•ZDMN CC #1• Ziddi Namoone| Note on Pg 17 - Page 6

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Haan! Namoone se jhingur, promotion🤣

Originally posted by: TheRoadNotTaken

wow!! Itni jaldi😆

Ho jayenge, ye thread khatam hote hi🤣

Kya chal raha hai?

Fogg mat bolna🤣

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Ho jayenge, ye thread khatam hote hi🤣

Kya chal raha hai?

Fogg mat bolna🤣

Kuch nhi... IF ghoom rahi😆

Originally posted by: TheRoadNotTaken

how cliche🤣

Kuch nhi... IF ghoom rahi😆

I'm halfway through my OS, post karna ka mann hai lekin complete nahi ho raha😆

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

I'm halfway through my OS, post karna ka mann hai lekin complete nahi ho raha😆

https://youtu.be/yLI2k4Ffc8M

It won't. I'm already crying😆

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I can't figure out a good scene to show character depth or development without making it too serious/preachy.

I just want to show the brothers sharing a strong bond without making it a cliche. How is the question.

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

It won't. I'm already crying😆

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I can't figure out a good scene to show character depth or development without making it too serious/preachy.

I just want to show the brothers sharing a strong bond without making it a cliche. How is the question.

Originally posted by: TheRoadNotTaken

that would need some more information... or scenes between them for reader to get attach to the characters and the story... tab i guess it will get more cathartic 🤔

Yup. I'm looking for something like that. I feel abhi jitna likha hai kaafi superficial hai🤔

Originally posted by: DelusionsOfNeha

Yup. I'm looking for something like that. I feel abhi jitna likha hai kaafi superficial hai🤔

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You're a sweetheart😳