MG three Shot: College Wala Love PART 3 UPDATED PAGE 3 THE END - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Aww.. really now..


This story didn't warrant an ending with just three shots!

Please think of developing this naa...


If you don't feel like writing an FF, its okay..

Make do with an SS.. with say about 5-8 more parts?


Would love to see Maan's care for his Boss!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

thanks for updating

hope you and your family are well.


Part 3

Tremendous update..... beautifully written

of cos Maan is shocked seeing his boss that is Geet

great that she confided in Maan

liked that Maan took the chance and asked her out

well she was surprised as she saw Maan as just her friend

her question was reasonable

liked Maan's response

glad she agreed.....

Maan makes her feel like a princess

wonderful seeing their bond grow

love his care and concern for her

Geet was overwhelmed

wow she proposed and indeed her accepted

awesome end

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Beautiful story ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: waterlotus.19

Aww.. really now..


This story didn't warrant an ending with just three shots!

Please think of developing this naa...


If you don't feel like writing an FF, its okay..

Make do with an SS.. with say about 5-8 more parts?


Would love to see Maan's care for his Boss!


Thank you so much for your comment!! I unfortunately don't really know how to write romance (idk if that makes sense) but the like the relationship part so I won't be able to write one. If someone wants to then they're free to pick it up.

Thanks for reading!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for updating

hope you and your family are well.


Part 3

Tremendous update..... beautifully written

of cos Maan is shocked seeing his boss that is Geet

great that she confided in Maan

liked that Maan took the chance and asked her out

well she was surprised as she saw Maan as just her friend

her question was reasonable

liked Maan's response

glad she agreed.....

Maan makes her feel like a princess

wonderful seeing their bond grow

love his care and concern for her

Geet was overwhelmed

wow she proposed and indeed her accepted

awesome end

Thank you so much for reading!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26


Thank you so much!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Welcome🤗

If write another story pl tag me

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