Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 79

Hey hapc , sorry don't know your name.

Your OS was nice. It would have been half-assed if the fight was terminated half-way. So, I liked how your OS had a sense of continuity. I loved how you expressed, Raghav begging all the people in his life to stay. I also loved he sort of gave Pallavi a ultimum. It was a nice read. Let's see what happens next. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Hey hapc , sorry don't know your name.

Your OS was nice. It would have been half-assed if the fight was terminated half-way. So, I liked how your OS had a sense of continuity. I loved how you expressed, Raghav begging all the people in his life to stay. I also loved he sort of gave Pallavi a ultimum. It was a nice read. Let's see what happens next. 👍🏼

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

That was a perfect morning. And that build up to that cliffhanger was just.... a build up. 😆 That was nice. ❤️

Now, what will he do?

I prefer swallowing by the ground, blowing up would be messy. 😆

Thank you! ❤️

Raghav has a lot of groveling to do🤣

Yes, messy indeed but boy does he deserve it 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I have doubts. Pallavi already knew that there was a divorce papers, right? So why is she so upset now? 😕

Was that fake papers she got when she was in d house?

She would have wanted the papers to be destroyed but finding it in his study like some kind of souvenir after they got intimate was a major shock to her.

Hope this clears your doubt. 😊

Originally posted by: JarOfCookies

She would have wanted the papers to be destroyed but finding it in his study like some kind of souvenir after they got intimate was a major shock to her.

Hope this clears your doubt. 😊

Yep. That did clear my doubt. Thanks ❤️

Originally posted by: missFiesty_69

Hey Hinaa aka evilxbalaa,

I found your drabble interesting. It was a little disheartening to see the fight and misunderstandings between RaghVi but yeah it can not be flowers and roses all the time. Loved your description of distressed Raghav. The OS was meant to create angst and I dare say that yours managed to convey it more than effectively. 👏

Vera - missFiesty69

Wow thanks Vera

Sorry about the angst yaar...I was asked to show my evilness while writing the part🤣

Originally posted by: Shri_12

That was superb Hinna. They fight. The angst was great. Loved it

Thank you

Glad you liked it😳

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Wow thanks Vera

Sorry about the angst yaar...I was asked to show my evilness while writing the part🤣

Lovely writing👏

Originally posted by: evilxbalaa

Wow thanks Vera

Sorry about the angst yaar...I was asked to show my evilness while writing the part🤣

Koi baat nahi. I knew you were under performance pressure. But the OS was really good.👏

Originally posted by: TheRoadNotTaken

angst for me is the best part... it intensifies everything

Lovely writing👏

I love angst too! Why dont you write the next part?😆

Thank you!