CONFESSIONS & CONVERSATIONS OVER COFFEE.-IV pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It is my first time.There are amazing creative people in the forum.Just went with emotion called ShaKhi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Just have to say pls keep this forum active with os and ff

Really love this show, really sad from past 4 days, will truly miss shakhi

Just hate starplus, and never will watch any show on it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very nice, these were the missed conversations between them.


Thanks for writing it down with all the important things included.


Please keep going. I'm loving it.


Love Preet ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Really nice convo..

So, many things that they had to say to each other..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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PART III

ANOKHI:When you were making Anmol confess initially i thought that you were favouring Anmol but when you caught his first lie I was relaxed and amazed at you.The way you trapped him in his iwn story.

SHAURYA:That idiot deserves to be punished along with Bebo and Kitty.I was so ashamed that my sisters could stoop so low.I made them apologize to you but you were ready to forgive them in an instant.I could not stand there anymore and left for some non existant work.I saw them talking to you in a rude manner again and had to warn them.They both were using their intelligence in the wrong direction and decided to test them next day.So the surprise test in class.To my surprise all the answers given by other students were wrong.I knew you were disappointed that you were not given chance.I decided to ask the toughest question which i had confidence that my sisters would answer but they did not even raise their hands and you too did the same.I thought of giving chance to you and you answered better than i thought.

ANOKHI:I was eagerly waiting to answer the questions and understood that you did not believe I had it in me to answer your questions.When i asnwered your question you asked me why i fid not rsise my hand.When i told the reason I could see the surprise on your face.I wanted you to believe in me.Since my childhood no one trusted me to be proficient and somehow i wanted you to trust me.

But you had bad impression on me from thr start.

SHAURYA:It was not bad impression it was my jealousy that you were close to mom and dad more than me.When i went to valentines day party i was determined to get the name of person who gave yhe media tip.I was least expecting you there.

ANOKHI: Babli di's friend called us to attend party.I was also not expecting you in the party.Dressed to kill in black my favourite colour,every girl in the party was oohing and aahing seeing you.I was angry that you did not even accept thanks and thought you would manipulate Mr.Puri to say my name.

SHAURYA:OH some notions you had about me imagining me to be bollywood movie villian who troubles Heroine!

ANOKHI:No you are Hero rather a hot handsome Hero with brooding looks.If we were on good terms i would have been like other girls drooling over you.

SHAURYA:You were no less dressed in a peach colour ,long danglers whose reflection was falling on your cheeks.Long hair and small bindi...without much make up.Beautiful fairy i would call you.Difficult not to notice such beauty.

ANOKHI:I was impressed by your dancing skills and dance teaching skills.Song was so apt for us.I enjoyed the dance.Some unknown force pulling me towards you.But you were not happy dancing with me.Scolding me even while dancing.

SHAURYA:Why Thank you sweetheart for the good words but you were right i was not happy i was ecstatic.You look through me with those mesmerising eyes and know what was going on in my mind.The feeling was surreal.On the pretext of searching for Puri i diverted my attention from you to surroundings.

ANOKHI:When you offered to drop us home after fighting with jiju,i was so happy.No body did this for me and Babli di.We were besides each other in the car and i was silently thanking you in my head.

SHAURYA:I was feeling your hair strand on my face.This was second time i felt them like a safe cloud engulfing me to make me feel safe.I felt them in the train first time.

ANOKHI:You were still doubting me about mefia incident and i could not clarify more.It broke me that a genuinely good person is misunderstanding me to be someone who was not me.

SHAURYA:After i knew that media tip was from my home.I doubted on dad only to be known that my sisters did that.They stooped so low to demean you but they spoiled reputation of SIAC.We were discussing this incident and i was feeling guilty to have blamed you.

Suddenly dad got a call that mom was shot and she was in hospital in serious condition.Dad ran immediately expecting me to follow him but i was afraid..afraid that i will left alone again.

ANOKHI:I got to know about that next day and you have sent me out of the class.I was surprised the person who fought for me and my sister was hating Aastha mam.When i knew she was your mother that was biggest shock for me.After our fights at hospital i decided to convince you to talk to Maa but you banned my entry into class.

SHAURYA:Who am I to stop you! You still managed to attend my class.I was amused and irritated to see you attending my class hiding from me.You are Anokhi indeed.Adding to my anger you spoke about my birthday and i lost it.

