NEW FF Bike Race (open 2 all) - Page 5

heyyyyyyy!!!
WOW!!!!
jst rec all ov it!!
its AWSUM!!!!!!
plzzzz sum1 cont soon!
TC ash..

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

hey!!Thanks!!!why dont u cont?

No way!!! If I posted a part everyone would leave this topic!! 😆 I think it's better if you all (the talented people) write! 😆

Avanti

Wow Urmila and Priyanka! That was amazing!! 👏 I wish that would happen in the show as well!! 😕 Keep it up everyone!! 😳

Avanti

thanks evry1 for ur comments
i will cont
shashank came in ridz room
sh-beta tum abhi tak soyi nahi mujhe pata hai ki tum aaj ki baat ko lekar upset ho par sab kuch thik ho jaayega
ridz was actuaaly not listening to her father bt thinking why did armaan came to meet and all of a sudden how he became sweet she liked it,actually lovd it bt was confused 😕
sh-beta kya hua
ridz came out of her trance and was like-wo wo kuch kuch nahi papa
sh-thik hai beta ab so jao
next day in sanjeevani ridz went early and found armaan standing there
ar-riddhima mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
ridz-ha bolo armaan
bt then they saw atul coming
ar-yaha nahi break mein teracce mein milna



i hope u ppl liked it plz comment

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee continue as soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn as possibleeeeeeee.

avanti thanks for ur compliments and priyanka thanks for ur pm iam gonna continue iam sorry if it bore u
saying ridz to meet on terrace arman will vanish
at: hi ridhima anjali ko dheka kya
rahul enters
ra: arey anjali ki body guard wo debo ke saath he
at: omg us debo ko me nahi chodunga meri anjali ko mujhse koi nahi ..
ra[interrupts]: koi nahi par debo kar saktha jaldhi se chalo warna devdas banne ke liye ready ....
ri[cuts]: stop it guys atul di aise nahi karthi wo tho ek bacha he ab tum jaake apne duty shuru karo warna dr.keerthi se mujhe daant padengi
at: u r very sweet ridzi me aa raha hoon anjali and he goes
ra: ridhima jhi aap koi pareshaan dhik rahe ho
ri: kuch nahi rahul
ra: ok me chaltha hoon
ri: ok bye
in the break
ridz goes to terrace and sees arman is already waiting there
arman felt that ridz came and turned around[ back ground music asmani rang ho]
ri: arman wo mujhe yaha
arman[goes close to her]: mujhe tum se kuch kehna he
ri[moves lil back]: kya
ar[goes closer to her and ridz keeps on moving back finally he pins her to the wall]: wo and goes closer to her ear and removes the hair strand feeling his breath so close to her ridz closes her eyes
ri[melting]: ar.....arman
ar[keeps his finger on her lips]: shhhhhhh aaj mujhe kehne dho
now any one continue and iam very sorry for my mistakes

Wow Urmila!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 That was fantastic! 👏 Someone please continue soon! 😳

Avanti

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

Wow Urmila!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 That was fantastic! 👏 Someone please continue soon! 😳

Avanti

thanks a lot avanti y dont u continue now

Originally posted by: urmila_17

thanks a lot avanti y dont u continue now

I replied to your PM.. and I answered this question as well! 😆 We're at an intense part right now and I don't want such a horrible writer like myself to ruin this amazing FF! 😆 😳

Avanti

👏 👏 👏 .....urmi di i luvd ur part as always......it was so cute...well done 👏