Shivi FF: DeewaniBhabhi ke nuskhe Epilogue, Pg. 127 (finished) - Page 68

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Posted: 4 years ago

The most shocking would be if Mami is DeewaniBhabhi

I mean can anyone imagine she advising Raavi ki tu Shiva se pyaar karti hain ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Yeh shak ki sui toh sab per hain.

Mujhe toh laga he tha sab DeewaniBhabhi ke readers hain

For sake of further embarrassment of her's and Shiva, Raavi should stop telling whatever action is happening between her & Shiva also her wild fantasies should keep to herself or tell Shiva he will gladly welcome them.

Kon hain yeh insaan shak ki line mein bohot log hain

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am so happy Shiva accepted Raaviโ€™s feelings and reciprocated as well. Mami toh gayi๐Ÿ˜†

Mausapa bhi pad raha hai DeewaniBhabi blog ko๐Ÿคฃ

Kis type ka family hai๐Ÿ˜† sabke sab tharki nikle

Next canโ€™t wait to read how Shiva is going to stop the marriage between Raavi-Dev๐Ÿ˜†

Edited by mpks1 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

I low key want shiva to be deewanibhabhi.. This has got me in stitches.. Can't wait to read the rest

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Posted: 4 years ago

You have made the hipe about diwani bhabhi so huge that I feel ab to hamare sath sath yours pressure would also have increased thinking banun to kisko banun diwani bahbhi so that all my reader are satisfied.๐Ÿคฃkisko ye nahin chahiye to kisiko ye nahin.. damn!! So much thinking ๐Ÿค” to do.๐Ÿ˜‰ Anyways loved the update n hope your creativity would always be so frequent.I get bored n check whether you have updated or not n voila!! UPDATED

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: lourel24

You have made the hipe about diwani bhabhi so huge that I feel ab to hamare sath sath yours pressure would also have increased thinking banun to kisko banun diwani bahbhi so that all my reader are satisfied.๐Ÿคฃkisko ye nahin chahiye to kisiko ye nahin.. damn!! So much thinking ๐Ÿค” to do.๐Ÿ˜‰ Anyways loved the update n hope your creativity would always be so frequent.I get bored n check whether you have updated or not n voila!! UPDATED


Sach mein yaar. I am thinking kuch zyada hype ho gaya hai. Pata nahi how you will all react when Iโ€™ll reveal who DeewaniBhabhi is ๐Ÿคฃ


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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya269


Sach mein yaar. I am thinking kuch zyada hype ho gaya hai. Pata nahi how you will all react when Iโ€™ll reveal who DeewaniBhabhi is ๐Ÿคฃ




Kab karogi reveal...๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivi.forever



Kab karogi reveal...๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”

' Janata jawab chati hai'๐Ÿ˜

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivi.forever



Kab karogi reveal...๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”


Wahi main bhi soch rahi hu ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 4 years ago

I just got to read chapters 10&11 โ˜บ๏ธ

Damn I gotta say these both chapters will have their own different fanbase ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


I'm sure I'll be rereading these chapters again ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Chapter 10

Raavi's full on in love mode ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Girl was soo happy that didn't even care yet how Shiva felt for her. What she knows is SHE is in love with HIM. Jo kuch bhi ho jaye ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

But then stepping into Pandya House her world came to a halt ! They wanted to get her married to Dev๐Ÿ˜‚

It's so suspicious that they suddenly wanted to rush the wedding. Yes they found out Dev has been texting someone all night every night. But whats the rush in wanting to get her married ? I smell something fishy (because of your guessing games, everything is suspicious now ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)

Panicking she ran straight to Shiva (that should've been a clue for the family, girl just got news she was marrying a brother but she straight away went looking for the other one ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚)

Shiva always ALWAYS asks a question that could backfire on him if Raavi gets bold. Like today ๐Ÿ˜‚

He asks her, mein kyun roku ? Boyfriend hoon tera ? BOOM, we got a hot passionate kiss in return for that question ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Aur lardke bhi pighal jaati ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ He was the one adamant before in stopping the marriage and suddenly when she doesn't want the marriage he refuses to stop it ? What nonsense is this Shiva ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ Boyfriend toh ban hi gaya, ab is Raavi ko bughat ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Raavi is so impulsive, what if Dhara or any of the family members would've walked in on them ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ How would that had unfolded ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Chapter 11


