Shivi Drabbles: Wistful Tales-Ch 1/ Pg 3 [06/06/2021] - Page 4

You really know how to use words❤️👏

The way you describe emotions and the entire environment, amazing!

Loved Shivi conversation. Its so interesting how they have the scope to recall their past and see a different angle to it... like shiva said.. it could have been Shiva Raavi from the start.

She didn’t give his presence the importance that he deserved.

Waiting for the next Part❤️

Loved it. ❤️

Your way with the language is brilliant.

Waiting for the next chapter...

Wow! I don't have words, that's how good this is...❤️👏👏

Almost missed reading this beautiful piece

I totally loved this one, waiting for the next update❤️🤗

I loved it.

It was melancholic and achy but with a ray of hope at the end. Kind of like a tunnel which led to light...

This was beautiful! Your descriptions to set the scene are especially lovely, it brings the situation to life for the reader ❤️

Wow! This was just beautiful. You have such a knack for writing vivid descriptions. I was transported there. I could visualize every scene and smell every fragrance. And ShiVi scene, that was unexpected. Like Raavi, I almost expected him to fight back. Cigarette and ShiVi? That was unexpected. But glad they could bond over a whiff and have a somewhat normal conversation that usually they wouldn't.

Loved the memories into their past and Shiva always keeping tabs on her. Was she aware of it before or was that a revelation she had now. Clearly, she must have meant something to him to not only keep tabs on, but also to fight for her.

Looking forward to the next part!

And @your question, I have very keen sense of smell and mostly it's associated with bad memories. It's mostly a curse to have it. Apart from food, the two fragrances that are etched in my brain are related to childhood. One is a weird distinct smell of school hallways and another is earthy smell after rain. While former gives me anxiety, the latter reminds me of carefree childhood days!

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Love the concept. Looking forward to reading more on it

Thank you, I updated the first chapter. I hope you like it 🤗

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Loving the concept, Piu! Prologue is intriguing and can't wait to read what you pen! :)

Haha, I did write the first update and your lovely feedback on that 🤗Thank you

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Umm.. Yes.. Please do post. It looks so interesting.

Thank you for the feedback. Do read the first installment and let me know!

Originally posted by: kitm

Amazing 👌👌 love the concept 😍👌

Can't wait to read chapter 1 😊😊🥰🥰 Please do continue 🙏🙏

Thank you 🤗

Chapter 1 updated! I hope you enjoyed it :)