ANOKHI:I made all arrangemnets for your birthday and got nice return gift.I was annoyed to the extent of giving you cold shoulder forever.

SHAURYA:You know i ve never intentionally hurt any one physically.Seeing red marks marring your beautiful face i died thousand deaths.You refused first aid and went away saying a shocking statement I would never celebrate my birthday with out you.Later my eyes were costantly on lookout for you.The book cake was a great idea.I wanted you to be a part of my celebrations.

ANOKHI:Why you did not dance with Reema and others.You dance so well.Badi maa said you dont know how to dance.I was surprised.

SHAURYA:Yes i never danced with anyone.You were first one with whom i danced.Later when you were entagled in lights,you were appearing like a firefly.Small yet lighting surroundings with your spirit.I wanted to apologize to you for sending out of class and wanted to check if you were ok.You did not eat even a piece of cake.I wanted to stay away from issues related to me and mom.

ANOKHI:We shared each other's pain in a subtle way.I could feel your pain to some extent .

Aastha maa s sudden missing riled me further and i vented my anger on you.


IGNORE TYPOS and tell me how you like it.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wonderful 👌👌

Loved it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awww, so sweet, will wait eagerly for the next update please do

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thid type of convo was much needed in the show.

U portrayed it very well

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Part IV

SHAURYA:Every birthday i avoid celebrations after mom left me.Badi maa gives me kheer to eat and I just taste it.I remember mom &dad used to distribute Laddoos in temple.We three used to go to park and play the entire day.After many years when i saw mom,i had a replay of the abandonment.25 years... Anokhi 25 long torturous years and every single day i missed her.So all my angst came out on her.

ANOKHI:You know Aastha maa was more than teacher for me.My mentor my second mother and i could not listen anything against her.So i literally yelled at you forgetting you are my professor.When i could not see her it was as if i lost something very precious.Then i went to police station.

SHAURYA:I was guilty after you spoke to me and decided to find her.When i saw you in police station fighting for my mother somehow i felt very ashamed of myselves.But when i saw that ACP touch you inapproriately i was frustated.Inspite our difference in opinions we both created a comfortable bubble for ourselves and I did not want to include anyone in our bubble.

ANOKHI:He was not touching me inappropriately.He was trying to soothe the burn because hot tea fell on my hands.

SHAURYA:Your hands were feeling the burn but i was feeling both the burns.Your hand and my heart.Anokhi sweetheart, I felt a part of me always follow you.Before interview where you were about to faint i caught you.When i saw the fatigue on your face it pained me too. On the day when you were locked in the class,you ran to me as I opened the door and embraced me out of fear,I don't know about you but I felt reassured .Somehow you were the only one who saw my pain beyond anger and hatred..I was insecure and afraid i would loose you and mom.

ANOKHI:When ACP informed me about a dead body which they found,i was continuously thinking about you.You were there with me when i was near a dead body and you comforted me.You were also worried but you cared about me.When Shaan papa was crying like a baby and you were reassuring him, you became that caring dad to your father.

SHAURYA:I did not want you to go wih ACP for searching mom.I was secretly hoping you to be on my side.Shayad main confused tha pareshaan tha yaa i dont know may be a mix of do many emtions.

ANOKHI:Jee nahi Janaab Jal rahe the.Oh toh woh Jalan waala gussa tha.I was thinking you had problem with my existence.How you have cut my hair pouting and complaining cutely.

SHAURYA:I was mad with rage.You were continuously chanting ACP Ahir ACP Ahir.That irritated me.But Iam really sorry love, you have such beauiful hair and your hair had to bear the consequence Shaurya caressed her hair lovingly and kissed on forehead.

Waise you were no less.YOU CALLED ME KARELA.I mean karela really?Every girl admired me and awarded me with so many good adjectives...

Anokhi Ke Anokhe Adjectives....Khud toh jaise Rasgulla ho.

ANOKHI:SHAURYA KARELA SABHERWAL..it has got nice ring to it.Dont you think??

SHAURYA:Yeah right Mrs.ANOKHI RASGULLA SABHERWAL.Pyaar mein log baby jaanu shona bulate hain aur hum dono...Anokhe.

ANOKHI:When we reached the place and were searching for maa ,I did realise my mistake of coming to that place and dragging you along.But my concern for maa won over every fear.

