Deep in My Heart- a Poem - Page 2

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

It's really really brilliant cheeku 🥰🥰

Hats off to you 🎉🎉

The poem is just so full of feelings 🥺🥺 you can actually feel the pain , the loneliness , hurt , helplessness it's just phenomenal 💘💘

I'm there with you all , but I'm still alone

The feeling of loniness in this line is just 🥺🥺

Every time my heart is wounded

I hide behind the veil of laughter

But I am tired of pretense

So , won't bother you hereafter

The hurt and helplessness in this paragraph is literally overflowing ☹️☹️

My joy , pain and dreams

Nobody wants to share

So I can't help but laugh

When you say you care

Oh God ! The pain dear you can just feel the pain here 😶😶

I often wonder what it'd feel like to be alive

Now this line is my favourite it made me feel both helplessness and hope ❤️❤️

The poem really made me tear up , it's just brilliant 🥺🥺

I'm smiling ear to ear😃

So grateful🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Haaye❤️

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

main mar jawan gur khake😆

btw, uska actual meaning kya hota hai? Maine movies meiin suna hai bas.

Originally posted by: Devikadish

btw, uska actual meaning kya hota hai? Maine movies meiin suna hai bas.

When someone says or does something really sweet for you, you are so happy that you say main mar jawan gur khake (gur is very sweet) means what you said/did is so sweet that I can die of sweetness/ happiness.

Is there anything that you can’t write?

Be it emotional poems, comedy os,ss

I have read every single of your story and you amaze me every time.

I am unable to comment every time and a apology for that.

But you are honestly talented.

Originally posted by: Srijeeta06

Is there anything that you can’t write?

Be it emotional poems, comedy os,ss

I have read every single of your story and you amaze me every time.

I am unable to comment every time and a apology for that.

But you are honestly talented.

I'm so so happy and grateful. Thankyou once again❤️❤️

Beautiful poem Cheeku

Just now i found this gem 🥰 i loved the poem. First i thought it is sai's perspective, then pakhi's and then virat's but at the end i realized its us - those who had loved someone even if it is just for a day and got nothing but indifference in return 😭

Originally posted by: vivpri

Just now i found this gem 🥰 i loved the poem. First i thought it is sai's perspective, then pakhi's and then virat's but at the end i realized its us - those who had loved someone even if it is just for a day and got nothing but indifference in return 😭

You know what your whole comment is a gem 💎

Bold: how gorgeous are these lines❤️

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Thankyou so much❤️❤️

You know what your whole comment is a gem 💎

Bold: how gorgeous are these lines❤️

Thank you 🥰

I have re-read this beautiful poem so many times now but still could not make myself part away from it. Those lines are addictive. Do you have a Wattpad account in which you have posted this? I would like to add this to my reading list.