Riansh FF : Sukoon *Final chapter and EPILOGUE updated pg-26 - Page 12

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Why everyone is behind riansh only

They both just started to smile , laugh with each other 💔

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Originally posted by: Navdeep_08

Why everyone is behind riansh only

They both just started to smile , laugh with each other 💔

I know 😭
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Brilliant update 😊

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CHAPTER -17- HURT EGO OR DIL ?

Vansh in backyard in deep thinking , his eyes have become red and he was really stressed.


After sometime he gets up and goes to his room .


In the room :


Vansh opens the lock and enters the room , He looks at Riddhima sleeping silently and sits beside her on the bed .


Vansh looks at her calmly sleeping and caresses her hair , then he looks at cheek which has red lines .


Vansh heart breaks seeing that .


Vansh feels guilty and closes his eyes in regret .


Vansh :( to himself ) Vansh your not a weak man you can't do that , you cannot slap your wife . You should be strong to control your anger .


He opens his eyes and caresses riddhima's face .


He leans on to her and kisses on her cheek .


Vansh : I am sorry , Sweetheart .


Vansh : why are we here ? hum yeh kaise mod pe aagaye ?


why I am behaving like a weak person .


why did you leave me , sweetheart ?


What went wrong ?


Vansh recollects the events happened that day .


Vansh : Everything was normal that day , phir kya hua uss din ?


uss din tum thodi bimar thi aur phir reports aaye .


tum mere pass ayyi aur maine poocha reports ke baare main .


tumne kaha tha sab kuch normal hai aur tumne kaha tha kuch batana hai urgently .


kya baatana tha , Sweetheart ?


Main 3 hours ke baad room main aaya aur tum chali gayi .


Aisa kya hua tha sweetheart us din ? Unn teen hours main kya hua tha ?


kya hua tumhare saath ?


Vansh sleeps with too many thoughts with Riddhima in his arms .


The golden rays of sunshine fall on them , early in the morning .


Vansh feels some weight on his chest and four tiny hands hitting on his chest .


Then he hears voices .


kids : papa , papa .


Vansh wakes up and sees them sitting on his chest and trying to wake him up .


Vansh : ( smiles) Woah , good morning .


Vansh plants kisses on there cheek .


Vansh : Tum dono ko kisne utara crib se ?


Riansh and ridwick jump to riddhima " when they see her waking up "


They both snuggle in her arms .


Vansh looks at them .


Vansh : I won't let you go this time , Main woh 3 hours ka razz pata kar ke rahunga .


Riansh turns to his father .


Riansh ( making a sound) : FUUUUSHHHH .


he was showing the car and trying to tell his father that " he wanted to play cars with him".


Vansh and Riddhima laughed out loud , looking at his son's adorable actions .


Vansh and Riddhima look into each others eyes and try to read each other .


Vansh takes Riansh and Ridwick to there and locks his room , while riddhima was gone for washroom .


Riddhima comes out of the washroom and notices that vansh and kids are not there .


Then she notices the breakfast on the table and realizes vansh again locked her door .


Riddhima : ( desperate ) aisa kyun kar rahe ho ?


Mujhe tumse baat karni hai .


After sometime vansh comes to the room with lunch .


Riddhima : ( angrily ) aagaye ?


Tum mujhe aise lock kar ke kyun rakh rahe ho ?


Vansh puts finger on Riddhima's lips .


Vansh : shhhhh !


Aaram se baat karo , Ghar main baache hai .


Riddhima : Tum aise kyun behave kar rahe ho?


Vansh : Tumhari wajah se , ek din normally meri wife ghar se chali jati hai bina kuch bataye aur do saalon baad milti hai .


isiliye .


Riddhima's eyes water and puts her head down .


Vansh comes to her , caresses her cheek .


Vansh : I am sorry !


Riddhima pushes his hand away and cries .


Vansh hugs her .


Vansh : I am sorry , Sweetheart for hurting you .


After sometime riddhima stops crying .


Riddhima : ek sawal poochu ?


Vansh : hmmm .


Riddhima : ( sternly ) Maine kya hurt kiya , your ego ya dil ?


Vansh is puzzled with her question , he was not understanding " where this question is coming from " .


Vansh : Yeh kaisa sawal hai ?


Riddhima : Mujhe batao phele , answer me .


did I hurt your ego or dil ?


Vansh : ( angrily ) Toh phele mera yeh sawal ka answer do .


Tum mujhe kyun chod kar kyun chali gayi , jab sab kuch normal tha aachanak se kyun chali gayi without any reason or explanation ?


aur mujhe pata hai unn 3 hours main jab main tumhare pass nahi tha , kuch toh hua hai .


bolo riddhima .


unn teen hours main kya hua tha ?


Riddhima gets nervous and tears fall from her eyes .


Riddhima : ( desperately ) phele tum mere sawal ka jawab do , main de dungi uske baad tumhare sare sawalon ka jawab .