What is that INTRO ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

You always cut DewaaniBhabhi's story JUST as it was about to get good ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Shiva CAMEEE !! Hamesha hero's come through windows and here her Villain came to meet her at night ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Boy was so shocked and CONFUSED ๐Ÿ˜‚

He must've been thinking about her all day. Why did this Chipkali kissed him all of a sudden !! Why the change in behaviour. Why didn't she want to marry Dev anymore ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

But I love how unapologetic Raavi was ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Sharam naam koi cheez nahi hai is lardki. Yes she was embarrassed but never ashamed. She just straight up told him you were the one who asked for it, and I've gotta test your kissing skills also ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Anita Di again pol khol someone else ! Raavi and Mausapa both ! If Mausapa's been reading it, I'm hella sure Maami is not far behind ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Raavi again, bina soche pyaar ko izhaar kardiya ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Her mouth is faster than her brain this girl. She even ousted Krish and Dhara. If that wasn't a shock enough to Shiva her love confession surely would've thrown him for a loop ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

And Maami's entry at the last second ๐Ÿ˜‚

Pehla shock Maami ke liye, A boy was in her daughters bedroom at night. Dusra shock, the boy is SHIVA ๐Ÿ˜‚ Teesra shock, he said he's her boyfriend now !!! Maami agar heart attack ayega to kuch nahi ho payega ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

And Shiva is such a Shaitan, khud Raavi ki kamre aake and Raavi's the one who is puri bigad gayi ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ And they both acted as if him being in her room wasn't a big deal ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

At least seeing Maami, he gathered himself from the shocking love confession aur accept be karliya ๐Ÿ˜‚

He must be sooooo smug knowing this Chipkali is finally HIS ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


Fav line;

โ€œHaa subah se dimaag kharab karke rakha hai."

Because Shiva deserves it for all the pareshani he did to Raavi for all these years ๐Ÿ˜‚

"Aur test bhi toh karna tha ki tujhe thik se kiss karna aata hai ya nahi.โ€

Because Raavi has no shame ๐Ÿ˜‚

ps; please next chapter give us Shiva's point of view after the kiss and the whole day of him not seeing her. At store unable to focus on work ๐Ÿ˜‚ leading to him coming through her bedroom window ! Like an intermission of sorts ! Please please pleaseeeee ! You cannot deprive us of Shiva's emotional turmoilโ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ

Edited by Hanyshah - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Read two chapters in a go.

Deewani Bhabhi himself/herself is sick of the explicit emails Raavi is sending. ๐Ÿคฃ

Raavi made Shiva her boyfriend. Was it that easy? She khamkha wasted time and innocence on reading blogs. ๐Ÿ˜†


So, Shiva has turned into dare-devil mode. Uninvited sudden entry from window.

Anita's timing ๐Ÿคฃ


Mausapa ? ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿคฃ

Raavi ki pol khul gayi Shiva ke saamne. Them blaming each other's family being tharki was hilarious. ๐Ÿคฃ

If Mausapa is in for this, Prafulla might also have found out her husband's kaand. ๐Ÿคฃ


And the list grows...


Anita

Raavi

Krish

Dhara

Mausapa....



โ€œKaha tha maami. Apni bachhi ko sambhalo. Dekho puri bigad gayi.โ€ Shiva said, and walked out. Turning back he added. โ€œAur maami, aadat daal lo iski. Ab toh boyfriend ban gaya hu. Aata jaata rahunga.โ€

Raavi looked at him surprised. He gave her a smirk and left through the main door. Prafulla was about to faint.

โ€œYeh kya bol raha tha Raavi?โ€ Maami asked.

Raavi smiled. โ€œSuna toh aapne. Chaliye main sone jaati hu. Goodnight Maasi.โ€


I can imagine the scandalized face of maami. ๐Ÿคฃ


Only ShiVi can be cool as a cucumber at such circumstances and give heart attacks to maami with such an ease. ๐Ÿคฃ



Yeh dukh kahe khatam nahi hota Ananya. ๐Ÿ˜†

Deewani Bhabhi is still a mystery.


Aise guessing game khelte khelte dekhna, soon main Senior Member se Goldie ban jaaungi. ๐Ÿคฃ


Waiting for the next chapter.

๐Ÿ˜†

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