ShiVi OS- Wasab (Excrutiating Pain) page 2 - Page 3

Mahiii... This was so good... I am happy crying 😭

Dil garden garden ho gaya ji

Mahiii! Why must you write stories like this? If "woes" kept me at bay, I don't think I have heart to read "excruciating pain". Dropping by here to give some love because I know it's going to be beautiful. I just don't think I have the heart to read this just yet. ❤️🤗😢

Wooooow what a beautiful written story Maahi. ❤️

Rollercoaster of emotions, my poor heart 💔 just loved it ❤️

How beautiful this is !

You stole my heart with every word❤️

Every emotion has been captured and described so perfectly

Take a bow🌺

Beautiful ending Maahi! You wrote things pretty realistically.. it was in line with both of their characters and how they would have behaved!

Raavi writing diary entries for Shiva and only Shiva was a very nice touch ❤️

The end was really cute! Enjoyed reading this one!

That was beautifully done!

You've managed to capture his heartbreak and her confusion perfectly! 👏❤️

Loved it!!

You make me cry 😭

This was so beautiful!!

Loved every bit of it!!

The way u described Shiva's feelings ... I don't have words enough to describe how beautiful this was! ❤️

That was so beautiful..💖💖💖 Shiva's insecurities, his pain was described so so so beautifully.. Felt each and every emotion..you literally made me cry reading his part..

Raavi missing his presence was the best thing❤❤..and the way she cleared all his misunderstandings was 😍😍

The last scene was absolutely adorable. You made me happy at the same place. And of course the shayari was at the perfect place💕💕

Here's a question.. Are the shayari's that you include in all your stories written by you, yourself? If yes, then girl I am great fan of yours.

Thank you for this wonderful piece; read something so amazing after a long long time😘❤

Maine apne har ek sapne ko apne haathon se dafnaya hai,

Mitti bhi phenki hai us par aur khudko aage badhna sikhaya hai...

Aaj khadi hoon us kagaar par zindagi ke,

Jahan ek naya sawera intezaar mein hai,

Par qadam hai ki hilte hi nahin,

Meri beete kal ki zanjeeron se khud ko fir se chudaya hai...

Ek naye sapne ko palkon pe sajaye,

Khushiyon ka bazoo thaama hai,

Darte jhijhakte ek naye raste par ek pyaara sa ghar sajaya hai...

Unbelievable Absolutely Mindblowing!!!!

Loved how this turned out❤️❤️