ShiVi FF: Shiva, My Past Love - Part- 25 on Pg. 35 - Page 5

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Hi friends, thanks for the likes, comments and motivation. I am not from Hindi belt. Pl excuse if any grammatical mistakes are there in the Hindi dialogues. Had a hectic day today. So came up with a short update today. Hope you understand.


Part - 6


Shiva hugged Dev affectionately and congratulated him whole heartedly.

“Mubarak ho mera bhai”


Dev could feel the warmth in Shiva’s hug and he hugged Shiva back with moist eyes. Dev’s life turned upside down in one day. When he came back from Rishita’s house with heavy heart, he wanted to hug Gaumbi and cry his heart out. But the situation that was prevailing in the house didn’t allow him to do that. But, the hug that Dev was so desperately longing for, came unexpectedly from Shiva. Dev couldn’t hold back his tears any more. He hugged Shiva tight and burst into tears. Shiva thought Dev is deeply hurt by his taunts and he felt more guilty about his behavior towards Dev a few minutes ago. Shiva fought his tears back while cursing himself for causing so much pain to his brother.

Gaumbi, Dhara and Krish were relieved to see Dev and Shiva hugging each other and sharing a precious moment.


“Shiva! ek pal ke liye hum sab ko dara diya! Yesa mazaak kabhi math karna”, Gaumbi said wiping his tears.


Shiva parted away from Dev and tried to lighten the mood.

“Are Gaumbi! Shaadi ka ghar hai...masti mazaak tho honi chahiye na?”


“Haan bilkul.... par yesa mazaak tho bilkul nai”, Dhara hit Shiva’s head gently.


“Bhabhi! Itna pyar se kya maarti ho Shiva ko? Roz do roti extra khaya kar. Ye Shiva ko achi se maarne ke liye kaam aayegaa”, Krish gave free advice to Dhara.


“Kya bola?” Shiva turned to Krish with fake anger.

“Jab se tum is darti par janam liya h na tabse me tere liye do roti extra khate aarah hu. Ab dikhau tujhe?”, Shiva started chasing Krish. Krish went and hid behind Dev and Shiva tried to pull Krish to front. Suddenly Shiva noticed Dev’s tears didn’t stop yet.

“Abey! Aur kitna royega? Tu to yesa ro raha ki shaadi ke baad is ghar se tera bidaai hojayga aur tu wo maami ke ghar ke ghar jamai ban jaayega”

When Shiva mentioned about ‘ghar jamaai’ Dev was more hurt thinking about Janardhan’s demand. He stood silently staring somewhere without any purpose. Dhara touched Dev’s shoulder and asked with concern

“Dev! Tum teek tho ho na?”

Dev didn’t reply.

“Tu yesa nai maanega! Ruk... abi aata hu.”, Shiva nodded his head disapprovingly and brought some rasgullas from fridge and fed Dev.

“Mu mitta karo apni”, while wiping Dev’ Tears Shiva continued “Ab serial heroine ki tarah Rona chod de aur apni shaadi ki kushi manale”


Kaisi kushi?

Hearing Raavi’s question Shiva was shocked and turned towards the door from where her voice came from.


To be continued....

Edited by CherryBlossom1 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#42

Raavi’s in the house! This has gotten interesting how are they going to get together 🥺

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Posted: 5 years ago
#43

Noooo, that is mean!! Hihi

Love the story, curious about whats coming next 💕

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Posted: 5 years ago
#44

Loved the family bonding! Shiva-dev-gaumbi were very sweet here ❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago
#45

😭😭 the way all of them are hiding their pain hurts, poor Shiva, Raavi and Dev!


Loved the chapter ❤.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#46

lovely update


i just hope dev opens up to someone and shares his feelings so the misunderstandings between shiva and raavi can be cleared

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Posted: 5 years ago
#47

Emotional update😭

Dev, Raavi and Shiva are hiding their pains😭

Hoping that this misunderstandings clear soon

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Posted: 5 years ago
#48

Awsome update ❤


Emotional, dev n shiva both are feeling so much hurt n sad , but can't show it to others 😢


Raavi ke aane se aisa lg rha h jese wo sach bolne wali h ,kash sab bol de 😓


Cont soon


Thanks for pm 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#49

Family bonding was lovely❤️

Emotional chapter...

Update soon!😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
#50

Nice Bonding of the Pandya Brothers

Waiting for more :)

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