FF:LEAP OF FAITH:A SHAKHI LOG CH 4 UPDATED 13/5/21 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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CHAPTER 2.2:UNSAID WORDS


London:

Aastha was eating lunch with Shaan that suddenly the doorbell rang.She went to the door and took the parcel that came from India.
She smiled looking at her name and went inside.

Shaan Anokhi ne kuch bheja hai...

Shaan came closer to Aastha as she unwrapped the contents of the box.She first pulled out of idol of Ganesha and a box of dry fruits and at last a wooden box.

She was surprised at the things and then she unlocked the wooden box and she went numb on reading the words.

Shaan got worried when Aasta froze he snatched the box from her hand and read,
Anokhi weds Vihaan

Shaan smiled to Aastha's shock.
Tears fell from his eyes and he hugged her and said Noor finally humari beti ne hamari baat mann li.Woh aage badna chati hai.Mai bhaut khush hoon Noor.

Aastha stood numb.Shaan shook her and she regained senses.

Aastha:Shaan woh shadi kar rhi hai.Usne apna wada nibhaya hai lakin muje dukh kyu ho rha h Shaan.Hum toh yehi chate the na ki woh aage baade.

Shaan:Noor Anokhi was to be our daughter in law but you know she is not less than a daughter to us.This is not the time to get weak Noor.This is the time to be a part of our daughter's wedding and complete our duties.She needs us.

Saying this Shaan went inside to check the arrangements and Aastha went inside a Locked room.

She sat their on the chair and started reading the letter Anokhi sent to her.

Dear Mom & Dad,
To the world I am not your anything but only we know what we are.You instilled strength in me after that night and took a promise from me to move on.You restrained me to keep any contact with you but today I am fulfilling my promise and your daughter needs you.
Don't think that I have forgotten your son.I can never forget him but for you I am moving ahead with life atleast trying to.
Please come mom and dad.

Love,
Anokhi

Aastha started crying reading it.She said to herself,
Andheri raat mai uss din humne bhaut kuch khoya lakin mai tumhe zindagi ke andhero mai kho jaane nhi de sakti thi meri bachi.Humne jo kiya tumhari bhaalai ke liye kiya.

Lakin aaj jab woh ho rha hai toh ek maa ka dil roo rha hai.Tum ek nyi shuruwat karne jaa rhi ho aur woh bhi ek jhoot ki foundation pe jo humne tumhe bola tha.She sobbed.

Shaan came and kept his hand on her shoulder,"Noor that was not a lie that was the truth of life to save our daughter".

5 Years ago:

We cannot find them ma'am we are so sorry.
The officers said.

No this cannot be possible.No go and find him again.They will be there they will be there.

Aastha and Shaan cried their hearts out when no one could find Shaurya and Anokhi after the landslide in Uttrakhand.They used every contact but the power today went in vain in front of destiny.They have lost them.

After a month,a call came at the Sabherwal household.Aastha's eyes brimmed tears when she came to know that they have gotten a lead on Anokhi.

They immediately rushed to Chandigarh and found Anokhi in the hospital.

Shaan reached to the doctor and there he met Vihaan.

"We are here for Anokhi.Did you find any other person with her",he enquired.
"Sir,she was badly injured when I found her on the road.She was washed by the force of water and it is destiny that she came in front of my car.I brought her here.She was in coma for many days and as soon as she woke up the only number she remembered was yours so we informed you",Vihaan said

"Is she safe",Aastha inquired.

"Mrs.Sabherwal she is very weak for now and gets panic attacks sometimes.She keeps says Shaurya in her sleep too.",Vihaan told.

Aastha now started crying listening Shaurya's name.

But Shaurya couldn't be found anywhere.

One year passed by and Anokhi started coming out of her zone.The news of Shaurya being no more made her numb.She would stay in her room whole day.Talk to no one but then Aastha and Shaan counselled her and gave her strength.

Late night a call ringed Sabherwal house and Shaan picked it up.

Next morning without telling anyone Shaan left for somewhere.

HIMS,DEHRADUN,

Shaan reached the place and placed his steps slowly and tried to gather strength.I didn't tell anyone.I wanted to be sure first.I cannot tell anyone.

He went to the reception and enquired about the call last night.

The doctors took him took the room to identify.Shaan got shocked and collapsed on his knees.

Tears rolled down his eyes as he saw his son after a year and felt a miracle happen.
There was Shaurya lying on the hospital bed with all machines and in a sleep unaware of the world.

Doctor said,"Somebody brought him here after the landslide but we had no reach to his whereabouts.After inquiring many areas we saw your contact and name registered with complaints of him missing.So we called you to identify him."

Shaan said with tears,"Shaurya Shaurya mera beta and kept his hand on his heart.Mera beta

Doctor further said,"He is alive bt not alive too Mr. Shaan.His body is paralysed and he is in coma from last one year.He isn't responding.We request you to take him abroad to a doctor for treatment but there are very less chances but we can try.

