ShiVi OS - Happy Father's Day - Page 5

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Hayeee....this was sooo cutee♥️♥️♥️

Raavi being angry at her budhu bhootnath 🤣🤣🤣

Rishita ko bhi samajh aa Gaya🤣🤣

Really loved the way the whole family got involved in the reveal.

Plzzz write more of such cutesy scenes🤗🤗🤗

I am glad that you enjoyed reading this OS😆

I wrote it a month ago, advance preparation🤣

Thank you so much for commenting, and I'll try more such stories.😳🤗

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This is so cute🤗 ..Raavi and her plan of revealing the news was so good par yeh log samjhe hi nahi

And Rishita whining ki Rishita bi samaj gayi matlab 🤣

I am glad that you liked the OS😳

Thank you so much for commenting🤗

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

This was so sweet and adorable and beautiful and I am in love

All the family was present 🤗

Really amazing story and written so well ❤️

Thanks a lot for your words of praise🤗

I am glad that you enjoyed reading the OS😳

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Awwwww🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

It was so cute 🥰🥰🥰

Beautiful ❤

The surprise was so good , but the chaos was entertaining 😅😅😅

I am glad that you enjoyed reading the OS😳

Thank you so much for commenting!🤗

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

this is so adorable and cute.....awwww

I totally understand the shock she must have felt twins sunke.....

perfect gift for Father's day

I am glad that you loved the OS and enjoyed reading it as well😳

Thank you so much for commenting🤗

Originally posted by: kitm

Awwwwe it is so beautiful ❤️❤️❤️❤️ loved it so much 😍😍😍

Beautifully written.....parcel confusion, tube light Shiva ...amazing....it was soo cute 🥰🥰🥰

Just made my day 😊😊 I had a huge smile throughout the end. 😍😍😍

Loved it 😊😊 ❤️❤️❤️❤️

I am glad that you enjoyed reading the OS and that it made you happy as well.❤️

Thank you for commenting🤗

Originally posted by: Sakshi_04

Awwwwwww this was sooooo cute

I got happy tears while reading this 🥺🧡❤️

Please do write more 💛

Thanks for this beautiful story🤗

Aaww🤗 I am glad that you enjoyed reading this OS😳

Thank you so much for commenting❤️

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

This was so beautiful❤️

Shiva literally went like mera nai hai Raavi even after Raavi insisted it was for him🤣🤣

Sabko samaj aaya Shiva ko nai😆😆

The cards set up and were so cuteeee😳

and here in the show we are waiting ki ek dhag ki conversation kar le 😆

Loved loved it❤️

Yep! Shiva got scared that Raavi was doubting him that he's having an affair🤣

I am glad that you liked the pregnancy reveal surprise and the OS as well😆😳

Thank you so much for commenting!🤗

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

OMG. ❤️

I love, love, love, love, loved it!

Before I get to the beautiful part, can I just mention the gross part? Raw mango with tamarind sauce. OMG, my inner cheeks hurt just imagining the sourness of that combination. Aur mere daant amiya gaye! And then you bring Vanilla ice cream to that mixture? Eww. Please don't tell me this combination is from personal experience.🤣

Now to my favorite parts. ShiVi❤️ I freaking loved everything about it. I loved how you included a cute Anniversary scene as well! I love Pregnancy revelation, and this was absolutely amazing. I was wondering if something would go wrong. I honestly thought that Shiva would get his hands on the pregnancy reports before she would reveal the surprise, but so glad that it was this, "Who's the baby Daddy" snafu. 🤣And the gift and the letter were absofreakinglutely adorable. And not just one, but they're having twins. Haye. Lol, just like Raavi's friend said, Raavi's the one becoming a mother and I am the one who's super excited.

Thanks for this lovely piece!❤️

I am glad that you loved the OS and enjoyed reading it so much🤗

The gross part😆 That combination does come from experience but not mine😆 When my youngest aunt was pregnant, she ate this combination😆 I only ate the raw mangoes😆

Now, about your favorite parts😳

I like pregnancy reveals😆 that's why I didn't let Shiva know about it. I wanted Raavi to tell him so I wrote it this way.

I didn't think that people will enjoy that "Who's the baby daddy" segment😆, I just wrote whatever came to my mind😳 but I am glad that readers actually enjoyed it.

I like multiples😆 Twins, triplets and so on🤣

@bold - that was something that my sister said when she got to know that I was writing about Raavi's pregnancy reveal for the father's day OS. She asked me as to why I was so excited about someone else's pregnancy🤣

Thank you so much for commenting! Made me really really happy like always🤗

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Are yar😳

Yeh kitni pyari OS thi bht zada cute thi yeh story.

I just loved every bit of it🤗 except the weird combinations she ate😆 but I am sure kisi ka experience janke toh likha hoga tumne😃

Amazing OS yar seriously. 🤗❤️

Thank you😳🤗

I am glad that you enjoyed reading this OS😳

That weird combination is what my aunt ate when she was pregnant😆