ShiVi story- Queen and her pawns BONUS CHAPTER UPDATED - Page 17

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This was beautiful! I loved the fact that it was trishul there. I always wanted a scene in future where Shiva gifts Raavi either his bracelet or Necklace as a promise for always being there for her. But this was beautiful. Though lost in reality, it would be nice if gifting a part of his bracelet would play out.

And Raavi is indeed crazy. But so glad that finally, both have confessed to each other (well technically, Shiva still has to, but his actions showed his feelings). Just hope he learns of Rishita soon. And the two can set records straight asap. Looking forward to what's next.

Thank you.🌹

It’s updated already.

Originally posted by: Scarysea

This was so beautiful and passionate.

Trishul was a nice touch. And Raavi's madness for him lighting the canopy on fire - oh my ..at least her madness is reciprocated by Shiva ..their conversation on her bed was so beautiful..it was realistic kind if exactly like they would behave

Krish was a sweetheart trying to prepare his family that it is Shiva Raavi not Dev Raavi.

And I really really want one scene where after Rishita Dev and Raavi Shiva relevation where Rishita complains that Dev did not even open his mouth about his wedding Krish did more for their wedding and without Raavi there would have been no wedding 🤣🤣

🤣🤣 Sadly Rishita chapter may be ending soon!

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Such a beautiful update😳

I loved it fully❤️

Please continue soon🤗

Thank you and it is already updated

Originally posted by: Swathu

Finally they both confessed

Shiva needed that jhatka to realise his feelings... Raavi has gone crazy... Seriously..

Dev hasn't opened his mouth still🤦🏻‍♀️

Even Prafulla felt the intensity of Shiva's feelings.. that was really beautiful❤️

Such a beautiful chapter👍🏼

Do update as soon as possible🤗

Thank you!!!

Already updated!!!👍

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Woah! This chapter was 🔥🔥...

We get to read Shiva's thoughts. His confusions & his clarity finally!

Oh My God, both of them are MADDD!! Khudko itne khatre mein daalna to get her lover to finally realize that she's the one that matters😳

But that's how our Shiva & Raavi are. This is going Brilliantly👏

Thank youuu!!!

Originally posted by: DesiiiiGirllll

OMGGG!!! These two are MAD!!!!!😆

Such a great concept of the Trishul!!!!

They both confessed! ❤️Ghadhede ko Akal aayi😆

Such a mess they have created!

Dev is useless as usual!

Can’t wait to know what happens next!!!!!☺️

Updated already. Hope tumhen jhatka na lage.

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Read all the parts in one go!

Tu mujhe ye bata ki tu do Bhabhiyon ko hug kar raha hai ya ek bhabhi aur ek hone wali biwi ko

Krish is the best, always smart and hilarious 🤣 Your dialogues are amazing!

And this Dev bhi naa, always slow 😂

Poor Raavi having to follow them around 🤣

I love team RR ♥️

The moment when Raavi puts a ring on her was so tender! Loved it!

Omg I love angry Shiva so much. I felt scared for Raavi when he got to know about the marriage.

“Eklauta devar” 🤣🤣🤣 Raavi traumatising poor Krish

Haldi scene was way too hot ♥️♥️♥️

Raavi and her airheadedness 🤣 Shes worried about ghosts steaming her glow

Damn she lit fire around her! The title is really apt for Raavi! Queen!

Loved the confession scene 😍

update sooon!

Updated!!!! But hope you don’t get jhatka. The story is supposed to go forward this way itself though.🤣

Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!😲😭

This can't happen!

Is this Shiva's plan to punish Raavi for all her mess?

Dulha badli in mandap wala scene hai kya?😲

Originally posted by: Foxii

Blockbuster Update❤️👏

Raavi is crazy, but loved her junoon...

Shiva had to save her... bhagya ki mehndi jo lag gayi thi

So well written, update soon

Thank youuu. Updated already.