FF:LEAP OF FAITH:A SHAKHI LOG CH 4 UPDATED 13/5/21 - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Interesting start

Anokhi is getting married..but to whom?😲

Garland on Shaurya's pic😲

Cont soon

Thank you.Will be updating soon😜

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Tallulah

What? Shaurya's dead?!

p.s love your writing.

How much the readers love Shaurya.Thank you for you appreciation.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: wamavasant

Interesting start

But shaurya is dead

Yes he is dead😜😜😜

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is interesting ❤️ I loved the poetic lines

Shaurya isn’t alive? 😲

Do continue soon🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Whattt!! Shaurya's picture with garland. 😲Shocker in the very first chapter.

Interesting start.Curious to know more.

Update soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: deepshiii

This is interesting ❤️ I loved the poetic lines

Shaurya isn’t alive? 😲

Do continue soon🤗

Thank you so much.The 2nd chapter is published now.Do read and share💙

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

CHAPTER 2:UNSAID WORDS



ANOKHI'S ROOM:

"Till when you will keep these thoughts in your mind Anokhi?Kya kabhi zindagi mai aage nhi badna kya",a voice said from behind.
She recognised the voice and turned back as she felt a hand on her shoulder.

"Vihaan",she exclaimed.
"Han Anokhi,kisi aur ko expect kar rhi thi kya?",he said.

"No",she said fumbling but Vihaan could read her eyes and took her hand and wrapped his hands around them.

"Anokhi,if you are not ready then I am ready to wait more.But you need to ask yourself that is this actually right to ignore the realities of life",Vihaan said comforting her.

"Aisa kuch nhi hai Vihaan lakin tum jaante ho this is very difficult for me.And with this I am going back to that night...

Before Anokhi could speak further Vihaan interrupted her and said,
"Anokhi,5 saal phele jo Hua woh bhaut bura tha aur kisi ko bhi jo raat nhi bhoolegi. No one will ever forget that night.But have you ever thought that life doesn't stop for anyone.Ask yourself would he be happy seeing you crying here and putting a full stop on your life because of him.He always wanted you to be happy Anokhi isn't it?"

"Han Vihaan,woh hamesha muje sabse zyada khush dekhna chate the.And I was the happiest with him.But here it's not about me today.It's about you Vihaan.",Anokhi said.

"About me?",he asked confusingly.

"Han Vihaan,you did a lot for me.If I am alive today then it's because of you.Agar uss raat mai tumhe nhi milti toh mai bhi kahin uss landslide ke malwe mai kho gyi hoti.Aaj bhi jab woh din yaad karti hoon toh kaanp uthi hoon.It get shivers and those nights haunt me.I know 5 years have been gone but does love come with an expiry date?
Vihaan mai aaj bhi Shaurya se pyaar karti hoon aur shyd tumhe utna pyaar kabhi nhi kar paungi.Isn't it that unfair with you?Phele hi tum bhaut kuch kar chuke ho mere liye",Anokhi sighed saying this.

"Anokhi did I ever asked you to love me or to give me Shaurya's place in your life.No right!Then what are you worrying about?I just want you to be happy and for every bond friendship is the key aur mere khayal se hum dost bhaut aache hai.For the world it can be marriage but for me it's Dr.Vihaan keeping a forever check on his favourite and naughty patient",he said.

Anokhi smiled a little and said yes doctor.
"Listen Anokhi,pyaar expiry date me saath nhi aata lakin log aate hai aur Hume yeh baat realise aur accept karni bhaut zaroori hai.And don't worry sab sahi hoga",he said kissing her hand.

Anokhi said,"Thank you so much Vihaan fot saving me for understanding and for being with me"

Okay now it's enough of rona dhona meri shadi hai aaj Anokhi tum na bas yehi tang karna muje.

And they both laughed.

"Btw you look...
Anokhi eyed Vihaan
You look like a goofball in this lehanga and saying this he ran out of the room and Anokhi threw a pillow from her bed on him.

"Bad shot Anokhi.Come fast I am waiting for you downstairs",he said laughing.

HALL:
It is a big hall with flower decoration and stairs in u from both sides of the hall.A huge chandelier at the top and yellow and dim lights adorned the space.

All the guests looked towards the stairs as they saw the bride coming down.

"Madanya" playing in the background.

Anokhi was coming down with her mother and sister beside her and a flower sheet upon her head held by her father and brothers.

She was the most beautiful bride ever.

Vihaan winked at Anokhi as she came closer to the mandap.

She smiled a little.

But inside she was dying.

As they stopped Mr.Bhalla took his daughters hand and hugged her as he got emotion and said meri gudiya.

Vihaan stepped down the mandap and extended his hand to receive Anokhi.

Garland ceremony:

Everyone was happy.
As Anokhi was about to put the Garland to Vihaan his friends shouted don't bend don't bend warna Sari life bhabhi ki baat maani paregi.

But Vihaan being a gentleman and bowed down to get the varmala and said koi ghum nhi Hume apni mohtarma ka hukam manne mai.

Then Vihaan also put the garland around her neck.

The rituals continued and flowers burst out all over.(Roses and lily)

But to everyone's amazement Babli was not there.

Main gate:

Yeh letter Miss Anokhi ke liye aaya hai madam.Theek hai aap muje de dijiye I will give her,Babli said.

She saw the letter and a familiar address shook her.She opened to read it and was shocked.

She hurried to the room and hid the letter and heard her name calling.

Being in a hurry she forgot to close the gate of the almirah.

This was all for today.Please let me know how this story is.Your feedback motivates me to write.





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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Ooo landslide...is he back? Interesting...

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Interesting one

Shaurya died in landslide..is he back?

Why Babli is hiding the letter?

So Vihaan saved her in landslide

Cont soon

Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Kay, read the teasers & the chapters together & its a story with a different twist 🤪

Shaurya was Anokhi's past & seemed like he's no more but there's more to it... Maybe a memory loss? Watching so many melodramatic shows, my head is spinning with Ekta Mata type of twists 🤣🤣

Do continue soon & hope you'll be updating quite long chapters hereafter 🤭💛

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