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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

Interesting topic ... I always wanted someone to write an os on Sai's trauma and Virat helping her to come out of it.

Sai is 18-19 year old girl who got harassed by a goon since she was about 15-16 year old it must have been so traumatic for her , she is a brave girl but still she is very young and sexual harrasment is not some joke it's a very serious issue I never understood why Ghum makers aren't showing it.

She was being harassed , then got kidnapped to get married forcefully to her harasser , saw her father her only family murdered in front of her eyes , forced into an unwanted marriage , mentally tortured by her in law's etc etc no matter how strong someone is nobody can come out unaffected after being through so much.


All in all quite excited to read the FF ☺️☺️


I will be writing that kind of scene tomorrow.... It will be her breakdown scene with Virat. This is what I imagined.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks for the ts on this sensitive topic,whether this wiil get adressed i the show remain to be seen. I am quite getting virat's pov he wants a closure on jagtap chapter as he wants sai to be comfortable with him and strenghen their relatioship further.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Lovely start

Feeling bad for Sai

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sai was in the kitchen trying to make coffee for herself.She had somehow escaped questions of Virat about her father.She was getting flashes about Jagtap's harassment.His hand on her waist,him trying to forcefully marry her.Samrat saw her trying to make coffee.While he didnt understand the trauma she was going through but he couldnt see her sad.She was like younger sister he never had.He understood what his Shiva meant.She was completely lost.


When she went back to their room Virat was still awake.He was still waiting for answers.He was not going to sleep without them.Virat wanted to take her out all her fears about Jagtap,all her anger on Kamal sir and him.She was trying to avoid their conversation.She was not used to opening her heart.She liked everything in her heart.


Sai (avoiding)-Aap so jaye mujhe padhai karni hai.Please is baat ko yahi khatam kijye.


Virat (closing her books)-Nai Sai aaj toh ye baat shru hui hai.Kya kya tum apne man mei le kar bethe ho Sai.


Sai-Please let it go !! I dont have the strength right now !!


Virat-Par mujhe sunna hai Sai.Please aapne aandar mat dabakar mat rakho.


Sai(getting angry)-You know what mai sone ja rahi hu.


Virat (holding her hand)-Aaj nai Sai.Aaj tum baat ko ghuma ke nai jaogi.Mai tumhe nai jane dooga aise.Tumhe nai maaf karna Jagtap ko thats fine.Par aaj mujhe tumhari dil me dabai hui saari baat jaani hai....


Kyu tum Kamal sir se itni gussa ho ?


Sai(tears sliding down her cheeks)-Isme se kuch bhi aapke samajh mei nai aayega.Aapke emotions nai hai,Aapke baba nai the or nahi kisi ne aapko galat tareke se dekha ya chuya nai hai...


Virat (bringing her close to him)-Try to kar sakti ho na ho.I am very good listener.Please aapne liye nai toh mere liye batao.Ye tumhare liye accha nai hai Sai sab kuch daba ke rakhna.


Sai (more tears sliding down her face)-Abba ne sab kuch aapne aap hi decide karthe the.Transfer leni hai toh lo,VRS nai lena toh mat lo,Mar jana hai marjao.Ye kabhi nai socha ke mai hu unke peche.Aapki jaan bachai par ye bhul gai ki unki khud ki bhi beti thi.....Jo mann me aaya woh kiya..Unko sab ne mana kiya tha GC me rehne ke liye Jagtap ki vajah se lekin unki zidd ki vajah se mujhe bhi waha rehna pada.


Aur finally jab VRS leni ke baat aai tab kya kiya unhone,taal diya use bhi.Unki waha rehne ki zidd mujhe roz bhari padti thi.Jagtap insaan kehlane ki layak nai hai.Woh aaba bhi jaante the phir bhi.....Aap sab Police Walo ke sar pe kya bhoot chadha hota hai har cheez aapne aap handle karne ka.Har cheez solve karna zaroori hota hai....


