Lust for Revenge 5 updated Pt 29 on PG 104 / 23-6-2022 - Page 6

Congratulations on new story

Story is refreshing

Nice update

Maan coming home after 2 years

Arpita say maan dad come to airport receive maan but he say no

Arpita and annie go airport received maan

Seeing them maan happy

All comes to home maan feel emotional

Something happen in past that's y arpita away for maan

Seeing pic maan crying

Waiting for next update

Hi! Richa how are you doing? Hope all well at your end...take care and stay safe...thanks for the pm and the CS, prologue and part 1 are very interesting...the prologue is already showing a glimpse of the intense story of geet and maan which is going to unfold and part 1 shows the gap between father and son...maan returns back after 2 years yet his father seems unmoved...eagerly waiting to see what happened between them, why he left home and how will geet and maan meet and their lust for revenge...continue soon...waiting for the next part.

Very interesting start

Seems like there's lot of differences bet Maan & his father. Due to lot of tension bet Maan & his dad his mother sent him to London for the time being Maan loves his mother so much & without any arguments he goes to London

He comes after 2 years & only Annie & his mother go to pick him up

Maybe there's some sad memories in his life and whose pic was in the frame which brings tears in his eyes

Part 1

A Curious Start

Laksh seems like a dominating type of person

so easily he tells Arpita that he can put both Maan and Aprita

on the streets

he seems proud of himself and arrogant too

though he and Maan have had arguments in the past but at least

he should have been pleased that his son is returning home after two years

but it seems something dreadful had happened between father and son

Maan loves his mother and would not question her on her decisions he would

just follow them

but he seems very unhappy and almost feels like his life is standing in wait

he has neither experienced happiness when he was in London nor when he was

at home with his family

I think that Maan's father Laksh must be a difficult man to live with

Amazing update.

Like d way u portray d starting character.

Maan is coming after 2 yrs.

His mom n baby sis Annie is very excited for his home coming.

Wht happen between him n his father that they r not in talking terms n his dad is angry on him.

Maan's mom is his soul.

Whose frame was that seeing it he cried like a baby.

Whts to see more....

Awesome update....

Nice starting....

Maan is returning after two years and their us some difference between Maan's father(Laksh) and Maan... Annie and Arpita(Maan's mother) are happy that Maan is returning.... Laksh doesn't go to airport to pick up his son he is angry with Maan for something..... Maan is happy to come back. Arpita is Maan's life. He can do anything for her. Maan is emotional seeing the photo frame. Maan and Annie goes for sight seeing. Annie and Arpita are v happy for Maan's comeback......

Let's see why their is difference between Maan's father and Maan. And why Maan became emotional seeing photo frame...

Thanks for the update...

Waiting for next update.......

Commented on blog dear...

Thanks for the pm...

Congratulations for this new story.

Nice start, there is tension and disagreement between maan and his father. They are both avoiding each other. He is back just for his mum and sister.

Eager to know what happen in the past.

Good start

Laksh was good to his daughter he loved her but his son it's different he was away for two years but what ever the rift between them is like the same before the two years because Maan didn't move away or his dad what happens when they face each other

Maan the bond he has with his mom the way it was described it's like she is his lifeline and a reason to live his mother decided to send him away two years ago because of the differences between maan and his father but nothing changed