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Posted: 4 years ago
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It took me a minute or so to realise that this was from Kabir's POV. *Silly me*


This was nicely penned. RiAnsh moments were too lovely and cute.. aww 😊🥰


Loved how Ridz didnt beg infront of Kabbu,and,instead,threw him out of her life.


Awesome and beautiful.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Riansh moments were so cute. Aww😍

but you made Aryan her brother😂😂. Poor him in the show he did not got any girl. Even in the stories no writer gave him a girlfriend.


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Originally posted by: Anika_PreRish

It took me a minute or so to realise that this was from Kabir's POV. *Silly me*


This was nicely penned. RiAnsh moments were too lovely and cute.. aww 😊🥰


Loved how Ridz didnt beg infront of Kabbu,and,instead,threw him out of her life.


Awesome and beautiful.

That was intentional...😈😈😈

Thank you 😘😘😘

She is a strong girl....💪💪💪

Thank you 😘😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: 07RB

Riansh moments were so cute. Aww😍

but you made Aryan her brother😂😂. Poor him in the show he did not got any girl. Even in the stories no writer gave him a girlfriend.


Thank you 😘😘


Yaar if I can make Kabutar her father for one of my stories..... Then Aryan as her brother is a small thing....😂😂😂

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: watersanon_Rose

NOTE - I hope everyone reading this OS likes it. One request from my side… do comment.

BACKDROP - Not related to the show storyline. Based on a song called ‘Amnesia’ by 5SOS.

I looked at her.

Her brown eyes sparkled with happiness as she smiled broadly, her hands linked with him, not me. Her long, black hair swayed as she shook it to the side. He looked at her mischievously, Riddhima squealing as she was swept off her feet.

"VANSH RAI SINGHANIA, PUT ME DOWN NOW!" Riddhima hit Vansh's back multiple times but he didn't budge.

"Sorry, Riddhu. I can't let you walk around in these heels." He flashed her a grin, Riddhima groaning as she pounded on his back with less force.

"Don't call me that! And I'm capable of walking around with heels!"

"Who says?"

"I say!"

"But I don't," Vansh caught Riddhima’s lips with his, Riddhima melting into his love.

I clenched my fists, seeing red everywhere. But I couldn't beat him up. I don't have a right. I left her. I fell for someone else, even though I didn't love her as much as I thought. Riddhima and I broke up in the most depressing way possible and guess who took care of her? Vansh!

Hooray, let's celebrate!

"Riddhima, I shall forbid you to walk around with these big heels on your feet," Vansh smirked as he took off his shoes and placed them in Riddhima’s tiny, small feet that were bare after removing her heels. I never did that. Jealousy and anger flashed through me, though, whenever Riddhima smiles, I calm down.

"Thorough gentleman, yeah?" She teased as Vansh put her down. He took her by the waist as they descended down the narrow corridor, laughing and talking, stealing kisses here and there.

She's happy. I'm supposed to be. I have a girlfriend! But I'm not happy. Ragini’s alright and she's pretty but I'm not sure I want to date her. I wish I had amnesia so I could forget about these stupid little things. I remember the day we broke up.

FLASHBACK

I slammed the door shut, picture frames wobbling with the force. I can't believe Ragini and I kissed! I have a girlfriend!

"Kabir," Riddhima stood, her brown eyes intimidating, yet they were hurt. Riddhima didn't show any emotion, just a blank stare.

"What is it, babe?" I asked, trying to shrug off my fear of Riddhima finding out that I kissed Ragini.

"Don't 'babe' me, I know what you did!" She cried, crossing her arms, tears threatening to spill.

"What did I do?"

"Don't act innocent,"

"I'm not acting innocent, I don't know what you're on about!"

"BULLSHIT!" She roared, making me flinch, but that didn't seem to bother her. Tears were free falling from her face, her voice trembling as she spoke.

"I saw you and Ragini kissing!"

I stared at her, defeated. She found out. She knew.

"Ragini texted me and said, 'Hey, Riddhima! Guess what? Kabir’s my boyfriend! He said he broke up with his girlfriend to be with me! Poor girl.' And I said, 'Oh, really?' Care to explain?" She looked at me, her eyes begging me that this was some sick joke. I had no answer.

Ragini had no idea who I was dating. Everything Ragini said to Riddhima was true.

"Leave," Riddhima choked on the word, pointing to the door behind me. I looked at her in shock. "LEAVE!" She yelled, falling to the floor as she sobbed. I ran out of the house. I ran from her life. I ran to Ragini.

FLASHBACK OVER

Now Riddhima is happy. I regret breaking her heart. I deserved to get a beating from Aryan. I deserved to get punched by Vansh. I deserved to get slapped by Ishani and Sia. I deserve to get ignored by Riddhima. But she didn't deserve to get her heart broken. Especially by me. (AN - Here Aryan is Riddhima’s brother)

I wish I had amnesia. I wish this was just a sick dream. I wish I could forget. I am not alright.

I wish.

THE END

Announcement - I have 2 Riansh FFs already written. I will start posting them here from next week. One will be updated on Mondays and the other on Thursdays. Keep a lookout for my next post....


I thought Riddhima Vansh ko bhul gayi but nice Kabir ko suffer hote hue dekh kare. Waise even i am thinking of making a time table for my stories🙈🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raveena0605


I thought Riddhima Vansh ko bhul gayi but nice Kabir ko suffer hote hue dekh kare. Waise even i am thinking of making a time table for my stories🙈🙈

This confusion was intentional...😏😏😏😏


Soch lo.... Time table ko follow karna padega.... Maine to isiliye pehle hi poori story likh daali ...🤭🤭🤭🤭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: watersanon_Rose

This confusion was intentional...😏😏😏😏


Soch lo.... Time table ko follow karna padega.... Maine to isiliye pehle hi poori story likh daali ...🤭🤭🤭🤭

Han woh problem to hain.. 🙊🙊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow, this was a good one! Riddhima being forever happy with Vansh


Tch, Kabir deserved it.

Bada pachtaoge, bada pachtaoge..


RiAnsh sharing kisses, and Vansh being caring Aur kya chahiye?❤️


Loved it, Rose!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aryan riddhu ka bhai 😂😂

I always wanted aryan and riddhu to be cool devar bhabhi jodi . Chlo idr bhai se kam chla lete hai



this was amazing . End main jakr bta chla acha kabir ki baat o ryi thi main aise thi kiska dil toota vansh ?? Riddhu ??





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