ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 41

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Posted: 4 years ago

Woww!!!

It was so lovely

Their bond, their actions❤️❤️

You really have a way with words !!! Excellent piece of writing👏👏

Keep writing like this🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely! I wish you were writing the show instead 🤣thank you for this beautiful story! ❤️:)

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Posted: 4 years ago

I love how beautifully you describe the bonds

Be it Shiva-Rishita or Raavi-Masapa or Raavi-Krish-Rishita and all other relations there. They feel so pure and connect able.

Yaar khatam ho gaya!!😭

Waiting for your next work❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great journey through ur writing. Thank you for your madterpiece

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ending ❣️ ❣️❣️ loved it 🥰🥰

Shivi are 😍 😍 so romantic ❤️

Loved Rishita and shiva's bonding 🥰🥰

Thank you for this amazing story ❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

Reading rhis story has been such an incredible journey. You have crafted each character with such details, so many layers and yet their madness is on an another level. Finding this come to an end makes me emotional 🥺. Will wait for another work of yours earnestly 🌺


Thank you so much. I am starting another story soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

The depth of emotions your stories have❤️❤️

Another beautifull upadtee.....loved mausapa's dialogue and shiva's reply to it😍

Plzzz come back with more stories.this imaginary world is a solace in these tought times.waiting to read more from you.🤗


Thank you so much!! Will be starting one soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Scarysea

You make my day ..no really


🙂🙂


Shiva asking her to promise never to harm herself for anyone including him and Raavi finding her crazy live in him ..She had become his world and damn she does deserve it ..Mausapa's words were emotional but Shiva's reply was gold ..iski ankhon mei aansu toh kya gum bhi utra toh duniya ko aag laga dega yeh Shiva Pandya ..aaye haaye


Aaye haaye🤣


I really loved Shiva's non chalance when Janardhan came to stop the marriage ..its like nothing will stop this marriage ..shaadi ke baad hi mai aur kuch sochunga usse pehle nahi


Arre bechara kitna wait karega.


And Raavi looking at Shiva lovestruck when he is angry..Maami Rishita Raavi all were in character


She doesn’t care. She knows he will handle it.


Finally the ending was so Shiva Raavi style

Ooo should I be sad that it's over or happy that you gave us the most satisfying ending or eager that you will start something new


Soon will start something new

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

Wow!! That was superb.loved it. Ravi being herself-Main to apne Shiva ko dekh rahi hoon. Haaye kitna handsome dikh raha hai gusse mein yun dulha bane hue. Kisi ki nazar na lage.😊😂


Hehehe. Woh aur kuch soche hi kyun??

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Beautiful update. ❤️

And dualouges were just amazing

Keep writing more🤗


Thank you sooo much. Will write soon

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