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Posted: 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago

Omg love this long update ♥️♥️♥️


Shiva and Raavi are both insane - perfect for each other! Now all the elders can sense Shiva’s feelings

I wonder how they will sort this mess now!
Shiva’s visit with Raavi was so passionate and hot omg I am in love 😍😍😍😍😍 Finally Shiva has admitted his feelings! But honestly when will Dev open his mouth? Shaadi hone ke baad? 😂😂


Already looking forward to the next update 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyakhetarpal

Omg love this long update ♥️♥️♥️


Shiva and Raavi are both insane - perfect for each other! Now all the elders can sense Shiva’s feelings

I wonder how they will sort this mess now!
Shiva’s visit with Raavi was so passionate and hot omg I am in love 😍😍😍😍😍 Finally Shiva has admitted his feelings! But honestly when will Dev open his mouth? Shaadi hone ke baad? 😂😂


Already looking forward to the next update 🤣



Thank you Ananya🌷🌷🌷🍫a choc fr u

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Posted: 4 years ago

Raavi's madness for shiva is something no one could have imagined. glad at last shiva realized his love for raavi. im worried about family members how will they react when they will get to know the entire truth.....



awesome chapter❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Yes ! I was right about the Trishul 😍😍😍


And YES ! We finally get Shiva's POV of what all has been happening! Seee I told you ! Shiva did have some inkling that SOMETHING is going on with his Gadheri ! And if by some months means it started after he saved her from being "kidnapped" 😂


But Alas, in his emotional confusion denials and such, he counteracted all of it with anger. His mouth is faster than his brain, and his words kept hurting Raavi. When he said that he would watch her burn, even I almost cried because dang that hurt dude ! But I knew Raavi was about to prove him wrong with something crazy !

But thank God this girl is determined ! She'd been going steadily crazy and crazier for him in the past 2 years and she refuses to believe that he hates her. Hence, FIRE. That's how their relationship is ! Always the extreme with nothing in between.

Shiva finally felt regret. I love how he remembered back his words and panicked. I love how he instantly realised that he loves her. And I love that he wasn't afraid to directly tell Gaumbhi. One good thing came out of this incident is Maami's changing opinion of Shiva !! DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. But the fact that Maami really loves Raavi was no secret. And seeing Shiva fighting everyone even his Bhai and Bhabhi to jump into literal fire to save her baby ? What can any other mother ask for in a husband for her daughter.


At first yes, I thought Raavi had gone crazy. That this impulsive act would hurt them both. But thank god for silver linings ! Looks like her sacrificing her Sangeet didn't go to waste 😂


Shiva coming to check on her was aaawww inducing ! At first when Dhara said that everyone's asleep I was like, are you ending it here ? I knew Raavi would be spilling her guts but I didn't know to whom. But then Shiva came. His heart won't let him rest until he sees she's okay ♥️

Raavi even has a chain ready for the Trishul ! Even in her loopy ness, she was sure that he'll come ♥️
How cute was the two of them. Shiva didn't want to let her go and Raavi was finally at peace in his arms 🥺🥺


I was afraid at first of Shiva's reaction when Raavi blurts out everything. But then Shiva already realises that he loves her. Crazily. Just as crazily as she loves him. And all he could do was just blame himself for being almost too late in figuring it out ! They are just love ♥️🥺


There are too many fav lines in this chapter;

"Everything belonged to him- her fights, her promises, even her mehendi."

This was before his realisation. Even when not knowing the reason, he's claiming his rights on her 🥺


"He was her craze, her lunacy, her madness, insanity. And if she had to harm herself for making him realise and express his love for her, then she would."

This was damn borderline crazy but so effin romantic I just can't 😍♥️

“Main tujhe nahin kho sakta Gadedhi."

“Main tujh se pyaar karti hoon Shiva."

And the truth finally came ♥️

I'm in love with this chapter ! This may very well be my favourite ! I will definitely be coming here and rereading it many many times ♥️😍


Such a great job !! I'm so excited about the confrontation the next morning ! Please let someone find them sleeping together 😂😂 (though I think you won't write it that way, at least let Raavi realise and remember that Shiva was with her the night before. Maybe by seeing the Trishul necklace ?)


Ps; Just out of curiosity, how many chapters are left ? I'll be so FREAKING SAD if it's about to end 😭😭

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Posted: 4 years ago

If it was hast update then keep on writing in haste😄 such a fabulous update.Both are crazy for each other. In her room ,I felt ravi is revealing everything in her sleep but nopes it was reality n written so so beautifully.Gosh! I have this happy ,giddy feeling.Thank you so much.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful update 👏

Both Shivi are crazy made for each other❤️

Finally Shiva realized his feelings for Raavi❤️

Shiva knows the truth about Raavi's plan😊

Let's see how they will sort the mess

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

I am addicted to this series 🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago

this was beautiful! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Wow what a pair.. i have no words.. it made me completely speechless. What madness s this.



Do write more. U r an awesome writer.. happy writing..

Really appreciated the emotions expressed in this story...

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