Vansh : No , Riddhima .


phele tum bolo .


I want to listen .


Riddhima : Maine kaha naah , phele mujhe jawab chahiye .


Vansh : No , phele tumhi bologi .


Vansh and Riddhima both are at logger heads .


Vansh goes down and sees one unwanted person entering the house .


Person : Hey vansh , how are you ?


Vansh : Get lost kabir .


I am really in a desperate need of a punching bag .


Kabir laughs at vansh and leaves him .


Kabir directly goes to riddhima's room and looks at her from the glass door she was sleeping on the bed silently .


he was about to enter but he notices the lock on the door .


Kabir gets annoyed .


Kabir : Riddhima main wapas aagaya , I will take you away from this hell .


I am sorry main tumhe phele nahi doond paya .


lekin now I promise to take you away from here .


Kabir touches the glass door and caresses riddhima's figure on the glass door .


He was walking in the corridor and looks at two snowballs running .


Riansh and Ridwick : papa , papa .


Kabir has a smile on his face and wanted to embrace the kids .


But the kids run across him to vansh and give vansh a toy .


Vansh : Abhi nahi , hum baad main khelenge .


The kids disappointingly put there heads down .


Kabir goes to them .


Kabir : Koi baat nahi main hun naah , main khelunga aap dono ke saath .


kabir asks them eagerly .


Riansh and ridwick look at vansh .


Kabir : aare main tumhara chacha hun .


He looks at vansh with a smirk .


Kabir : Hai naah bro ?


Kabir : ( in mind) unfortunately , lekin jaldi baap banunga aap ka .


Riansh and Ridwick look at him .


Kabir tries to touch there face and ridwick bites his finger , riansh pushes him .


Kabir falls on the floor and they both run away .


Vansh gives him a hand and warns him .


Vansh : mere bache hai , stay away .


tumhare liye aacha hoga .


Vansh leaves .


Kabir laughs like lunatic .


Kabir : kabhi nahi .


At night in riddhima's and vansh's room .


Riddhima comes to vansh stumbling and trying to walk properly as she was feeling little dizzy .


finally, she sits on the bed near vansh .


She cups her face and looks at vansh continuously .


Vansh : kya dekh rahi ho ?


Riddhima : ( smiles ) Tumhe !


Vansh : phele mujhe mere sawal ka jawab do , baad main mujhe tad lo .


Riddhima frown her lips deeply , tears flow from her eyes .


Vansh takes her on his lap .


Vansh : ( concernedly ) Sweetheart ?


Riddhima : I love you , vansh .


I love you so much .


I love you to death .


Vansh looks at her without blinking his eyes .


Riddhima :( cries heavily ) Par tum kyun mujhse pyaar nahi karte ?


WHY DON'T YOU LOVE ME ?


Vansh is shocked to hear that from riddhima.

Edited by Max789 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Ab 3 gante ki mystery kya hai tum makers ki tra drag mt krna ( i am kidding)


Ab kabbu ko phi riddhu chayiye😡


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Very nice update 😊😊

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Amazing chapter Max 👏

Read all 3 chapters in a one go 🥳

Enjoyed eagerly waiting for next chap and that 3 hours raaz 😆

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Originally posted by: Navdeep_08

Ab 3 gante ki mystery kya hai tum makers ki tra drag mt krna ( i am kidding)


Ab kabbu ko phi riddhu chayiye😡


I also jumped into 6 hours mystery fever .

But I will not drag .

Before writer , I am audience .

I feel your pain bro .


Yes , riddhima kisko nahi chahiye 😂😂

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CHAPTER -18- "YOU'RE LEAVING ME ?"

FEW HOURS BEFORE :

Riddhima in the room .

Riddhima nervously shivers , cold sweats pass from her fore head .

She starts eating the food teary eyed .

While gobbling the food frustrated .

Riddhima :( breathing heavily ) mera sawal ka jawab phele kyun nahi baata sakta ?

Riddhima : ( gobbling food) mujhe bohat dar lag raha hai .

Riddhima : agar phirse wahi hoga toh ?

Riddhima :( sobbing heavily ) mera naseeb he aisa sab mere saath aise he karte hai .
Aur agar vansh aisa karega toh main toot jaungi .

Riddhima sobs heavily and eats her food .

Kabir comes back Riddhima and was successful in opening the door lock .

He runs towards riddhima and kneels down and sits in front of her .

He slides his fingers on her cheek and clears his tears .

He becomes restless seeing her tears .

he rubs his finger on her cheek gently to riddhima's shock .

Riddhima jolt's away kabir in shock .

kabir : koi baat nahi , baby .

Relax main he hun , tumhara kabir .

kabir understandingly pacifies riddhima .

kabir cups her face with his hands .

