ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 40

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Posted: 4 years ago

Reading rhis story has been such an incredible journey. You have crafted each character with such details, so many layers and yet their madness is on an another level. Finding this come to an end makes me emotional 🥺. Will wait for another work of yours earnestly 🌺

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Posted: 4 years ago

The depth of emotions your stories have❤️❤️

Another beautifull upadtee.....loved mausapa's dialogue and shiva's reply to it😍

Plzzz come back with more stories.this imaginary world is a solace in these tought times.waiting to read more from you.🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

You make my day ..no really

Shiva asking her to promise never to harm herself for anyone including him and Raavi finding her crazy live in him ..She had become his world and damn she does deserve it ..Mausapa's words were emotional but Shiva's reply was gold ..iski ankhon mei aansu toh kya gum bhi utra toh duniya ko aag laga dega yeh Shiva Pandya ..aaye haaye

I really loved Shiva's non chalance when Janardhan came to stop the marriage ..its like nothing will stop this marriage ..shaadi ke baad hi mai aur kuch sochunga usse pehle nahi

And Raavi looking at Shiva lovestruck when he is angry..Maami Rishita Raavi all were in character

Finally the ending was so Shiva Raavi style

Ooo should I be sad that it's over or happy that you gave us the most satisfying ending or eager that you will start something new

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow!! That was superb.loved it. Ravi being herself-Main to apne Shiva ko dekh rahi hoon. Haaye kitna handsome dikh raha hai gusse mein yun dulha bane hue. Kisi ki nazar na lage.😊😂

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update. ❤️

And dualouges were just amazing

Keep writing more🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ending to a beautiful story🤗

Loved Shivi's moment❤️😍

Mauspa's words during the kanyadaan and Shiva's words after that were beautiful

Everything about this story was beautiful❤️

Waiting for your next story

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful ending 😍❤


Mausa pa's emotion n shiva's promise was 💯🤩🤩💯🤩🤩👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍


Mangalsutra 🔱👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Amazing story ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago

Noooo I don't want this to end 😭

I love this story so much ❤️❤️❤️Each character, dialogue and scene was written so beautifully!

So happy that they finally have their happy ending

Please write an epilogue if you can!! Would love to see Raavi interacting with Rishita and Krish after marriage and more of Shivi's intense moments 😳


Looking forward to your next work now

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Posted: 4 years ago

This truly feels like farewell😭

It was an amazing journey❤️

I'm sad to see this come to an end.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

this was so beautiful. that line of mausaji was so emotional😭


awesome story. we need a epilogue for this story❤️

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