Shaan forgot everything listening this.
He got up went out and called a few people and arranged everything.

He then called Aastha and said we are shifting to London for work.Pack your bags and all things have been taken care of and no questions.
............................................................................
PRESENT DAY:

Shaan humne itne saal Anokhi se jhoot bola hai.We didn't tell her that Shaurya is alive.
Noor uss waqt wahi sahi tha.Shaurya zinda hoke bhi zinda nhi hai aur mai nhi chata tha ki meri beti aise hi zindagi nikal de.Shaurya me saath Anokhi ka koi future nhi tha.We couldn't give her tears for life NOOR.

Han Shaan,you are right and you see our lies worked and here we stand reading
Anokhi weds Vihaan....

Suddenly,they got shocked as there was one more voice in the room.
It was Shaurya saying Anokhi....


Kashish25 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Kay, read the teasers & the chapters together & its a story with a different twist 🤪

Shaurya was Anokhi's past & seemed like he's no more but there's more to it... Maybe a memory loss? Watching so many melodramatic shows, my head is spinning with Ekta Mata type of twists 🤣🤣

Do continue soon & hope you'll be updating quite long chapters hereafter 🤭💛

Don't spin your head and take a sneak peak in the next chapter.Updated now

Kashish25 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Interesting one

Shaurya died in landslide..is he back?

Why Babli is hiding the letter?

So Vihaan saved her in landslide

Cont soon

To know more catch up chapter 2.2 which is now updated😜😜

Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Cool that you're continuously updating 🤗

That was some plot twist! Poor Aastha & Shaan are helpless but they did have a point when they wanted Anokhi to move on

But I guess soon things are gonna go haywire with Shaurya coming back to life... Waiting to know more 🥳

Kashish25 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Cool that you're continuously updating 🤗

That was some plot twist! Poor Aastha & Shaan are helpless but they did have a point when they wanted Anokhi to move on

But I guess soon things are gonna go haywire with Shaurya coming back to life... Waiting to know more 🥳

Ekta mata wala plot tha???Muje jawaab chaiye abhi.😂😂

And not to forget Anokhi is married now ...storm calling🥺🥺🥺

RainOfDew thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Awesome chapter

I thought same thaat Shaurya is alive but in coma.. he gained consciousness finally

Hopefully they stop Anokhi now

Cont soon

Kashish25 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome chapter

I thought same thaat Shaurya is alive but in coma.. he gained consciousness finally

Hopefully they stop Anokhi now

Cont soon

Did I anywhere say he is conscious??😂😂

RainOfDew thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Kashish25

Did I anywhere say he is conscious??😂😂


He said Anokhi so i assumed😆

Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: Kashish25

Ekta mata wala plot tha???Muje jawaab chaiye abhi.😂😂

And not to forget Anokhi is married now ...storm calling🥺🥺🥺


I meant in that last reply about Anokhi getting married to Vihaan & on the other side Aastha was telling Shaan we hid the truth from her 😆😆

That was good suspense though 😂

Kashish25 thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Chapter 3:Marriage


Aastha and Shaan got restless when they heard Shaurya calling Anokhi's name and his fingers moving.

In the last 5 years,he never even showed any movement but today when it happened it wasn't less than any miracle.
But the happiness was short lived as just one word and he again went into slumber.

They called the doctor and told everything.

"Mr.Shaan I agree you are happy at his movement but this may be not a good sign too.Sometimes things like these happen when the patient goes into no hope of recovery.They tend to remember their dearest person before losing hope and life.I wish it isn't the case with him but as a doctor it's my duty to tell you the truth bluntly",the doctor said.

Shaan and Aastha discussed things with doctor and the doctor left.

Aastha:Shaan muje lagta hai Hume Anokhi jo bata dena chaiye.You saw na how he moved hearing her name.May be she is her cure Shaan.

Shaan:Pagal mat bano Noor...tumne suna nhi doctor ne kya kaha...shant hokr socho Noor.

Aastha:Mai shant hi hoon Shaan lakin mai ek maa bhi toh hoon..tum kyu ek maa ki takleef nhi samaj rahe.

"Noor bacho jaisi baatein mat karo hum Anokhi ko kuch nhi batayenge and you stay here with Shaurya only now.We can't leave him at this point.But I will definitely go to India to fulfill my father's duties.Aakhir itne saalon baad meri beti ki zindagi mai khushi ke kuch pal aaye hai.Mai kisi ko bhi unke beech nhi aane doonga.",Shaan said determined and left the room.

Aastha was sitting in the dining area late at night.She was turning on and off the lamp again and again as to find answers to her dilemma....

"Maa hoon jaanti hoon lakin
Kyu koi maa ka dard nhi smajta
Saalon pheli beti ki khushiyan bacha li;
Toh kya ab bete ko kho doon
Kya apne bete ki zindagi chahna galat hai??

Tum samjho ya na samjho Shaan lakin Shaurya ke dard ki dawa Anokhi hi hai.Ab mai jo karungi na Shaan woh bas mai hi karungi cahahe koi kuch bhi samjhe....