Kabir : riddhima , tum kyun mujhe chod ke chali gayi .

jab tumhe pata chal gaya uss raavan ka sach .

tumhe aajana chahiye tha naah mere pass .

kyun chali gayi ?

riddhima tries to remove his hands , but kabir makes his grip tighter .

Kabir : Tumhe pata hai maine tumhe kaha kaha doonda .

Aur bacchon keliye toh soch leti tum .

I am really disappointed riddhima .

Riddhima looks at him in shock .

Riddhima pushes him away roughly .

Riddhima : kaisi behki behki baatein kar rahe ho tum ?

just get lost kabir .

aur mere kamre main mere permission ke bina mat aana .

Kabir : Riddhima , Tum ...

Riddhima : ( shouts) I said get lost .

Riddhima shouts intensely and loudly .

mostly people in the corridor could listen to it .

Kabir : calm down riddhima , don't stress . main aagaya hun naah .

Vansh listens to her voice and comes running .

He looks at kabir in the room and riddhima crying , he face and nose was all red .

Vansh hugs riddhima tightly and gives kabir a angry stare .

He moves riddhima behind him , while riddhima holds his blazer .

Vansh holds his collar aggressively .

Vansh : I warned you kabir , but tumhe seedi baatein samjh main kaisi aati hai ?

Vansh takes out the gun and points at him .

Ishani , dadi and other family members witness vansh pointing gun at kabir .

Ishani :( irritated) vansh bhai aap kya kar rahe ?

Iss riddhima keliye aap kabir bhai ko marna chahte hai ?

Vansh : Shut up ishani .

Dadi : Vansh gun neeche rakho , ghar ka baacha hai .

usse chod do .

Vansh obliges dadi .

Dadi : isa kya kardiya kabir ne , ki tum usse marna chahte ho ?

Vansh : woh iss kamre main enter hua aur meri wife ko pareshaan kiya hai wahi uska sabse bada guna hai .

aur yeh reason kafi hai mujhe isse marne keliye .

Dadi : ( angrily shouts gritting her teeth ) hosh main aao vansh , iss wajah se tum uss bechare ko marna chahte ho ?

Tume nahi lagta kya , shyaad riddhima ne he bulaya usse kamre main .

kabir kyun uske room main jayega ?

Vansh gets irritated rubs his forehead .

He doesn't want to have a conversation with dadi anymore .

He turns to ishani .

Vansh :Ishani please get lost with your bhai , right now .

ishani leaves giving vansh a irritated look .

Everyone leaves and riddhima leaves her grip on vansh's blazer .

She looks at him sacred .

Vansh silently moves away from her and pours a glass water .

He drinks some water and makes her drink the water .

He caresses her face and nose , it was red because of heavy sobbing .

He silently sits on the couch and starts reading his files .

They both have too much talk and too much to argue , but they were waiting for each other to answer there questions .

It's almost night and dinner time , yet they silently staring at each other trying to seek answers from each other in silence .

Riddhima starts eating her food silently , worrying about vansh not having the food .

At kabir's room :

Ishani : Tumhari stupid plan fail hogayi aur woh trash phir se ghar aagayi .

Kabir :( irritated) shut up .

Ishani : please haan , usko yaha se le jao .

aur kuch plan banao .

Kabir : Main riddhima tum jaisi se door toh jald le jaunga .

maine kuch aisa kiya hai ki koi mujhe rok nahi sakta , aaj riddhima aur baachon ko yaha se lejane main .

Ishani smiles .

PRESENT :

Riddhima sitting on vansh lap on there bed .

Riddhima : ( sobs heavily ) Why don't you love me ?

Riddhima cries her heart out .

Vansh is shocked to see her crying heavily .

Vansh : ( concerned ) SWEET HEART ?

Riddhima : Hmmm ?

Riddhima looks at vansh and cups his face in her palms .

Riddhima : pata hai main tumse kitna pyaar karti hun ?

apni jaan bhi de sakti hun .

lekin tum mujhe sirf P... P...

Riddhima tries to say something but she could not utter the word , she closes her eyes tightly .

Riddhima : Why you cannot love me ?

Mujhe sirf pyaar kyun nahi de sakte ?

I love you so much .

Riddhima presses her lips against his lips , shocking vansh with her words .

Vansh : ( in mind ) I don't love her ?

Riddhima starts sliding her sleeves off her arms and removes her blouse .

She kisses vansh intensely .

They both become little intimate .

Suddenly vansh gets up from the bed .

Riddhima holds his hands , she looks at him with loving and pained eyes .

Riddhima : You're leaving me ?

Vansh leaves riddhima .

Riddhima asks again the same question and falls on the bed ,she looks at vansh leaving figure the door , blinking her eyes continually .

Riddhima : I love you .

Her heart pains thinking about vansh leaving figure .

She sobs heavily .

After some time she falls asleep quietly .

Edited by Max789 - 4 years ago
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Beautiful chapter


Sahi kia snowballs ne Kabir ke saath 🤣🤣

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