Sairat SS - Doori sahi jaaye na (Completed) - Page 5

Originally posted by: MuguetDScorpion

Badmash Sai Veeru kaise safed jhooth bolta hai.

I loved how she shouted and he shouted back. And the name whispering.

Haha popat of each other but how cute that was. Chipak ke sone par bhi excuses dhoondte the. 🤣

Finally his lips will touch hers.

Uff this tree and the non existing chudail rocked. 👏

It was fun to read the SS. 👏

Thanks 😊 ❤

🤣🤣 I wanted to name the story as Mujhse panga. Veeru jhooth bolne mein maahir hai 🤣.

Chipak ke sona toh 🤣🤣. Ismein kiss miss nahi hua 🤣 warna show mein toh forehead kiss bhi ho jatha hai 🤣.

Yeah, the chudail rocked actually 🤣.

Originally posted by: Deevu

Very romantic

Haaaaye

Nazar na lage donon ko

Ha ha ha 🤣

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: Archishakashyap

I am waiting for it since so longggg . Like I want to know ki aage kya hoga🤣 I have read the same thing so many times hoping you will update some day😛.

Show se no more expectations. Pakhi can't tolerate her at all . Off screen to I don't care but uska face dekhna is very tough for me. So I left watching the show. I just comere here to read the os and ffs . 😍

Also I read the second os and it is awesome . You are an amazing writer ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Keep tagging me and please update mujhe shadi nai karni.

Thanks 😊

🤣🤣 oh god, I have to update soon I guess. Will try to update ASAP. I am really sorry about the delay.

What an amazing TS !

I wanted to read it after today's episode and was trying to control it, but gave in after work and ended up reading all 3 parts.

Kitna amazing hain. This is alternate Ghum universe, where SAIRAT live on their own, away from Chavans and Pakhi.

It's completely fine laksh . I hope you update ab jaldi se ❤️❤️.

I will be waiting for more os and mujhe shadi nai karni 😛😂.

Aww laksh, this is very good... Seriously bole tho I didn't expected romantic os from you, as I know you are little bit pissed with virat but wow yaar must hai yeh

Originally posted by: Archishakashyap

It's completely fine laksh . I hope you update ab jaldi se ❤️❤️.

I will be waiting for more os and mujhe shadi nai karni 😛😂.

Ha ha ha, will try 🤣

If my mood gets better, they spoil it with some drama and that is a big put off for me to write stories 🙈.

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Aww laksh, this is very good... Seriously bole tho I didn't expected romantic os from you, as I know you are little bit pissed with virat but wow yaar must hai yeh

Thanks 😆

I couldn't write stories for sometime actually because I was upset with the way the story was heading. Yes, I am upset with Virat but I don't know how I wrote this. I just had to not think about a few things about Virat and I guess I can write. Anyway, I wasn't happy that they had cut short the spooky story scene, so I wrote these. Don't know if you read the other one. Will tag you from that if you haven't read it.

Originally posted by: sukri

What an amazing TS !

I wanted to read it after today's episode and was trying to control it, but gave in after work and ended up reading all 3 parts.

Kitna amazing hain. This is alternate Ghum universe, where SAIRAT live on their own, away from Chavans and Pakhi.

Thanks Sukri. Missed this comment 🙈.

Yeah, this feels like alternate Ghum universe. I think I can write stories only if I look at it that way, otherwise it is getting too difficult to write. I am not even able to update any of my other fan fictions 😣. And last night's episode is again a big put off now. I can only try to write but don't know if I can write any story now.

OMG this was sooo gooood!!!!!! 😍 😍 😍 😍

So funny, so cute, so romantic, hayeee ❤️

Needed this positivity after you know what 😆

Can't even point out what I liked most, everything was so perfect!! Thanks for writing this and making my day (or rather evening 😆) !!