Next day:

Shaan was all set to leave for India.
Aastha came and handed Shaan a box of things.

Beti ki shadi mai jaa rhe ho khali haath jaoge kya?Yeh shagun hai humari taraf se Anokhi ko bolna woh phero par yehi phene aur usse mera pyaar dena....and she got emotional saying that.

Shaan and Aastha hugged each other and he left.
............................................................................

BHALLA HOUSE,INDIA

After jaimala photo session followed and they clicked family pictures.Anokhi was elated and she hugged Shaan and said,"Aapko dekh ke muje sukoon mila dad"

Shaan said controlling her tears,"Kaun baap apni beti ki shadi mai nhi aayega aur khaskar jab beti tum jaisi ho".

They both smiled and after that Rama asked Anokhi to get ready for pheras.

Shaan stopped Anokhi and brought a wooden box kept in the corner.
"Ramaji yeh Aastha ne Anokhi ke liye diya tha phero ke liye.Agar aapko koi dikkat nhi toh kya yeh phen sakti hai Anokhi",Shaan asked politely.

"Kyun nhi bhaisaab maa ka pyaar hai yeh uski aur mujse zyada maa ka farz nibhaya hai unhone.Anokhi par phela haq aap dono ka hi hai.Nikki tu yehi pehnna",Rama said wiping her tears.

Anokhi got a little emotional and took the box and hurried to her room.She was getting weak with every passing minute.Her conscious was questioning her with second thoughts every now and then as if something was wrong.

She took some a deep breathe and closed the door of her room.

She opened the wooden box and took out the saree and jewellery Aastha had sent for her and got ready.

It was a blush pink lehanga saree with intricate handwork and a sage green contrasting blouse.She adorned the stone and pearl jewellery to complete her look and looked herself into the mirror.

She asked herself,"Kya yehi hai ab kya yehi hai ab" and went towards her almirah and took out her diary and flipped the pages.

She stopped when she saw a withered rose.She smiled seeing that and remembered it was the rose he gave her for the very first time....and read the poem written beside it.
"Tere NOOR ke aage toh gulab bhi feeka hai,
Meri mohabbat bayan karne ka yeh ek tarika hai;
Yeh gulaab sirf phool nhi mera wada hai,
Zindagi bhar tere saath rehne ka mera irada hai,
Iski mehak toh kuch waqt baad feeki padd jayegi lakin teri mehak toh meri andar sama jayegi,
Khilkhilati teri haasi mai kabhi gayab hone nhi doonga,
Tuje mujse door kabhi hone nhi doonga!!"

A tear escaped her eyes reading it and she gently caressed it with her hands and said zindagi bhar saath rehne ka wada karke pal mai hi chod gye aur wada apna Todd gye!!

Suddenly a wave of wind came and the rose fell down the bed.

She bent down to put it back but rather found a letter laying there.

She picked up the letter and read the details.

To Anokhi Bhalla
Sender:Aastha Sabherwal,London

Anokhi was confused as to why she didn't get this letter before and how it came under her bed.
But she shrugged all the thoughts and opened the letter and read.

Dear Anokhi;

Mai nhi jaanti ki yeh kyun kar rhi hoon.Lakin agar aaj tumhe Maine sach nhi bataya toh shyd mai khud ko kabhi maaf nhi kar paungi.
Mai jaanti hoon shayad yeh padne ke baad tum mujse nafarat karo lakin aaj yeh baat tumhe batani bhaut zaroori hai.Anokhi 5 years back we lied to you that Shaurya is dead.He is alive but not alive too.Shaurya machine pe zinda hai Anokhi aur hum nhi chate the ki tumahri zindagi kharab ho isiliye humne yeh kiya.
I wanted to tell you the truth before you start you new life.Beti mana hai tumhe aur aaj meri beti ki shadi hai aur mai chati hoon ki woh apna past chod de jaise hi woh le letter pade.Anokhi; Vihaan ek bhaut aacha ladka hai aur usse tum woh saari khusiyan dena jiska woh haqdaar hai.I want to see my daughter having all the happiness to life without past regrets.Move with your life Anokhi.
God bless you meri beti.Always stay happy.

Love,
Maa

Anokhi stood dumbfounded reading the letter.She got numb and still.She couldn't think of anything.It felt as someone pulled the ground from her legs.

Suddenly Babli came and said Nikki chal phero ke liye deer ho rhi hai.She cupped her face but Anokhi didn't respond.

Then Babli held her hand and took her down towards the mandap.

Anokhi still was unaware of her surroundings.She was in a state of shock and everyone thought it's the last time nervousness.

Babli and rama made her sit near Vihaan and Shaan did the kanyadaan and blessed Anokhi.

The pheras started and as they took rounds around the holy fire a thousand things flashed in front of Anokhi's mind as if everything was going in reverse.

The pheras got completed and Vihaan extended his hand to fill the partition of Anokhi's hair with vermilion.


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