The cracks in my home - a short story (part 3- pg. 6) - Page 2

Awesomely written. One SS to put everyone in their places.just wished to read couple more lines to see how Baa had to be rescued from Nari Shakti or Police Rakhi Dave called after the slapping incident 😂

What a Lovely start❤️❤️

Pls keep writing!!!

Wow it's beautiful.. Please continue...

lovely piece of writing 👏please do continue, I want to know how Anu puts her foot down and starts a new life.

Just a quick question.

Would everyone like to read the story in parts that will be updated frequently with a gap of 2-3 days or will like to read the 4-5 parts in bulk but with a gap of more days?

Also thank you for all the generous compliments. It definitely means a lot to me as a first time writer 😊

for me -parts that will be updated frequently please...I dont like waiting 😆

Originally posted by: hinz

for me -parts that will be updated frequently please...I dont like waiting 😆

Sure thing i will try not to keep you waiting for too long 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

Lovely start… eager to read more and I think this is what we are all waiting for in the serial. I would still like Anupamma to stick to her morals and her beliefs and would love to read how she is able to accept Anuj’s love and fall for him in turn. I would like Anuj to be there for her and for her to realise the love rather than a declaration from him.

Would love frequent updates.

Waiting for the next chapter!!!

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Frequent updates pls!!!!❤️

This is amazing because you could actually feel yourself in the room, the pain a person feels who has served these people for the last 26 years and still is the doormat for everyone to walk all over, cook, clean and not speak a single word against anyone because they are always right and you do not have no say in this family only obey.

This is very hard not to the hit the ♥️ and feel the pain🥳

please continue this storyline because need to read and understand the story going forward and have no patience waiting for next part