ShiVi OS: Of Bangles and New Beginnings - Page 3

i know it is an os

but i really like ur story and would love it if u add a bonus update

Awhhh this was beautiful 😍

What a lovely story ❤️❤️

Amazing story 😍😍😍😍

Beautiful ❤

Thank you for a long chapter 👌👌👌👌🤗🤗🤗🤗

Main to isse bhi lamba padh skti hu 😜😜😜😜🤣🤣

I totally loved this❤️

Beautifully written dialogues👏❤️

Iss OS mein sab kuch mil gaya jo show mein nahi mila.

Shiva's repentance, raavi's turmoil and ShiVi's progression, everything was amazing.

Love you for this aloo❤️

Keep writing!

Amazing os👏

It was beautiful ❤️😍

This was very Beautiful! I Enjoyed it a lot! Especially the dialogues were excellent. Please continue this if possible, and Please Do keep writing 👏👏

Beautiful 💕

Will be on my reading list for a long time

Gives warm fuzzy feeling in each read 🙂

Aaliya...I am so happy you are back to writing and what an amazing come back❤️

I read this yesterday morning... really wanted some Shivi dose as I had a hectic Sunday work schedule...so glad you posted this yesterday...❤️

I was unable to comment yesterday due to work😵

To begin with thank you so much for this long post...this was so so beautiful

I am so happy you wrote this... Shiva's sincere apology...it was heart touching...the way he made sure she had food..this boy and his concern for Raavi❤️

I am so happy Raavi didn't accept his apology and took her time to reflect on her feelings and finally decided to give the relationship a second chance...

The suicide drama Raavi did and Shiva's reaction to that was perfect...he reprimanded her properly❤️

And my favourite part and a relief reading this was MAMI DIDN'T GET ANY KANGAN🥳

true MSM squad member feeling...best best best🥳

Thanks Aaliya for this amazing OS...loved it so much🤗

Wow 👏👏

I really loved this so much! Please keep writing!

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Aalu this was amazingggg

I loved it!

Waiting for more from u dear!

Please keep writing 🖤

Thank you so much Maahi! 🤗