Sairat SS - Doori sahi jaaye na (Completed) - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
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story was so beautiful. both teasing each other and then blaming each other. fabulous. simple yet lovely story🤗❤️




waiting for more stories like this❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: laksh

A new SS. Converted OS to SS since it was too lengthy. Hope you guys like it.

Three parts SS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank u for tagging dear!!!!!!

Lemme read it now! Will be back soon after reading....

My mind:- Aaj kal upar wala bada meherbaan hai!!!! Kal SaiRat pics aur aaj laksh se SS!!!!🥳🤣🤣


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Posted: 4 years ago
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This was so lovely, loved each and every word of it.

Part - 1:Daastaan chudailo ki contribution ki

Currently the greatest credit of this story goes to Ms./mrs. Chudail. Agar woh na hoti, toh itna sab na hota🤣

Amazing, some awesome fantacies of raja babu which came out as chudail stories did a lot of damage to the singhad fort's infrastructure and its reputation 🤣

Toh jab sab kuch door honge toh Sairat paas aayenge, waah, simple logic👏

Haan bhai, khidki khol, ventilation andar aayega tabhi teri oxygen teri paas aayegi.

Par uske baad Sai ne jo kiya, UPSC topper ki syllabus ko question kiya seedha. I wish Sai zor se dhakka deti Viru ko bed se, saari chudailgiri nikal jaata, aur apni biwi se darta woh alag🤣

This was just awesome, but I guess sometimes these things do happen, so Viru, use your shabd from onwards rather than chudail for your fantacies😎

Part 2: Chudail ki beizzati - A saga of serious insult

Bechari, Chudail didi/aunty ki beizzati hogayi. Pata chala the couple are just using her name for their own story progression. Galat hua, I demand justice for chudail clan 🤣

Chalo, dono ki chudailgiri baahar aagayi, pati patni mein bargad ki barbaadi🤣 But finally, back to normal or not😉

Part 3 : chudail ji tussi great ho, taufa qubool karo

Oh.my.god.😎

Itna bolta hai Viru, kabse🤣

This was so lovely, the emotional level of this chapter was amazing.

That's the truth, sai needs his affection, the feelings in his eyes laced into words, simple words. That he needs her,only her. No one else to share his life with, just him and her. That is the beauty, it's his gestures and only him that gives her assurity. He matters to her, and she matters to him. And what exists between them, can only be handled if both of them open up like this. Banters leading to exploring the beauty of the relationship.

Really wonderful, waise aage ka kuch nahi dikha, par theek hai, sapne dekh lenge phirse 🤣

Lovely SS❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Amazing SS. Loved it❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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First of all a biiiiiggggg Thanku!!!! For posting all the parts ....!!!!!!!!smiley31

Superb SS!!!

The way u have penned it is amazing!!! Gone with the flowsmiley36smiley9

Part 1:-

U know what I was shocked!... I also thought is she stressed or possessed of that chudail like Virat!smiley36

Part 2:-

This was funny! Their usual banter and cute replies to each othersmiley37...Lol Sai got to knew that there was no chudail... She be like Ab to gabbar gayasmiley37

And all thanks to Aai!smiley4Never felt bore cuz of their nok-jhoks always find it funny....Loved it...smiley42

Part 3:-

Awww how sweetly Viru admitted the fact!!!...Aise hi sab kuch bol diya karo Raja Babusmiley44Also got to know Sai's thoughts... Makers should show her monologues... Regardless!

But I liked how u emoted it here! And I can imagine SaiRat doing all this!!

These all r SaiRat kinda things...And damn sure that none can do it better...Neilsha makes it perfect...Though it is a fictional SS but it seems too real

Beautiful dude!

Loved it!❤

Waiting for ur next write-up!!smiley4

Ya I know u might be thinking how greedy I am...but always eager for SaiRat contentsmiley37Sry!smiley36

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I am so sorry for not reading and commenting...Quite busy after lockdown got over....Will read all by once and comment...


Thank you so much for tagging and letting me know.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Wow...... awesome....amazing.....😍

Really loved it a lot... ❤

I can totally imagine this happening with Neilsha as SaiRat.... if this happens it will be so cute 😍

So..... finally chudail brought them closer...

Finally they let go of all the confusions and crossed all boundaries between and opened upto each other......

Beautifully written......😍

Keep writing more such beautiful stories.....

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow awesome update lakshmi

Loved it very much

How adorable they are

Thanks for tagging me dearsmiley31

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Posted: 4 years ago
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thank you so much for tagging me. It was so cute. the nok-jhok mixed with romance and comedy. loved it. Keep writing amazing stuff and tagging me ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Ooohhh this was tooo tooo too good.. Especially the last part....

Loved the romance ❤️

Wish to see sairat like this someday 😍😍

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