Dk & Disha: New Love Story - Page 17

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Piku_S thumbnail
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awwwwwwww
that was a sweet and emotional part
please write soon
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awwwwwwww...........

that ws realli very good guli 👏 ...

i would of read and posted my comments yesterday, but i was very ill....and i still am... 😭

continue soon 👏 ....doing excellently 😉 😆 👏

hope you feel better!!!!!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago
excellent
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Posted: 20 years ago
Part 18

Dk is shocked!!!!!

Disha tells him to forget everything!!!

He says no!!

Disha gets mad at him saying people make mistakes!!!!

Dk is like why do u have to be right?

Sum leaves

When they both look they see she is gone!

Later

Disha is discharged!

She comes home

Dk tells her to rest for a while

She says that she is fine

She starts in the kitchen again

Viren: arre bahu wat are you doing???

Disha: Cooking!!!!

Viren: But...

Disha: dadaji.. no buts

Viren: if you say so!!!!

Ved and Rano arrive there

Rano hasnt hugged disha so she gives her a big hug!!!

Disha: Ved..u arent troubling my sister right?

Ved: OF course not!!

Rano: Yes he is!!!

She laughs!!

Dk comes out

And sees them

Disha goes back in the kitchen

Rano comes behind her

Disha: How is Mummyji?

Rano: She is sad! She feels really bad about what she did!!

Disha: I want to go and see her!!

Rano: Then come!!

Disha: I will with Dk!!!!

They cont talking

Later on they leave and head home!

Sum asks Rano how is Disha

She says fine and she will come really soon to see her!

Sum is happy!

But is thinking will Dk let her!

Later that night...

Rano changes into her night gown....

Ved comes in and sees her and puts his arms around her

He picks her up and puts her on the bed!

They are looking at each other.....

Ved comes closer to her

Ved: I love you....

Rano: I dont!

Ved: Why?

Rano: Becuz!!!!

Rano smiles

Ved is on top of her....

Ved goes down for a kiss.. and he starts kissing her...

She then hugs him tight and the lights dim.....


Disha is taking a shower (same night)

Dk hears the water so he knows that she is

Her clothes are out on the bed...

Dk sees and smiles!

He hides them and goes back out! (lil devil)

Disha comes out in her robe...

She knows that her clothes were out....

She looks for them

Dk comes back and quietly closes the door

He is staring at her!!!

He comes closer and grabs her from behind!!!

Dk: You look sexy!!!!!

Disha: Dk let go!!! Where are my clothes??

Dk: what clothes?

Disha; DK???

Dk starts kissing her

Disha: Dk let go! i need my clothes..(night gown)

Dk: Why?? U dont need them!

Disha; Badmaash!!!!

Dk smiles!!

He takes her on the bed

He starts unbuttoning his shirt slowly...

Disha is trying to escape but she is blocked!!!

She is breathing very hard....

He smiles

He goes down and the lights dim slowly....



Next Morning:

Disha is on top of Dk!!

Disha slowly opens her eyes

She looks for DK's shirt....And gets it and puts it on under the covers!!

His shirt is big so it covers her whole body

Dk opens his eyes

Dk: Disha.. how many times did i say not to wear my shirt??

He laughs!! cuz he's joking

Disha: Dk.. u hid my clothes!

Dk: And??

Disha gives him a look!!

She gets up and goes in the bathroom

She has her shower and comes out wearing a sari!!!

Dk: Give me my shirt!

Disha: Get it urself!!

Dk: Hey you took it and u wore it... and u give it back!!

Disha: Dk there's no one here... you can get up and go in the shower!!

Dk: Disha its cold!!

Disha: Not my problem!!!

Dk: Disha??

He's getting annoyed

Thats what Disha wants



The End!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
stonex thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome
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Posted: 20 years ago
guli that scene was romantic. 😳
continue soon. 😆 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
👏Great Part, Guli!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
guli that was a very lovely scene 👏
please write soon 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
WOW!!! I read like the first Part you wrote and i dont read it for liek 3 days and i am soo behind!! lol your are doing an awsome job i love it!! Continue soon!!
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Part 19

Disha is smiling

Dk: Disha.. stop smiling and give me my shirt

Disha; Dk.. get up..

Dk: NO!!!

Disha; Why?

Dk: becuz!!

He gets up

He doesnt have his shirt on

Disha; was that so hard?

Dk: Yes it was!

He takes his shower

Viren is on the couch

He is thinking about Dk and Disha

About how they are in love... and etc....

Disha comes out

Viren is lost in his thoughts

Disha comes next to him

Disha; what are you thinking about?

Viren: huh?? oh nothing

Disha; Come on you are thinking about something!!

Viren: No!

Disha: Arent i ur granddaughter!! You can tell me anything!!!

V: I am just thinking about you and Dushyant!!

Disha: Why?

V: About how much you love each other!!!!

Disha smiles

V: It makes me think about Dushyants Grandmother!!!

Disha: You loved her didnt you?

V: Yes very much!!!

Still talking:

We were happy to get married and everything

And once we did we were in heaven


Disha smiles

Then all of a sudden Dk comes out

He stops talking

Disha is like cont....

But he says later

She is like okay!!!

She gets breakfast ready

V is sitting on couch

He is thinking about his past


There is a deep dark secret he is keeping inside of him....

He hasnt told anyone!

He was about to tell Disha.. but Dk had walked in

What it is?

Sum is thinking abotu Disha

She wants to see her

Disha said she was gonna stop by

But when?

She feels really bad about what she did!!

Rano tells Sum that Disha will come back really soon

Sum hopes so!!


The end!!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago

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