Dard aur sukoon - a Sairat kavita/shayari(???)🙈🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey guys, long time no see🤣

I thought of doing a paagal panti post as always, but decided against it later🤣

So,pls ,adjust karlo with this crap.....

So this one is for ,...SAIRAT.... let's say Virat's emotions....😳

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Jis samajhdaari pe tha mujhe guroor,uspe chadha tha tera suroor,

Aakhir kaisa hai tera yeh jaadu, mujhe samjhaana kabhi zaroor.


Yu toh pata tha humko ,tu aadat hogi meri ek din buri,

Par kabhi hisaab na lagaaya ki tu aadat hogi itni gehri.


Par darr zaroor tha ki kahi kaale baadal na aaye,

Andheri ke jaise ,nazar lagaakar sarr pe na mandraate.

Ek aas toh tha ki tu kabhi na jaa payegi chodkar,

Par samajhdaari kehta raha ki tez hawayein lejaayengi tujhe mujhse door bahaakar.


Waqt beet ta gaya, tum jaakar 'hum' ka mausam laaya,

Par kismat ka khel dekho, tere saath iss 'hum' ko sambhaalna na seekh paaya.


Nazro ke dhokhe ne aisa kaala andhera laaya,

Apne pyaar ke chingaari ke aage tere sach ke aag ko na dekh paaya.


Phir hum yu takraaye jaise taakat himmat se takraati ho,

Gussa gehra aisa jisse aandhiyan bhi kaap jaati ho.

Par sunn na saka teri uss sach ki pukaar,

Bas haq hataakar poochta raha ki kyu tum mujhe samajh na paati ho.


Duniya bhulaakar hum sawaalo mein sawaalo mein uljhe rahe,

Par sawaal dene waale mukhoute mein suljhe rahe.


Ek mukhoute kab itna bhaari pad gaya mere sabar pe,

Ki ek pal mein hi mere rooh ko pahuncha diya kabar pe.


Teri bejaan haathon mein apni kismat ki lakeeron ko dhoondta raha,

Apne galtiyon ki saza ko mein khuda se maangta raha.

Ab toh bas bol paau, ae khuda reham karle,

Meri jaan ko lautaade, yeh meri aas qubool karle.


Yeh rooh ab tere liye tadapta hai,

Saath mein mere nazro aur neeyat ko tadpaaya hai.

Tu hi hai ab iss bejaan ki aakhri aas,

Tu meri hai dard, mera hai sukoon, jald aaja mere paas.



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Okay, I haven't proof read, cuz I know I would delete this if I did🤣

So, pls, honest replies👍🏼😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Deep…

I loved it and could see Viru in it..


Teri bejaan haathon mein apni kismat ki lakeeron ko dhoondta raha,

Apne galtiyon ki saza ko mein khuda se maangta raha.

Ab toh bas bol paau, ae khuda reham karle,

Meri jaan ko lautaade, yeh meri aas qubool karle.

❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Shrishtiiiiii

Your words are magical ❤️

You have captured Virat's emotions in such a beautiful way....

I got chills reading this...

Especially the last few lines

Tu hi hai ab iss bejaan ki aakhri aas,

Tu meri hai dard, mera hai sukoon, jald aaja mere paas.


Please never ever stop writing!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amor_fati

Deep…

I loved it and could see Viru in it..


Teri bejaan haathon mein apni kismat ki lakeeron ko dhoondta raha,

Apne galtiyon ki saza ko mein khuda se maangta raha.

Ab toh bas bol paau, ae khuda reham karle,

Meri jaan ko lautaade, yeh meri aas qubool karle.

❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thankyou, I thought I tumbled at a few places and couldn't show Virat properly.

Glad you liked it😳

Thankyou for the reply❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tptwi

Shrishtiiiiii

Your words are magical ❤️

You have captured Virat's emotions in such a beautiful way....

I got chills reading this...

Especially the last few lines

Tu hi hai ab iss bejaan ki aakhri aas,

Tu meri hai dard, mera hai sukoon, jald aaja mere paas.


Please never ever stop writing!!!!

Thankyou so much poo❤️

I thought I couldn't do justice to Virat properly here, as he is too complicated for human brains😆 Glad I could showcase Virat.

@bold

This is very huge compliment for me, thankyou😳

Will try to write as I get time❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Waaah! Kya baat hai Shristhi ji👏

Aap toh shaayrana bann gaye❤️


Very beautiful, dil ko lag gayee❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Thankyou so much poo❤️

I thought I couldn't do justice to Virat properly here, as he is too complicated for human brains😆 Glad I could showcase Virat.

@bold

This is very huge compliment for me, thankyou😳

Will try to write as I get time❤️


Yes he is one huge jalebi but your words have made his thoughts so beautifully clear 🤗

Looking forward to reading what you write next!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devikadish

Waaah! Kya baat hai Shristhi ji👏

Aap toh shaayrana bann gaye❤️


Very beautiful, dil ko lag gayee❤️

Pls don't call me aap🤣 I still want to feel young, cuz I am🤣

Thankyou so much❤️

Yeah, Sairat always tend to get out beautiful emotions from within us😳

Glad you liked it❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: tptwi


Yes he is one huge jalebi but your words have made his thoughts so beautifully clear 🤗

Looking forward to reading what you write next!

Oh, than I should be Virat's therapist then😆

@bold

Was actually thinking of an OS, maybe in the evening or tomorrow, will let you know. Have not decided anything yet🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Oh, than I should be Virat's therapist then😆

@bold

Was actually thinking of an OS, maybe in the evening or tomorrow, will let you know. Have not decided anything yet🤣

Yes and while you are giving him therapy, please teach him some anger management too 🤣

Yes, please do write the OS and tag me!!

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