RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 35

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

I am speechless 😳

Told u. stop being with lovehopemagic. Keep distance and u will have lots of words.

Originally posted by: Trista101

FINALLY my theories have come true! S is P and it's confirmed!!🥳

I'm speechless yet again.👏

Raghav taunting and calling Pallavi stupid to take a bullet for him and blaming and hurting himself was so beautifully executed! Him punching on the wall due to his guilt and angst was so poignant. I nearly cried😭

On the bright side, I am glad that S is neither Sulochana, Sharda, Shri or Sunny🤣

Thnx.

And i told u from the start that u r right. U guys only chose not to believe me.

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

Ohooo pallo mata is here.

Thank you for tagging

Abhi darshan mei time hai...

My reaction while reading this chapter - 😢➡️😲➡️😭

I don't know what to write about this chapter, I don't have words . You made me speechless lateuser 👏

Originally posted by: Trista101

FINALLY my theories have come true! S is P and it's confirmed!!🥳

I'm speechless yet again.👏

Raghav taunting and calling Pallavi stupid to take a bullet for him and blaming and hurting himself was so beautifully executed! Him punching on the wall due to his guilt and angst was so poignant. I nearly cried😭

On the bright side, I am glad that S is neither Sulochana, Sharda, Shri or Sunny🤣

A big relief for all S is P club 😆

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Wide-eyed! Before coming to the story, you write so damn well. It is like sitting in that hospital reception area and watching the scene unfold; or being in R’s body to feel the pain he wants to engulf himself in. More so, because the reader is just there in that moment, like one of the characters or a furniture lying around - why I say this, because there is no visibility to, what will happen next. We are made to undertake the journey like all the characters do; if there are theories, they are akin to a gut-ferl one of them can have.

To the chapter, take a bow! To keep the upward arc is no mean feat. And there is so much patience in the way you write, that makes the reader impatient. Its like the sustained notes.

R’s emotions are all over the place. The debate between his brain and heart, the confusions, the oscillation between belief, expectation, reality, 👌🏼

The discussion of S is P, is stale. So, letting that in the sideline. It is interesting to see what is unfolding, final pieces coming together, but not before adding more misery, more mystery.

To know that so much awaits, for the last chapter, increases the anticipation of it all.

The present was left without feelings to honor the past. Trying to read this again, maybe the Saturday morning dull effect.

It has to be. It’s very clear right….Then why you have to be like her? Why you have to be her? The progressing thoughts ceded with doubts. Brilliant play with words.

This chapter is a big fat treat!!!

Thnx...

The present was left without feelings to honor the past. One of my favorite and apt for what is written in rest of the chapter.

Originally posted by: Wallflowers

My reaction while reading this chapter - 😢➡️😲➡️😭

I don't know what to write about this chapter, I don't have words . You made me speechless lateuser 👏

Thnx... these posts r making me go speechless.

Originally posted by: Wallflowers

A big relief for all S is P club 😆

No but S is sul..... ok leave it....

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx...

The present was left without feelings to honor the past. One of my favorite and apt for what is written in rest of the chapter.

I am reading it as ‘the present, was left without feelings, to honour the past’.

i get the heaviness of it; and the depth. But I am not able to place it right; like unable to touch the core of it. Maybe, the ‘feelings’ is what i am getting swayed by.

I liked and enjoyed reading it. And that is why it has stayed with me. But in my head, it felt like an appreciation of a dubbed movie. I am unable to get the crux of it - not sure, why.

Not your fault.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

I am reading it as ‘the present, was left without feelings, to honour the past’.

i get the heaviness of it; and the depth. But I am not able to place it right; like unable to touch the core of it. Maybe, the ‘feelings’ is what i am getting swayed by.

I liked and enjoyed reading it. And that is why it has stayed with me. But in my head, it felt like an appreciation of a dubbed movie. I am unable to get the crux of it - not sure, why.

Not your fault.

‘the present was left without feelings, to honour the past.’ that will be the sentence. Core of that sentence is guilt.