Entwined RaghVi Drabbles 2.0 ~ Readers Desk 🎊❤🥳 - Page 60

Your drabble starts out calm, a second build up to the next drabble with an exciting breathtaking ending. Will they or wont they kiss..

The hesitation and tension Siddhesh feels is clear and his loving wife is there to support and balance him. Hopefully a mano a mano conversation will follow between them.

Raghav is in full realisation of his feelings for her and her feelings for him. Pallavi. But with what expectation did her arrive at the Sawant's doorstep and what is it that Pallavi wants? Interesing...

Very cute and realistic, the embarrassment Pallavi feels in showing such pictures.. we all can probably relate.

Pallavi closed her eyes in anticipation.. and I am in anticipation to read further 😉

You have managed well to describe several elements.

We have now, for the very first time received a reference to Pallavi's parents. A picture even. Would love to know more about her life, her past, her connection with her brother.

I am really liking Pawani's part.. Currently, she is that silent force, the balance between the four of them.

And now Mandar might come in between them again.. or not.. I can recall the promise she had made:

"I have renounced my responsibilities with the Deshmukh's because whatever pains you will never find its way into our lives again."

Looking forward to read more (tomorrow perhaps).

Hey MissPrez , I am sorry to disturb you.. the drabble is not updated yet and it has been a day. We are all eagerly waiting to read your story. Please do write!!! I understand you are busy!!

Done dona don guysssssssssssss🥳

Sorry for being so late! I was occupied with birthday stuff😳

Enjoy! And let me know your thoughts

Aajao guys! Drabble padhke jute-chappal marne😆

Originally posted by: MsPrez

Aajao guys! Drabble padhke jute-chappal marne😆

Mandar ka kissa khattam 😲

Nice one

Aacha tha 👍🏼

Mandaar gaya matlab RaghVi ka ada masla khatam!! So I'm very happy with that one!!😳

I liked how Ved betrayed Mandarin for Pallu 😆

Let's see aage kya hota hai!!!

Reem, you have resed 🥳

Waiting

Really Nice one Prez---I always love how you connect backstory and piece it together in your work

So Mandaar is out of the loop finally

very sweet and much needed, they did it so simply and lovingly , the depth of their love just came through.