oh god these evil trio
uff
poor shaan
please do continue
bye sumi
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oh god these evil trio
uff
poor shaan
please do continue
bye sumi
Good build up .keep writing
Oh dear! Hope Shaan is ok...
Will try to update soon
Oh no. Hope nothing happens to Shaan.
Continue soon.
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Chapter - 3
aastha, anokhi, gayatri and kanchan reach hospital. At reception
anokhi : excuse me ma'am...abhi thodi derr pehle ek accident case aaya h yahan pe vo..
receptionist : yes ma'am vo OT mei hain yahan se sidha jake right
anokhi : thank you
sab ot ke taraf jate hain
they all are waiting outside OT in the meantime devi, alok and tej also arrives
tej : kya kaha doctor ne kaisa hai shaan
gayatri : pata nahi bhaisahab abhi tak doctor bahar nhi aaye hain
tej sees aastha whose condition is miserable and anokhi is consoling her.
tej signs devi to go to aastha...devi goes near aastha and consoles her
devi: aastha tum fikar mat karo shaan ko kuch nahi hoga
itne mei wahan ek nurse aati hai aur anokhi se kehti hai ma'am hamein consent form pe sign chaie tabhi hum aage ka procedure shuru kr skte hain
anokhi : theek hai aap laiye mai sign kr deti hoon
nurse : ma'am apka unse relation
anokhi : mai unki daughter- in- law hoon
nurse : okk ma'am...ma'am apko kuch advance bhi submit karna hoga
alok : chaliye mei apke saath chalta hoon aap mujhe bta dijiye kitni payment submit krni h
alok nurse ke saath chala jata hai
doctor shaan ka treatment shuru krte hain
aastha ka ro ro ke bura haal hai...itne mei shaurya bhi wahan pahunchta hai
anokhi ke pass jati hai
shaurya : anokhi dad kaise hain...kya kaha doctor ne aur ye accident kaise hua????
anokhi : abhi dad ka treatment chal raha hai PS...mujhe bahut darr lag rha h aur maa ki bhi haalt bahut kharab hai tbse bs roye hi ja rhi hain and start crying...shaurya hugs her
shuarya then looks at aastha who is silently crying by keeping her head on gayatri's shoulder...shaurya goes to her
shuarya: maa...
aastha shaurya ko dekhti hai aur uske gale lg jati hai
aastha : shaurya shaan vo use she can't complete her sentence because of crying
shaurya : shh maa..chup ho jaiye dad ko kuch nhi hoga hum sabka pyaar hai na unke saath unhe kuch nahi hoga aap fikar mat kijiye
Thodi derr baad sb OT ke bahar khade hote aur doctor ke bahar aane ka wait kr rhe hote hain
anokhi dekhti hai ki shaurya side mei akela khada hai... anokhi uske pass jati hai aur uske kandhe pe haat rakhti hai... shuarya looks at jer with wet eyes
anokhi : PS abhi apne maa ko kaha na ki dad ke saath hum sabka pyaar hai unhe kuch nahi hoga to phir aap khud
shaurya : jaanta hoon anokhi but mujhe bahut darr lag rha h...pta hai bachpan mei mai jab bhi beemar hota tha na to dad aur mom puri raat meri lie jagte the aur mai itne nakhre krta tha na...dad hi ek hote the jo mujhe sambhal pate the...mai dad ke bina ek minute bhi nhi reh pata tha (in guilty tone ) aur dekho itne saalon se unhi dad ko maine itne dukh dia hai..unse sidhe muh baat nhi karo har cheej ka gunhegaar unhe aur mom ko maanta raha...jab dad mere pass the maine unki kadar nhi kari aur aaj dekho dad iss haal mei...mujhe lagta hai dad mujhse naraaz hai and starts crying
anokhi hugs him and says
anokhi : shaurya bacche kitni bhi glti kyu na kr lein maa baap unse kabhi naraaz nhi ho skte...aap dekhna papa bilkul theek ho jayenge
tbhi ot ki lights off hoti hai aur doctor bahar aate hain
Shaurya : doctor dad kaise hain...vo theek to hai na
Tej : haan doctor sahab kaisa hai shaan
Doctor : ji vo.....
