SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July - Page 3

Wow! Loved it. So beautiful.

Beautiful start

Loved it

Originally posted by: laksh

Wow, amazing. Loved it ❤

Going through the hug scene in your words was beautiful. Thank god, we got a closure of that scene. The Ashwini Sai Virat scene was too good. So, no more pillow walls 😲and look at what is Sai doing 🤣.

Will wait for the next part. Thanks for tagging me 😍.

Bold - that is what I wanted too...

And Ashwini not knwing her Godu was going, and not showing at least a hug rankled... also, since Sai din't sleep the whole night, ek glimpse of what she was doing toh banta tha na.. ❤️

Thanks Lakshmi!! 🤗

Originally posted by: Ninabarbie

It's so beautiful and lovely 😍😍😍😍. And I really really loved this continuation of the bed room scene coz it adds a sense of completion to the whole story. My fav part was the very last bit. I couldn't stop myself from smiling like an idiot when she poked him 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 And tracing his face while sleeping.......LOVE😍😍😍❤❤❤❤

Loved it to the bits Aparna. Simply loved it 🤩

Bold - me too 😳

Was wondering how come no one commented on that!

We have seen so many scenes of Virat gazing at a sleeping Sai, but not the other way around.

I mean, the man is all she has, and she is so committed to him, his welfare and his happiness,... obviously she must gaze at him and wonder at her own unfurling feelings, right?

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Bold - me too 😳

Was wondering how come no one commented on that!

We have seen so many scenes of Virat gazing at a sleeping Sai, but not the other way around.

I eamn, the man is all she has, and she is so committed to him, his welfae and his happiness,... obviously she must gaze at him and wonder at her own unfurling feelings, right?

Abhi jaa, aur edit kar!!! 😆😃

Jokes apart, you catch on to these small nuances naa.. iss lye tag kara tha, Cheeku my dear! 🤗

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Bold - me too 😳

Was wondering how come no one commented on that!

We have seen so many scenes of Virat gazing at a sleeping Sai, but not the other way around.

I mean, the man is all she has, and she is so committed to him, his welfare and his happiness,... obviously she must gaze at him and wonder at her own unfurling feelings, right?

BOLD- To me, it was the highlight of the whole story 😊😊😊😊😊😊❤❤❤❤❤❤.

That poking part show the inner child in her. The one you become in front if the person you love the most and for Sai, Virat is all she has. That scene was sooooo natural and beautiful 😍😍😍😍😍😍

Coloured part- Absolutely 🤩🤩🤩🤩. Who knows, she might figure out that she is totally in love with this man during one of these gazing sessions 😍😍😍😍

Nice concept 👏

Its actually a deeper thought process and talent, that lets you explore and present a fresh perspective with the same plot line that your reader's are aware off. Thriller can keep you hooked, that's natural, but weaving a story which has a known storyline yet bring out inquisitiveness in the readers is a good writer's sign. And that's what is drawing me to your story!

Good luck with this😊 looking forward

Hey yaar, sorry I was network unavailable on forum for two days 🤣

So checked just now👍🏼

Loved this update, this was just so cool and amazing

I mean, I don't doubt at all that Virat has the best camera installed just for Sai in his brain😆

And even Sai loves his.....shakal, so yeah, no scratches pleaj bappa😃

Let's see kya hota hai, update soon, and do tag me, cuz I can stay updated❤️

Originally posted by: sherry_24

Nice concept 👏

Its actually a deeper thought process and talent, that lets you explore and present a fresh perspective with the same plot line that your reader's are aware off. Thriller can keep you hooked, that's natural, but weaving a story which has a known storyline yet bring out inquisitiveness in the readers is a good writer's sign. And that's what is drawing me to your story!

Good luck with this😊 looking forward

Bold - 😳

Thanks dear!! I love your stories and coming from you, this is a huge compliment!!