ShiVi Drabble: Sharam - Page 3

Ashuuu this was painfully beautiful 💜

Loved it 💜

Originally posted by: nafees5

Caught you in 26 secs

caught her in 5 hours😔

wow...........beautifully written.......

problem, hurt usko bhi hai but he has handled it so badly that we cant help ourselves but get angry at him.......

he did this to her.........

Thanks, Ashu for the tag! This was lovely. Loved Raavi's reply to put things in perspective for Shiva in his language.

Originally posted by: nafees5

Heheh none taken😊😆

I commented here because I felt that I hadn't praised her enough when I proofread it😳

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.

hello meri jaans 🤗

I'm sure everyone has seen me around the edt, trolling shiva and his spb behavior - but I can't help but think what kind of toll it must be taking on raavi 😭

I know my last drabble, some wanted a continuation of it because they didn't approve of shiva's anger but to be honest it's very hard for me to continue drabbles since I write them with the intention of stopping there 😆 so in place of that - here's raavi's point of view 😳

special thanks to Nairu and Sara for proofreading it 🤗

thoughts? suggestions? comments?

would love to read them 😳

caught you last

thank you so much for the tag tho 🤪

this is still beautiful & exactly what I want to happen on the show 🥺

but the writers would most likely find a way to screw it up 🤡

love you for this bub 🥺❤️

write more na :))

Beautifully written ❤️ Felt like reading a poem… I really feel Shiva has been rude to her … but on her part she never stood up against her friends in his defence, guess one strong statement by her, would have put matters to rest… Anyway Ashu this was superb

Amazing👏

I hope in the show to she opens her damn mouth

This made me choke back a sob😭

Poor poor Raavi. As much as I love my baby boy, he did her wrong. Cannot, in my right mind, justify his behaviour.😵

Beautifully portrayed sweetie❤️🤗

PS: I'm still waiting for an update on your other stories😉😛

This was heart-wrenchingly beautiful 💔 I could feel all of Raavi's pain and her dialogues really made my heart break 😭

What a wonderful piece of work!❤️