Virat was stunned he never knew she would be this angry with Kamal sir.Her tears were endless on her face....She must have been so alone when all these happened.Did Kamal sir never have any idea about any of this.....


Sai (continuing)-Aur Jagtap isi cheez ka fada utha ta tha.Use pata tha Aaba aapni duty chodkar kabhi nai jayege...(sobbing)Kabhi kabhi uske chunne se ye man karta tha ki isse zyada mar jao toh behtar hoga..


(sobbing harder)Aur phir jab mujhe laga tha ki Baba aab VRS le chuke hai hai tab kya huva ? Onhone aapni jaan dedi.Kuch bhi bina soche aapni jaan dedi.Aur phir....


Sai couldnt continue anymore.She just couldnt....Virat knew what was after Aur phir..it was his family and Patralekha.And more even him...He never knew Sai who he thought was stronger even than him had so much emotionally.....She thought dying was better option.....Virat was devastated seeing Sai like that...


Virat -Sai I am sorry.Meri wajah se hi toh tumhari musibatein shru hui.Kamal sir na mujhe bachate aur na mere family ke wajah se tumhe itna sab bardasht karna padta...


Sai (stunned)-Isme aapki koi galti nai hai Virat.Faisla baba ka tha aapka nai.Aapne soch bhi kaise liya galti aapki thi.Aapko thodi pata tha ki baba aapki jaan bachye ge.....


Aap please kisi jalebi mai phir se mat phas jaana....Aap kitni complication khadi karte hai har baat mei..Mujhe yakeen nai hota aapke jaise complicated insaan se mujhe pyaar kaise hua....


Virat was ecstatic.All this while he was trying to get her to confess and this was it.Virat hugged Sai tightly.Sai reciprocated in the same way.She was still in tears.They refused to stop.She agreed with Virat on Jagtap.She knew she had to forgive him to get over her fear and get some closure but she was not ready for it right now...


Virat (wiping her tears)-Sai tumhe aabhi nai jaana toh mat jaana but please kabhi bhi marne ki baat mat karna Sai.Maine dekha tha tumhe kamal sir ke death ke baad.

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Pre-cap


After 15 days


Sai-Samrat dada mujhe kai jana hai aap chalege mere saath ?


Samrat-Nagpur Gov.Hospital ?


Edited by olsen_124 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Loved it.... This is a topic given least importance... An your story telling is amazing


Samrat is here and Iove that 😁😁😁


Virat makes sense and so does sai..... It is all about finding a middle ground


Kya Pakhi ko koi Kuch sunayega?? Or will she just be a statue And exit?


Closure is necessary for all of us.And it is also necessary for Sai

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Nja91

Great start. This is a very important topic that you have chosen to write about .... very nicely written. Eagerly awaiting more!


Yes a very important topic

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Lovely. This is a very sensitive issue. And, it's great that you explored this in your story.


Thanks for reading.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Dee10

This is such a sensitive topic. it is so important for both; males and females, to know boundaries! Love the fact that you have written it with such ease, thoroughly covering the reaction and the emotional chaos that victims go through. Please tag me when you update.


Thank you so much for reading and also for the appreciation.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Wildreaper

Amazing 🤩🤩

One of the most sensitive topic of Sai’s life, it’s not easy for her and she can’t get past it.

Well written.

Update soon❣️❣️


Thanks a lot.Never thought would get this much response.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

Interesting topic ... I always wanted someone to write an os on Sai's trauma and Virat helping her to come out of it.

Sai is 18-19 year old girl who got harassed by a goon since she was about 15-16 year old it must have been so traumatic for her , she is a brave girl but still she is very young and sexual harrasment is not some joke it's a very serious issue I never understood why Ghum makers aren't showing it.

She was being harassed , then got kidnapped to get married forcefully to her harasser , saw her father her only family murdered in front of her eyes , forced into an unwanted marriage , mentally tortured by her in law's etc etc no matter how strong someone is nobody can come out unaffected after being through so much.


All in all quite excited to read the FF ☺️☺️


Sexual harassment shld always be addressed.Thanks for reading

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