ShiVi FF- Mine, Chapter 16 UPDATED on page 55 - Page 35

Originally posted by: poddav

very beautiful and emotional loved it ,,u r amazing writer ,,

Thank you so much. Means a lot. ⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: katheriene

It was beautiful and heartfelt update❤️

This story is a masterpiece🤗

Thank youuuuu so muchhh!🌹🌹

Means a lot!

Glad u like it.

This was ❤️❤️. Their lovefor each other is just so deep. I don't think my comments can describe it as well as you've written. All three levels deep. They are truly soulmates. And that true inke aise Pyaar ke samne sab kuch phika lagta hai. The way they are so lost in each other's world makes me personally want to protect them in their own little bubble.

And you are me ready eyed with their wish for death. It was painfully beautiful. Aaje, I don't think I can stop gushing over it. These ShiVi have my heart and soul!

Can't wait to see their journey in pregnancy!

And I must say I have loved all your poems in the beginning, but this was beautiful in summing up the whole journey! Sometimes when I see awesome work like that, I get jealous that kaash, kaash, I had this kind of talent and way with words. :)

Pls bless us and update soon

You made me cry happy tears. How could you write so beautifully? Every emotion was so deeply felt. Your imagination is of another level. Their description of the love for each other was all ❤❤you are a born writer. I don't want this fan fiction to ever end. Thank you for giving such a beautiful piece, writer😘😘

These two make me emotional.

❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

These two make me emotional.

❤️❤️❤️

🙂🙂

Originally posted by: fkhr30

Pls bless us and update soon

I will try to update soon

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was ❤️❤️. Their lovefor each other is just so deep. I don't think my comments can describe it as well as you've written. All three levels deep. They are truly soulmates. And that true inke aise Pyaar ke samne sab kuch phika lagta hai. The way they are so lost in each other's world makes me personally want to protect them in their own little bubble.

And you are me ready eyed with their wish for death. It was painfully beautiful. Aaje, I don't think I can stop gushing over it. These ShiVi have my heart and soul!

Can't wait to see their journey in pregnancy!

And I must say I have loved all your poems in the beginning, but this was beautiful in summing up the whole journey! Sometimes when I see awesome work like that, I get jealous that kaash, kaash, I had this kind of talent and way with words. :)

Anybody can write dear.

You just have to feel what you write.

When words come from hearts it affects you differently.

Thank you for your warm words🌺

Originally posted by: Angel_Diya

You made me cry happy tears. How could you write so beautifully? Every emotion was so deeply felt. Your imagination is of another level. Their description of the love for each other was all ❤❤you are a born writer. I don't want this fan fiction to ever end. Thank you for giving such a beautiful piece, writer😘😘

Thank you soo much for these beautiful words.🍫🍫🍫🍫🌺🌺🌺 they made me feel so happy😄😄