TO BE CONTINUED
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Chapter-4
Tej : haan doctor sahab kaisa hai shaan
Doctor : ji vo.....
shaurya : kya hua doctor bolie na dad kaise hain???
doctor : dekhiye humne operation to kar dia hai but kyunki unke head mei major injury thi to aane wale 36 hours unke lie bahut critical agr unhe hosh nhi aata to kuch bhi ho skta hai even unke hosh mei aane ke baad bhi hum kuch nhi keh skte ki injury ka kya impact hoga
ye sunke aastha shock hoke girne wali hoti hai tbhi gayatri use sambhal leti hai
gayatri : bhabhi sambhaliye khud ko
shaurya :(in angry tone ) kuch bhi ho skta hai ka kya matlab aur hosh mei aane ke baad kya hoga matlab....apko doctor kisme banaya are apse ek patient nhi sambhal rha
anokhi : PS please shaant ho jaiye
shaurya : kya shaant ho jaun anokhi tumne suna nhi inhone kya kha are kis baat ke doctor hai ye
doctor : dekhiye humne apni taraf se puri koshish ki hai lekin head mei major injuries h...hum abhi kuch nhi keh skte ki uspa kya impact hoga patient ko agr hosh nhi aata to vo coma mei bhi ja skte hain ( everyone gets shocked after listening this) vaise hum abhi thodi derr mei unhe icu mei shift kr denge
doctor : maine inki report America ke ek neurosurgeon ko bheji hai dekhte hain unka kya response aata hai
tej : doctor sahab kya hum shaan se mil skte hain
doctor : dekhiye mai sirf aap mei ek ko hi Milne ki permission de skta hoon...hum unhe icu mei shift kr dein phir aap mei se koi ek unse mil skta hai
ye kehke doctor wahan se chle jate hain
thodi derr baad shaan ko bahar leke aate hain...everyone cries after watching the condition of shaan
aastha : shaan....shaan please aankhein kholo...please shaan
shaurya aastha ko hug krta hai
tej aur alok are also crying aakhir unhe shaan se banti nahi aur na hi unke point of views match hote hai but hai to shaan unka bhai hi to vo apne bhai ko aisi situation mei kaise dekh sakte hain
shaan ko icu mei shift kia jata hai
shaurya : maa ek kaam kijiye aap andar jaiye aur dad se miliye...shayad apki baat sunke vo hosh mei aa jayein
aastha nods and goes to meet shaan ...
bahar devi ka phn bajta hai..devi alok ko ishara krti hai aur side mei jake baat krti hai
devi : tumhari himmat kaise hui phirse mujhe phone krne ki .....tumhe tumhare paise mil gye Na dobara mujhe phn mt Krna
meanwhile in icu
aastha enters in icu...she with slow steps goes to shaan and held his hand
aastha : shaan please aankhein kholo dekho mai tumhare saamne hoon....mai jaanti hoon maine tumhe bahut pareshan kia hai but please mujhe aisi saja mat do mai nhi ji paungi tumhare bin ....tumne uss din hospital mei kaha tha na ki tumhari jaan mujhme basti hai to tum aise kaise mujhse door ja skte ho...Shaan tum chahte the na ki hum dono ek nayi shuruwaat kre dobara apni zindagi apne hisaab se jiye to shaan jaisa tum kahoge vaisa hi hoga ....tum har baat mai manungi but please aankhein kholo shaan please aankhein kholo
and starts crying after keeping her head on his hand
TO BE CONTINUED...
Very emotional update.
I guess Devi and Alok were trying to get Aastha's accident done, Since Shaan took her car.