ShiVi SS- Woes Part 5 page 33 - Page 4

Oh so he was complaining to baba somnath

Now that's something we call a mega update

Really when read the A/N i decided deeply nhi read karungi so i will not cry while reading the story par probably you wanted readers aansuon ki baarish that's why u gave

Such an emotional and anguish filled update i didn't cried throughout the update but Shiva words

Ja Raavi aazad kiya maine tujhe. Tu fikr mat kr. Main upar wale se praarthna karunga ki tu jo karna chahti hai na woh ho jaye! Tu mere chehre ko tarse Raavi par tujhe main kabhi na dikhu!"

This made me so emotional all of sudden and

Then these words

But he shook her off, still gentle with her. "Praarthna hai meri ki tere is sindoor aur mangalsutra ko jis tarah toda hai na usi tarah inhen pehnane wale ki saanse bhi toot jaye... Ja rehle khush!"

I ended up having tears in my eyes it was penned so beautifully har ek shabd pierced the heart like a arrow deep

It's amazing yaaaaaaarr

Thank you soo much for tagging and bestowing me and All of us readers with such an amazing piece of writing you are really great with words.

Ohh god

Soo beautiful

U made me teary eyed

Shiva my heart pains for him.

Loved the update. Soo painful to read would be waiting for the next update

U wrote some amazing lines.

I read it twice now... I wanted someone to write on their childhood.. My heart broke for shiva..... He doesn't deserve this and the you gave us a cliffhanger... Please update next part soon.. Can you please tag me Mahi, do not want to miss the update.

It was heartbreaking and emotional update 😭

My heart goes for Shiva, he always loved Raavi😭

Raavi was hurt but her words for Shiva was cruel and disgusting, she has no right insult Shiva like that😡

Hoping Shiva is safe

Waiting for next

Omg!!! What did I just read 😭

I am so glad you picked it up-the cue and wowww, I am speeches. There was a surge of multiple emotions that ran through my veins!

Please continue! This looks absolutely superb.... 🤗

This was beautiful .

You described the purity of Shiva's unconditional love for Raavi and his pain so beautifully. And his taking a stand for himself despite his love was so important.

Can't wait to read the next part .

update now plz or update shivi mine today plz plz

Omg VOP 😭 This is amazing

Shiva was studying for the final exams when he heard them. His brother and sister in law.

I read this and legit got scared that Dev and Raavi had been married 😆

Loved the shrine part of the story ❤️😢

And she unconsciously does revolve around him!

From where did she get the absurd idea that he was the mastermind behind Rishita and Dev falling in love 😢

Loved how Shiva gave it back to her, but it was heart wrenching. Love that he didn’t manhandle at all 😭❤️

What’ll happen to Shiva now :(

This was an excellent chapter. I was left very restless after reading it.

I am looking forward to see how this story plays out. Raavi is definitely in the dog house 🤣 I wonder how she is going to make it all right.

Its beautiful...its perfect..its heartbreaking...Its Shivaa...Cant wait to read next part