Shiva and Raavi SS:love is blind. Chapter 14 updated on page 44 - Page 22

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Posted: 5 years ago

i dont care what all these people think.....they shouldnt be forgiven.....

tell me if they saw dhara in same footage would they believe she did that? i hate the whole worshiping thing right now......


u worship her, do it......but forcing someone to do the same and whatever happens u still take their side is foolishness.........he would have believed raavi if dhara wasnt involved m sure of that.....


baat to tab hai na jab everyone is against u and that someone takes your side coz they trust u and have faith in u........

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Emmasky

Hello everyone 😁 how are you all??,first and foremost,this is NOT an update.I just wanted to ask you all two questions please comment on your thoughts so I could work accordingly


1.would you all want a sad ending for love is blind (where Raavi won't forgive Shiva and his family after them heavily apologizing and rectifying their mistakes)or a happy ending (where Raavi would forgive them,but don't worry,they would have their fare share of apologizing,rectifying and hurt.) CHOICE IS YOURS!!


2.I am planning to right a dark story on Shiva and Raavi.It would probably be about the whole of the pandya family being merciless and evil, blinded by hate for a reason and take it out on Raavi.So I just wanted to ask,that are dark stories fine in India forums??I would write this story in July maybe..so do you want me to right this one??mind you this dark story won't be like your normal story and would be a very interesting and different story.


3.finally My ongoing story love is blind, I am happy to tell your u that i started writting the chapter and you will get a nice update in Sunday so stay tuned


do comment about what you thinks bout the first two points


Love you all 💞💞💞

Emma sky





i didnt see your msg b4 commenting else i would have mentioned in that itself

i dont want dem to be forgiven...i want her to move on happily........maybe with shiva but not the family

3 more days to wait.......its hard but for good things u have to wait.....


i guess u can write anything ....they have some category under which u have to write.....m not that well versed with all this........some writer might be able to help

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Posted: 5 years ago

Mereko abhi rona aa raha hai😭

This is such a beautiful and sad story. Raavi had to bear so much and all because of this stupid Pandya family!😭

Update soon, okay!


P.S. Iska index bana do please❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hey

Its sunday

When are u going to update

Well I am crazy about ur stories so waiting from morning

Please update

💫✌✌✌✌✌😯😯😯😯

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Posted: 5 years ago

Well I would prefer her to act she has moved on happily with that boy Yash her bestfriend coz they have been with her during 2 yrs and Shiva gets jealous and says they havent got divorce so she is still his wife and then a lot of sorry drama and then some revelations and then romance and happily ever after

Well this suggestion

Well its ur story so do as u would like

😆😚😚😚😚😚😚

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Posted: 5 years ago

U said you are going to update on Sunday... waiting for your update ..Plz update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey when are u going to update dear

Waiting🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

Pls answer

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Posted: 4 years ago

As promised I have updated today so enjoyyyy👍👍


Chapter 10:Hurts like hell


"RAAVI MUMBAI MAIN HAIN" (RAAVI IS IN MUMBAI)


All of them took some seconds to process the information they had just received by an anonymous.Though their brains were different and we're working differently,they all processed the same thing."Raavi mumbai main hain".And there was a whirlwind of thoughts in everyone's mind.For Shiva,well for him,this made no sense to him,the only thing that mattered was that Raavi was not in the clutches of harm.He had this thought because he knew her All the while when she was beside him,with him,he always watched her drowning herself into trouble.He thanked his stars for Keeping her safe.And,just like that,a little piece of his heart ,which had been shattered like a delicate glass,had restored itself,and had spread a little warmth in his cold and shattered soul


As soon as all of them took in the words and carefully analysed it,did they turn their heads towards the helpful person who had generously given this information.They expected severe verbal abuse,thrashing of their character and their expected a scar on the very family name.So they were a little suspicious and very much surprised of this anonymous person.