SHAURYA:I was away from you for two min two freaking minutes and there was blast.I felt some part of me was listless.When i saw you lying unconscious,i ran to your side blood oozing out our forehead,lifeless mocking at me for leaving your side.My eyes my mind every part of body screaming at me for my stupidity questioning my bane existence.ACP arrived and i carried you in my arms and sat in jeep.You were lying lifeless in my arms and i sincerely hoped you would wake up and start fighting with me.Finally you were admitted into hospital and i remember saying to the doctor

"Yeh ladki irritating hai ,stupid hai par ise kuch hona nahi chahiye."

I was cursing myselves and repeatedly trying placate you for your stupidity.I could never forgive myselves if anything had happened to you.I was getting attached to someone very deeply and the four year old Shaurya started growing.

You were given treatment but I felt as if my injuries are also taken care of.In the exhaustion i myselves felt dizzy and fell unconcious.

ANOKHI:I was unaware of the circumstsnces by when ACP Ahir was rubbing my hand,i was held in a warm,strong yet comfortable embrace and i had a feeling that after our arguement you would have left me.I was not at all used to someone comforting me caring about me.I felt strange,i wanted more of that comfort.That s the reason why i thanked ACP Ahir for that care unaware that it you.I never knew you were also injured too until i saw hand.You asked me ti medicines and I got to know Astha maa was found.

Your reaction surprised me.You just hmmmed.

You said I would never understand what you have gone through and that got me thinking if i judge you wrongly?

Already annoyed that you left me in the riots i asked to apologize to Maa but she stopped me.

SHAURYA:I was relieved to know Maa was safe you collaspsed again felt my life slipping away.I wanted everyone safe and decided to stay away from you,maa.I was getting attached to you and my anger on her was ebbing away slowly and I moved out.Your words always haunted me and i came to apologize to maa and ensuring myselves that you both are fine.Dad was never emotinally away from mom so my fear of losing him bothered me a lot.My insecurities made me say caustic words after I said sorry.I hoped to run away to some part of the world because my vulnerabilities are exposed infront of you and mom.I was given the responsibility of Patiyala SIAC which was my dream project.That news did not make me happy but thought that as an excuse to stay away from getting attached and I submitted my resignation as a professor.

ANOKHI:After your apology Aastha mam requested me to stop judging you and decided to do just that.You were oate to the class for the first time.I was shocked listening to the news of your resignation.All students canteen blamed me for being the reason for your resignation and i confronted you.Your words did not hurt me as i knew your accumulated years of hurt was coming out.when i left campus after work some goons kidnapped me but you saved me.I was shaken from inside and want to feel safe again.I wanted somone to hold me to gather my broken pieces but i could not get that.

SHAURYA:When i was still sorting my emotions and pondering over your words I wanted someone to clear my confusion.I got a call from home and while travelling i heard some one scream.When I followed the vehicle i was sure somone was in trouble.I stopped thw vehicle only to know it was you who was being kidnapped.

I felt mad rage when goons were touching you and after they ran away my anger was not coming down.I cant imagine what would have happened if I was not there around you.I was afraid if i held you in that anger i would have crushed you.You were delicate doll i always wanted to keep you safe and happy.

ANOKHI:You always rescued me whenever I was in trouble.It was as if you had a connection with me.When you insisted to drop me home i saw the care and concern.You called me stupid irresponsible but all those words were screaming you cared for me.Amidst all these you werw not liking when i called you Sir.

SHAURYA:I wanted you to call me by my name.You always called that officer taking his name then why not me?I discovered in our conversation that you had an issue with your dad but decided ask about it later.I saw tears in your eyes and decided to cheer you up.

ANOKHI:You asked me if I remember the vehicle number which was used for kidnapping me and I was curious why sudden interest in Vehicle number.You said

"Woh kya hai Gaadi ka jo malik hai na mujhe uske saath date pe jaana hai."That immediately changed my gloomy mood.

SHAURYA:That's what I wanted.To see your smiling face and to befriend you.I wanted to be the reason you smile not that ACP.


ANOKHI:You already had a special place in my heart.That day when i reached home Astha maa and I had a conversation and she said that i should stop judging you on past incidents.I told her that you would have saved any student and then she asked me if i was criticizing you or praising you.I have thanked you several thousand times in my heart.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is one of the most adorable Work I have read dr girl

Lovely it was amazing on the point my dr

Do write more and there is nothing to do with writing skills u have really good one my dr

What we write is more important than how it is written

Ur powerful words means a lot

Much love

Jen

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