Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 72

Originally posted by: hapc

@evilxbalaa: It was definitely not a disappointment. I liked the way you shifted the tone from comedy to serious. Something about the way Raghav asked Pallavi about what happened warmed my heart. The entire part felt very sweet.

@MsPrez: 😆😆 Poor Raghav. Pallavi tortured him for a minute. The ending though☺️ Set up for some romantic parts to follow.

@christobelle: ☺️ That was hot. I really liked how Raghav was gentle with her and taking her permission. It was really steamy but also not cheap so hats off for that.👏

@WildestDreams: Once again very steamy but not cheap. I liked how Pallavi was bold in this part. And the ending a simple I love you is enough for these two.❤️

Thank u so much for liking it!!

I really didn't want to again delay off as I have always dropped them in bed

But then left off !! So I wanted to make sure it happens😆

Originally posted by: Mihika

You both have my heart❤️

I didn't want it to finish but continue ni rakh sakte warna last time wala case ho jayega😆

Beautiful and so intense....👏

Thank u mihika for liking it ❤️

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Christo 🤗

Finally they consummate ☺️

It was romantic. Great drabble

Thank u for liking it ❤️❤️❤️

Thanks to all who have liked my drabbles

If I forgot someone's tag , plz forgive me ppl

Originally posted by: hapc

@unicornwriter: Pallavi was on a roll. Loved how she gave it back to Mandhaar and VD. I liked how she even yelled at Raghav for not telling her about the plan and finally they came together.❤️ Aai is obviously always amazing. My favourite part was the decision to bring in Ved. Love the twist 👏

@MissWiseUnicorn: Ahahah Ved called Pallu BhabhiJi. 😆 I liked how Pallu was the mastermind here. Smart and Brave. Also Ved.. brilliant character and I liked the role you gave him in your story. But what is his Achilles heel? Hmm. Hope the next writers clarify.

@MsPrez: You're the queen of tying things up without dragging. Loveddd how you exposed Mandhaar and brought out the Devyani's death truth in one part. Finally RaghVi can relax.

@ReemShah: Finally RaghVi admitted their mistakes. I'm glad they didn't pretend like it was only one of their faults and then they took ownership and then the romance☺️ They really need a vacation.

@Mihika: Finally a funny part😆Calling her puffer fish was so Raghav and he totally deserved to be chased with a wiper. But it was the only thing he could do so that he could get to the meeting so I understand.😆 Daily exercise also complete.

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

Hi Tanya 🤗

Good , trying to catch up with drabbles here 🤣

You 🤣🤣

Tumne bhool bhool apni life ka motto bana liya kya 🤪🤣

Originally posted by: Radiant_Eyes_

She saw this in games thread too 🙈🤣

Beee I’m not joking this time

Sach main sleep deprivation ke wajah se ho gaya 😪🥺

You know what, ab mujhe samajh aa raha hai why I love you so much

You're a vampire 😎🤣🤣

Raat ko jaagna, din mein sona 🤣🤣

Why is no one resing? Who hasn't contributed yet? I'm waiting for the next part.

Originally posted by: hapc

Why is no one resing? Who hasn't contributed yet? I'm waiting for the next part.

Maine toh apna quota pura kar lia hain😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

🐝 , you need to see this. 🤣🤣

See, who she is calling Tanya.... 🤣🤣

Bee you write na....reserve the spot na please😛