They all turned their heads at their on pace and were gobsmacked to find Prafulla.To add more to this very astonishing situation,she was clutching a frame very tightly and Shiva was sure that the glass would have pierced into her skin,but she didn't seem to mind that.Instead she their were tears running down her face,and a look of fondness,adore,and affection had been set to her eyes as soon as she saw Shiva.Her usual pointy face with the evil smirk was pretty looked long forgotten,instead it had dark circles,wrinkles and a look if tiredness in them.They knew that this was not Prafulla the moment but instead a broken mother though tired, willing to do anything to get back her lost child.


Shiva studied her expression and took the upper hand if the situation as he asked in a soft voice "Raavi mubai main hain?'(Ravi is in mumbai?)


Prafulla nodded her head gently and said

"Haa raavi.mumbai main hi hain do saal se"(yes,raavi has been in mubai for two years now)


Excitement and nervousness boiled in Shiva's mind.But that turned to utter confusion in a second.Raavi would have told maami to give her word to her,only then would she have told Maami about where would she be living.So,why did mami gave off Raavi's secret??carefully not breaking his calm voice and demeanour he again asked

Aap hame yeh kyu baata rahi hain maa'ami,kya aaapko Raavi ne koi kasam nahi di hain??(aunt,why are you telling us this?Did raavi not ask you for not telling her address?)


He watched in horror,as Prafulla's eyes were filled with fresh tears as she tried to speak.With extreme emotional difficulty,Prafulla spoke

"Haa,do saal pehle jab Raavi ghar vapas aayi thi,tut gayi thi woh Aankhon main aasun the,par,ek aaso nahi tapka unse.Jaise Ghar raabi nahi bas uska sharir vapas aaya tha.Bas kehne lagi main mumbai jaa rahi hu,kisi ko kuch mat batan.Usne mujhe kasam toh di thi,leking woh kaha hain yeh na batane ki,jagah ke baare main usne kuch nahi kaha tha.(yes,two years ago when Raavi came back,she was broken.there were tears in her eyes but none were falling.as though only Raavi's body had come back,not her soul.Then she started saying that she wanted to go to mumbai.she had told me to give her my word,but about where she was,not where she living.)


Shiva looked at Prafulla gratefully.Thoguh he could not take out the disgusting words jab Raavi ghar vapas aayi thi,tut gayi thi woh Aankhon main aasun the,par,ek aaso nahi tapka unse.he was extremely angry on himself.Cause he knew that it was his fault that Raavi was seperated from her family.His fault that her heart broke.His fault that Raavi is not with them.He looked at mami and nodded weekly.And went to move out when he stopped as Prafulla said


Raavi meri beti jesi nahi,meri beti hi hain.Do saal main maine usse kabhi nahi dekha.Ab bas tu hi hain jo usse wapas la sakta hain.Meri beti ko wapas la le Shiva.(raabi is not like my daughter,she is my daughter.I haven't seen her from two years.Now only you can bring her back.Please bring my daughter back Shiva)


Shiva stopped and looked at Prafulla.That time he wasn't the Shiva who hated his mami,nor was Prafulla the aunt who hated the pandya family.They were just two people desperately trying to get their loved one back.He nodded feverently with tears in his eyes.


Dhara looked at mami and sighed.She was over the moon that mami did not create a scene.she only wanted the best for her family and mami doing usual taunting was not healthy for them.She wanted to find Raavi,but did not want to ask mami,cause she thought it would bring chaos.So she was surprised that mami gave her information AND gave her consent and blessings to bring Raavi back.Nevertheless she was happy that Shiva was happy.


The pandyas came home and directly went towards their own room and excitedly packed their bags.they had already booked their tickets for mumbai when Krish's form had come.Though,no words were spoken all of their hearts were crying in joy to see raavi after two long years.


All of them were excited,but Shiva was,nervous and in guilt.of course he was damn excited to meet Raavi,but he couldn't help but be scared of her reaction.What would she do??shout,scream,hang him upside down,take a knife and split open the tomatoes and throw them on him??He did not know,but he kept all those thoughts aside and quickly put his clothes inside his suitcase and kept it near the door.Finally,he slept on usi bed,thinking about tomorrow,his heart and mind finally at peace after two years.

