A Brother. - Sai-Samrat OS - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for next part ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Cold-Fire

This is so so so amazing, thank you for writing this .. after today's episode I ws itching to read some SamSai fic and this was just perfect!

Maybe write a part two as well, where Samrat actually punches Virat in the face🤣🤣

We would all love to see that won't we? Thank you so much for thinking that it's amazing. I'm glad it impressed you. I was itching for an extension to the episode as well and voila, we have the OS that you just read. Honestly, it was born out of the "key moment" in today's episode. I saw a brother there. As for the part 2, I think writing confrontations take a little energy especially when the causes of it are heavy. I can't make them look like straight up bashing, where Samrat is yelling his head off or I can't make it look like he's going easy on them. There's a perfect balance to be met (Slaving in the literary society at uni teaches you sooo many things 🤣🤣). Any advice would be more than welcome <3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: FoodieNaina

Beautiful OS ❤️

Instead of a repetitive accident track, they can actually plan such a beautiful SamSai track ❤️

But unfortunately, makers have no dimaag ☹️

Hahahaha..I'm really really happy that you think this is beautiful. Everyone has faults, and this OS was my attempt at two such souls finding a pure relationship. Thankyou for liking it. As for the 2nd part, I'm VERY eager to write it as well, given I have some free time and it's a weekend. But the open ending in this is a little dear to me. So I might write a different shot than making this a two part one.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

This is fantastically written!! Fabulous!👏👏👏

I teared up reading this! A brother... To be precise an elder brother was much needed for her! Mohit was there but Samrat being elder is more protective ,more powerful and this is emoted beautifully by this!!

My heart broke for the girl when she asked for fees! 🥺🥺🤧

LOVED THIS ONE!!!

Please do write such more OS soon😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: sairat07

This is fantastically written!! Fabulous!👏👏👏

I teared up reading this! A brother... To be precise an elder brother was much needed for her! Mohit was there but Samrat being elder is more protective ,more powerful and this is emoted beautifully by this!!

My heart broke for the girl when she asked for fees! 🥺🥺🤧

LOVED THIS ONE!!!

Please do write such more OS soon😳

Thank you very much for your generous opinion. I wanted to make the OS a little emotional, I'm glad it reached it's mark. Protective brothers are usually portrayed in a very macho, gun-weilding and physically strong manner. But sometimes all we need from a protective brother are few kind words and warmth.

As for Mohit, he has his own right in Sai's life and infact I was thinking of an OS with Samrat, Sai and Mohit's day out. Just the 3 of them. What say?

I'm really glad you loved this one.🤍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Thank you very much for your generous opinion. I wanted to make the OS a little emotional, I'm glad it reached it's mark. Protective brothers are usually portrayed in a very macho, gun-weilding and physically strong manner. But sometimes all we need from a protective brother are few kind words and warmth.

As for Mohit, he has his own right in Sai's life and infact I was thinking of an OS with Samrat, Sai and Mohit's day out. Just the 3 of them. What say?

I'm really glad you loved this one.🤍

Yeah dear! That would be so interesting!!

Please write soon!!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hey amazing OS... Please write the confrontation of Samrat with the family showing them their places.. Samrat and Sai stole the show today and do write more OS on them..

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

One more part of this please

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Will you continue it please 🥺🥺

It was so nice to read.... atleast someone in the house knows and treats her like a 19 year old....👏well done....

Please continue would love to read more on this...💜

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

One more awesome and superb OS.....

He played the right role of brother in helping her overcome her problems...

You are a awesome writer....

Keep writing more....

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