Companion Piece - WISH _ Virat - Pg 1_ Sai - Pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Yaar Appu ❤️

Thankyou so much for writing this and I'm really sorry for being so late😭

This was really good❤️

He has been seeing his family since his childhood. He knows what and who they are. While everyone sees who are wrong and how wrong they are, he also sees the emotions running in the family. He sees what others don't. And being a mostly silent person, I know. You develop your observing skills.

But being in a family like Chahvans, where there are more secrets than openness, where hearts are not open, where he knows their actions as well as enjoying and the status quo of the family, he doesn't know how to deal with a girl whose heart is as big as an ocean and who refuses to show her wounds to him because of that chain he himself had put on himself, and who doesn't believe in status quo. He yearns for a place like that in her heart which he sees is there for a few of his family members. Because they did not chain themselves like him. They were open to receive from her and they got it. So all he can do is yearn and wish for the chains to not exist, to go away, but the chains are his own making, and he alone can break them. And the problem is oftentimes when a person finds himself shut in himself, he frantically searches for a key to open the lock. Wants to break the door, looks outside and yearns for freedom. But he forgets there's no key. The door has always been open. He just needs to step out.

Virat needs to do the same. Just step out.

Edited by cheekukabeej - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh my! So beautiful! ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is so beautiful ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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You've captured Virat beautifully....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Devikadish

Soo beautiful❤️Loved it❤️

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Thanks Disha!!!

I love how you make a hashtag without me asking!!! 😳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Too beautiful 😍

No words to express his beauty....

Virat's wishes, earnings and his nature everything is written beautifully 😍

My most loved sentence is

"Then there came a tornado......" perfectly describing Sai...

She really is tornado on his life which pushed him to express himself and react without any inhibitons... she brings the best and worst out of him...


Thanks so much!!!

He is such a silent character mostly, when it comes to expressing what he wants... I do feel sorry for the mess he has landed himself in.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ThruMyEyez-Nita

For some reason, this made me emotional - so beautifully written. Loved it!❤️


Thanks so much!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Yaar Appu ❤️

Thankyou so much for writing this and I'm really sorry for being so late😭

Abe O!!! Bas bhi kar ab 🤗

This was really good❤️

He has been seeing his family since his childhood. He knows what and who they are. While everyone sees who are wrong and how wrong they are, he also sees the emotions running in the family. He sees what others don't. And being a mostly silent person, I know. You develop your observing skills.

Me too, babe... I'm an extrovert outside and and an introvert at home.

He sees the reasons behind actions...

But being in a family like Chahvans, where there are more secrets than openness, where hearts are not open, where he knows their actions as well as enjoying and the status quo of the family, he doesn't know how to deal with a girl whose heart is as big as an ocean and who refuses to show her wounds to him because of that chain he himself had put on himself, and who doesn't believe in status quo.

He hasn't been able to take a calm breath since Sai came... she turned his worldview inside out.. by just showing him how she was right too!

He yearns for a place like that in her heart which he sees is there for a few of his family members. Because they did not chain themselves like him. They were open to receive from her and they got it. So all he can do is yearn and wish for the chains to not exist, to go away, but the chains are his own making, and he alone can break them.

His monologue in the recent episode broke my heart... and then your peom, actually made me cry!

So this one is on you, Cheeku love!!

You made me write this!

And the problem is oftentimes when a person finds himself shut in himself, he frantically searches for a key to open the lock. Wants to break the door, looks outside and yearns for freedom. But he forgets there's no key. The door has always been open. He just needs to step out.

Virat needs to do the same. Just step out.

I am very familiar with the chain system, unfortunately.. and jo mai nahi kar payi, Viru toh kare 😳


Cheeku jaan... big hugs!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome....Beautiful 😍

So heart-touching......❤

How Beautifully you explained Sai and also her bond with abha and Virat.... loved it a lot.....

Her yearning to became his but couldn't..... that pain.... everything is beautiful......

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