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The sun kissed the entrance of the pandya niwas,but no one woke up.Why?well they family was already awake and putting the last of the suitcases inside their car.Yes their car,you see,the pandya store branch had grown like an apple tree.Small at first,then just little by little it became more beautiful and mature,the store was the same too.Little by little the branch began to grow in many places across gujarat.


The journey to the the station was quite but peaceful Everyone was lost on their thoughts.What would they tell her?how would she talk,look,react everything was going on like a hurricane inside their minds.They were pulled out of their thoughts when the car was put at hault thus,ending their car journey.Quickly,they took out their suitcases and went for their train.


Shiva put his suitcase and sat on his seat.He. Closed his eyes and then thought all about Raavi,her smile,her memories in which he began to drown…


Flashback(first kiss)

He was looking at her with pure lust and love.She was looking at him with desire.He looked at her lips and sweat beads formed on his head.Both were breathing heavily with their lips merely centimetres away.Both looked at each other,gave their consent and their lips touched….


First confession and union

Shiva found Raavi after searching for her.A lady had just told her mean thingsa and also shamelessly called her .an orphan .who no one loves

Shiva quietly went towards her and said

"Raavi,I love you."


Raavi looked up in shock and saw Shiva staring at her with insane amount of desire in his dark eyes.She looked into his eyes and said

I love you too

That was it.shiva grabbed her and started kissing her passionatly.Raavi responded with equal passion.Shiva broke the kiss and picked her in up In bridal style and went towards their room.that was the night When Shiva and raavi were both physically and mentally together.


Flashback ends


.Shiva woke up from his slumber and saw that they had arrived at their hotel.Quickly,they all took a quick shower and nap.All of them decided that it would be better if they first went for Krish's admission.So they took a cab and went for the college.Not knowing that they were going to get a mini heart attack…..


Shiva's eyes scanned the humongous college.Tall buildings,neat and clean classrooms.all of it screamed discipline and power.But,as they entered all they could feel was the cheerful and happy mood of the students.Lush trees and freshly mown grass have added the finishing touch.Krish asked them if he could go and fill the details.All nodded their heads at him encouragingly and he went towards the admission office happily.But then Shiva heard a song which struck a chord in his heart….


Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye



Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye


Yes they were made for each other unknowingly they were always together


Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu


Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye


God really had given them a sign that they were made for each other



Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta


Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta


They really had something between them from the start


Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata


Though unknowingly,they were already each other's soulmates


Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta


Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai


Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye


Whenever they were together,they forgot the world.They could die for each other.


This was Shiva and raavi's favourite song……


Shiva had tears in his eyes,this song Hurt like hell.Byr,he wiped his tears determined to get Raavi her respect back.



All of yhem saw Krish running towards them.Theu thiguht that he was in pure happiness,But the smiles on their faces were wiped out as he said


"Maine raavi bhabhi ko dekha.raavi bhabhi yahi hain.(I saw Raavi SIL.She is here itself)









Hello everyone ☺️☺️,I am back.I know I am late,as I have some issues with my phone so could not upload the chapter.anyways,I will only ask a few questions. Did you like the writing for this chapter,??,especially the song meaning,I wanted everyone to understand why this song had been chosen for ShiVi.did you like Prafulla and Shiva's conversation🤔and ...Raavi is back,so how are you feeling??😎😎


Suggestions are always welcome.☺️☺️


Love you all😘❤️


P.s:next update will probably be on the coming Sunday

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update ❤️💞

Shiva and Prafulla are affected by Raavi's absence, their conversation was heartbreaking 😭

Shiva's feelings regarding Raavi and the flashback was beautiful ❤️

Shiva has realised his mistake in not supporting Raavi and how he broke her😭

Loved your writing,the song and it's meaning was beautiful

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome 😍😍😍hell excited for the next update

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