Suljha lenge uljhe rishto ka maanjha ~ ShiVi (ft. family) - Page 3

Beautiful story👏

It was very well written😊

Loved the way you described the emotions of everyone👏

Originally posted by: Unique.Sheep

i thought this will never end😆

I thought that too, while writing🤣

i am glad you finally addressed the track of the brothers finding out why Dhara never had a baby...and you tackled it beautifully

Thank you🙏🙏

I loved the temple/preist scene

I love the bonding of this family...how they laugh and cry together <333 reminds me of ishqbaaz....GauRa always bring the other couples closer and solve their issues😳

ending was perfect

loved the title too

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

this was very sweet!

apt title.. the knots in all the relationships untangled beautifully ❤️

Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: niakush

First of all I wi tell you....this song sulja lenge uljhe rishto ka dhaaga....has beeny utter favourite!!! And after reading the os....it was clear why you choose this....it's a perfect fit!!!

I actually wrote this after hearing the song, so that song was kind of an inspiration😆

This OS had everything In it...you name the emotion and you find it in this OS.... hatred, anger, love, friendship etc etc!!! And each emotion was beautifully described by you!!!

Thank you🤗

Today there were so many lines...could not even decide which one stole heart!!!

Beautifully written OS.....words are less to describe this one...it's just beyond excellent!!!

I always wait for you write ups....so waiting for next one now!!!!

Your wait won't be long, will be posting the next piece in the evening😉

Originally posted by: mirai07

Lamba tha...par maaza agaya! 👏 ❤️

The priest words were amazing and so true. 👍🏼

I loved all of the scenes but personally the temple scene was my favourite. ❤️

Amazing and marvelous!

Keep writing.

❤️

Thanks a lot❤️🤗

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful story👏

It was very well written😊

Loved the way you described the emotions of everyone👏

thank you❤️

Hayye princess ne princess ki tarah hi likha hai❤️. It a very very pyari os. Truly Dhara and Gaumbi's sacrifice is unmatched. Maybe that's why I can't see them hurt. It makes me want to break all heads that does that. Krish being Krish even in a moment like that didn't forget 4 saal purani earrings😆. Everyone saying Krish baad mein cracked me up, chote hone ka yehi nuksaan😆. Loved loved it. Aur bhi likha karo tum

NEHA! Hats off to you! ♥️
Please continue to give us such beautiful stories! Yaadon ki baarat was playing in my head as I read the ending!

Some words are not enough for this chapter .

It is so deep n heart touching 💓

You described so well 👏

Teeno bhaiyo ke life me dhara aur gaumbi ki jagah , Itne upar hai aur wo kitne jyada hurt hoge ye soch kar ki unko khushiya dene wale unhi ke karan dukhi h

😓

It was so emotional seeing shiva n dev's reaction and they don't even know , what should they do to reduce the pain they were feeling 😢

The priest that helped shiva , I am thinking like he was actually God's avatar to show him the right way 🤔

Will you update the next chapter?

I m more than eager to read this story .❤

Originally posted by: Thatgirl16

Hayye princess ne princess ki tarah hi likha hai❤️. It a very very pyari os. Truly Dhara and Gaumbi's sacrifice is unmatched. Maybe that's why I can't see them hurt. It makes me want to break all heads that does that. Krish being Krish even in a moment like that didn't forget 4 saal purani earrings😆. Everyone saying Krish baad mein cracked me up, chote hone ka yehi nuksaan😆. Loved loved it. Aur bhi likha karo tum

thank you🤗

Well, Krish will always be the sweetheart😆