Sabherwal Series: Shot #5 updated Pg24 (27/10) - Page 6

Loved this chapter!

I really liked how you showed Kitty, Bebo taking baby steps towards accepting Anokhi as part of the family.

It was also nice seeing Gayatri stepping up for her daughter. 😊

Kitty & Bebo!

Well, i actually felt for them in this shot. They aren't the imps here.

BeMol's story got a closure. AA was a freak, ended as a freak. Served him well.

Bebo's heartbreak😭

Kitty actually won an essay contest, national level👏

Out of these two twins, i preferred Kitty. She was less of an...antagonist.

N my, my...Yash! In Delhi! Celebrating his success😳

Voted for Yash and Kanchan to come up in next shot!

Wow.. beautiful vignettes Akshu, they perfectly show us how Bebo-Kitty would’ve been , with their changing dynamics with Anokhi. Like you rightfully said it will be bittersweet relationship. You showed these slow yet progressive changes in them quite well!🙌❤️

Thank you for tagging me.

What I liked about the twins.

They start to value themselves through Anokhi's actions.

They realise that to be given any value in the family, then need to work at it just like Anokhi does. You are given your due only when you make an effort towards improving yourself, improving your equation with your family and improving your attitude towards your close ones.

We saw in the episodes that their aim was always to look down upon Anokhi and to belittle her. But every time it has led to them getting scolded or punished.

Slowly when you live with someone who is good who means no harm to you, you have a tendency to also imbibe those values. Bebo finally realised that Anmol is not for her if he does not respect her wishes.

I also liked the allusion the girls make to not having been given any importance as compared to their brothers.

It is obvious that despite being spoilt rotten, at some point in time they must have felt the pain of rejection/non recognition because they were not the son.

I also liked the fact that Gaytri has started coming out of her shell because she cares for her children and would do everything to make them feel loved.

Definitely a good closure for the girls and their relationship with Anokhi.

Wow...nice one...very realistic...thanx for closing this loop too...always will regret that the makers were unable to continue the arc of these awesome characters the way they had slowly been developing them...so thank you again for your take on it...👍😊💖🌹

Akshu!!! Beautiful update!!

I loveeee that you gave the girls personalities. Also showing small snippets of both was effective storytelling. I enjoyed also reading Tejvi and Gayatri. The Bebo/Anmol track would have been a nice track to see onscreen, but it was good that you didn't try to redeem Anmol as a good guy.

I'm sure the twins grew up with having their bhaiyyas being doted on for being boys and felt discriminated against. So it makes sense that with their lack of empathy, they went after Kanchan.

I want Kanchan and Yash first! Curious to see how you will write their relationship in association with ShaKhi especially because of the support Kanchan provided to their story.

Loved Bebo-Kitty's bittersweet relation with Anokhi. 😘 Its gd that at least you didn't whitewash them at a go. Yes they can't change their nature, bt they are trying to be cordial for the sake of co-existence and their bhai.

Anmol is quite sure that Shaurya was the one running behind Anokhi 😝. Romeo Professor ki kahani. 🤣

A last Gayatri took a stand for her daughter. Wish she hd opened her mouth in the serial 🙄.

Looking fwd to your next update.

The twins relation with anokhi was bitter but they gave it a try to improve. U have narrated it very nicely. Would love to read more of their equation with anokhi ....

I would vote for yash n kanchan

Akshu 🤗girl this piece of work has my heart, I am sandwiched with ample of emotions inextricably linking every dots as to how the character dynamics and shaping of the twins are set in, I admired it babe!

This Sabherwal series is intruding me as days go by

Come on! Mujhe next Yash and Kanchan chaiye, their relationship framework was skeletal in the show, u give me the essence of it, I don’t want Babli and Ahir, ShauHir shippers hai, loyalty ek dum! So no to that pair.

I want my devar Sabherwal and devrani Sabherwal’s love story

Much love to you

Jen

Wow nice update.

Thankyou for keeping betty real ,as they keep oscillating between being their normal wicked self to being sweet to their bhabhi.

With time they will change as they get to know the real anokhi and you have beautifully potrayed it.