bhi mere paas hai kya?

Adi: ha ha ha ha ha, tumme kya hua?

Geet: mujhe kuch nahi hua, aapke boss Mr. MSK ko kuch ho gaya

Adi: sahi hai Geet

Geet: kya?

Adi: warna Maan sir tumme store room jaake purane files ko dhoondhne kyun kehte?

Geet: ye aap kya keh rahe ho Adi sir?

Adi: abhi abhi Maan sir ne mujhse kaha

Geet: Maan sir kahan hai?

Adi: kahin bahar gaye hai, abhi mujhe call kiya tha

Geet: uss upar wale kamrein mein jaake kya file dhoondhna hai?

Adi gives a list….

Geet: nahi nahi, mein nahi jaoongi

It’s the only room on that floor and usually no goes upstairs alone…

Pinky has said people hear strange noises over there…

Adi: toh tum hi Maan sir ko bathado

Geet: mein?

Adi: haan Geet, mein kaise keh sakta?

Geet: teek hai, aane do unko

Geet waits for Maan…

Maan comes back after a while…

Maan: tum abhi tak yahan kya kar rahi ho Geet?

Geet: woh mujhe yahan bahut kaam hai

Maan: mujhe patha ki yahan tumme mujhe gurne ke alawa koi zaroori kaam hota hi nahi

Geet: kya?

Maan: mujhe ye files do gante mein chahiye

Geet: par mein akele kaise jaa sakti?

Maan: toh mein ek kaam karta hoon, mere sare appointments cancel karke tummare madat karne aatha hoon

Geet: haan

Maan: aur mein ye name plate bhi badal detha hoon, MSK, Geet’s personal assistant, teek hai

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh jao

Geet: mein Pinky ko lekhe jaathi hoon

Maan: aur Adi ko bhool gayi?

Geet: haan, Adi sir bhi aathe toh kaam jaldhi ho jayega

Geet is happy to go with her friends… Geet tries to leave fast…

Maan: Geeeet

Geet stops and turns back…

Maan: tum akhele jaoogi, tumme koi madat nahi karega, samjhi tum?

Geet: dhust danav

Geet leaves slamming the door behind her…

Geet goes straight to Pinky…

Geet looks upset…

Pinky: toh Geet, tum sach mein upar jaa rahi ho?

Geet: aur kya kar sakti?

Pinky: lagtha hai ki Maan sir aaj bahut gusse mein hai

Geet thinks that maybe he is angry for her stunts in the morning…

Geet: haan Pinky, ab mein kya karoon?

Pinky: babaji se dua karo ki upar koi na ho aur jaldi kaam karam karke wapas aajao

Geet: ji babaji, aap mere saath haina?

Geet goes upstairs…

Its dark there…

Geet: koi hai?

There is complete silence…

Geet: halo, koi hai toh bathao, mein chali jaoongi, aap ko disturb nahi karoongi

Geet moves in and switches on the torch…

She sees a figure standing right there…

Geet screams…. “Maaaaaan, mujhe bachao, bhoot bhoot”

That figure comes near her and she can see that it’s not a bhoot, he closes her mouth with his hands… “chup bilkul chup”…

Its none other than Maan himself…

Geet freezes… .

Maan takes out a lighter and lights the candles kept there one by one…

The room is decorated with flowers and candles…

Maan has arranged a lunch date for her…

Geet is really surprised… Maan has done everything himself… he doesn’t want anyone to know about this... Lunch is from KM only, but all Geet’s favorite dishes…

Maan comes towards Geet to take her to the table…

Geet keeps staring him…

Maan whispers in her ears..

Maan: I love you Geet

Romantic music plays…

Geet is overwhelmed with joy.. so he has done all this to please her…

Maan: Geeet, tumme pasand nahi hai kya?

Geet: nahi nahi

Maan: toh kya dekh rahi ho?

Geet: aap utna bhi dhust danav nahi ho

Maan: achcha? ab toh tummara gussa kam hua na?

Maan is really concerned about hurting her in the morning…

Geet smiles…

Geet: mein aapse gussa nahi ho sakti hoon kya?

Geet goes and hugs him…

Geet: aap mere ho, mere Maan, aur mere Maan se gussa hone ka mujhe pura haq hai, haina?

Maan: haan, par mein tumme gussa nahi karna chahta hoon Geet

Geet: mein gussa nahi karti toh mujhe ye surprise nahi milthi haina?

Maan: ye toh kuch bhi nahi hai, tum nahi jaanthi ki mein kya kya karna chahta hoon tummare saath

Geet: kya karna chahte ho?

Maan lifts her and takes her to the table…

Geet keeps looking at him with excitement…

This man surely knows how to make her happy…

Maan makes her sit on the chair…

He goes and sits opposite her..

He keeps looking into her intoxicating eyes…

Geet tries to distract him…

Geet: Maan, I’m hungry

Maan comes out of his trance..

Maan: haan

Maan serves the food and they have a good time just watching each other…

Geet feels the chills by the change in the way he is staring her… Maan is at the verge of breaking his self-made restrictions….

Geet: Maan, aap aaise mujhe dekhte ho toh mein kaise kaaoon?

Ye Geet ne kitna achche mokhe ko apne haath se hi satyanas kar diya….

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update. Maan being more romantic and arranged lunch for Geet.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi...

Finally I read close to 15 updates by you in this story!


What a way to strike and get Maan and Geet married.

Dadi is there for everything!


And as regards Maan hesitancy over this marriage, I can understand.

But Geet wanted to feel important to Maan.. and finally Maan has relaised her love for him is not superficial but deep rooted.

Very nicely explained. Kudos!


And now Maan wants Geet to be around him all the time, what a better way than to get Geet to come to KC everyday!


I'm waiting for Maan to accept his love and Geet as his wife in front of KC employees! That would be the icing on the cake!


But Geet, the bubbly person she is, shouldn't be treated as an outsider after Maan reveals her status as his wife - even publicly!


Thanks for all the regular PMs!

I shall read now regularly!

So do send me the PMs as usual.


Waiting for the next update!

Cheers!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 54

Fantabulous update, well written

loved Maan's surprise for Geet

of cos he was worried if he hurt her

Geet assures him

lovely moments

she indeed tests his control


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awed update dear

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow ! Maan arrange lunch date In his office

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