Shivi ff: Fake Dating part 15, pg.34 (finished) - Page 15

Everyone accepted their story?🤣🤣 inn ki chemistry kitna phoot rahi thi ki sab ne accept kar hi liya ..ab dekhenge disco mei kya hota hai ..when will they realise their feelings toward each other? Great storyline

“Ae Raavi!” Prafulla started.

“Ae maami!”

Prafulla smiled. “Nahi nahi beta main keh rahi thi jao ghum ke aao.”

“Lautne mein thodi der hogi maasi.” Raavi said.

“Koi baat nahi. Yeh Shiva hain na. Mujhe koi tension nahi. But lautna haa? Jitni bhi raat ho, lautke zaroor aana.”

🤣🤣🤣🤣

Ananya, how do you come up with such things? 😆

The chapter was amazing as usual. In this chapter, I fell for maami more than ShiVi.

So, it's disco time...

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly. Shiva is leading the plan from there on right?

Excited! 🥳

My favorite lines:

Koi baat nahi beta, tu jaa. Apna hi kamra samajh

Ae Raavi! - Ae maami!

Koi baat nahi. Yeh Shiva hain na. Mujhe koi tension nahi. But lautna haa? Jitni bhi raat ho, lautke zaroor aana.

😂🤣 i don't want this ff to end at all. Ready to even read 100 parts 🥰

Prafulla saying "But lautna haa? Jitni bhi raat ho, lautke zaroor aana.” was icing on the cake🤣 Infact, all the lines that Maami keeps saying by changing it at the last moment to adapt after Shiva's murderous expressions are Amazing! You have very well taken on each character

Yaar Ananya, if you have written comedy pieces for other shows as well, please do send me a few! You're just SO SO GOOD at creating these scenes. I can just imagine Prafulla & Dhara with their heads spinning at this new couple😆

😂😂😂😂😂 lautke zarur aana

Mami bechari I'd doubt me bhi aa gyi ki bacchi ghar aa to jayegi na🤣🤣

Awwwww shivi moments are so lovely 😍

Disco me dev ne rishita ko introduce kraa diya to , raavi kese react kregi 🤔

Dono ki love story ka different hi version h

Dev to bhabhi bhi maan chuka h ravi ko

Cont nxt part soon❤

Omg I love Shiva and Maami duo 🤣

So wonderfully written! Cant wait to see how Raavi reacts when she finds out that Dev has a girlfriend 😂

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

😂😂😂😂😂 lautke zarur aana

Mami bechari I'd doubt me bhi aa gyi ki bacchi ghar aa to jayegi na🤣🤣

Awwwww shivi moments are so lovely 😍

Disco me dev ne rishita ko introduce kraa diya to , raavi kese react kregi 🤔

Dono ki love story ka different hi version h

Dev to bhabhi bhi maan chuka h ravi ko

Cont nxt part soon❤

Actually, I am waiting for Shiva's reaction more. As per our hero, his fake girlfriend is looking 'sexy' and he is taking her to disco. Maybe some one will try to flirt with her and end up in hospital 😂

omg!!! aa shiva and raavi ke family members are so hilarious....

i love prafulla and shiva scenes❤️ amazing update

Originally posted by: vivpri

Actually, I am waiting for Shiva's reaction more. As per our hero, his fake girlfriend is looking 'sexy' and he is taking her to disco. Maybe some one will try to flirt with her and end up in hospital 😂

Or shivi dance closely to make dev jealous , but end up lost in each other😜

Or after knowing about deshita , raavi gets drunk and shiva will handle a talli girlfriend 😅😅😅😅

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Prafulla saying "But lautna haa? Jitni bhi raat ho, lautke zaroor aana.” was icing on the cake🤣 Infact, all the lines that Maami keeps saying by changing it at the last moment to adapt after Shiva's murderous expressions are Amazing! You have very well taken on each character

Yaar Ananya, if you have written comedy pieces for other shows as well, please do send me a few! You're just SO SO GOOD at creating these scenes. I can just imagine Prafulla & Dhara with their heads spinning at this new couple😆

I’ve never written so much for any show. And I’m writing comedy for the first time. Shivi makes me creative ❤️