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Maan who is quite but his eyes full of passion ,which maing geeet more confused and nervous took slow step to her side and poor girl start to walk back at last her back touch to wall now there is no roma for her ….maan come really closed to her she again open her lips to say something but Maan put his finger toher lips and what u doing to me Geet u don’thave idea about it …I don’t oppisit wear such dress but I don’t want to share with u anyone koi tumko dek raha hai ye thought muje pagal bana deta hat Geet Maan bend to Geet side who standthere with closed eyes his closeness making her more and more shy ….this closness toomuch for her ….before she make courage to open her eyes he plant pickon her closed eyes …one bye one …a soft moan escape form her mouth …..thats sit Maan lost his all abilty to think and all next moment he make her turn to wall and put all her long hair to one side so he can see her marvel white back who tease him that day also and today laso..its so flowless like silk ….

Geet who is verge of fainting w ith Maan action …she almost gasp ….when she feel his lips on her back …that blouse which is have only onestrap Geet feel so much expose to him…she feel so much emotions shyness her own desire .his first so intimated touch …heplace small small sound able pick on her back and his lipc touch near the that strap and before Geet react any way he open the hooks with his teeth …..poor soul gasp loudly Maan …..

Geet gasp and and moan MAAN she first time call him without sir …he stop for while and than he rub his cheek to her flowless back and mummer say it again Geet ,say it I imagine this moment this fantasy so many time from that day when u wear that beautiful ghagra glipsum of little bit skin and I don’t know how many days I live in fantasy that one day I am going to touch ,feel and test it…. You and your innocence torucher me for so many days ….i stop to talk with u so I may b=not scared you……

Geet please call me without SIR me one more time its part of my fantasy please just than he again rub her face bite her on back ….

Other side poor girl totally turn totallyshock with Maan action and his talk she don’t know how to react its moment of passion when she called him Maan ..but its first time she face this closed intimacy her so called husband never touch so she is till verging is every manner and this trning to much for her …her legs almost verge of give up its Maan hold or maybe she we fall like doll …and now his demand but when Maan bite her she again called MAAN ,all emotionsstart to gather in her heart ,brain..her past is love for her …allemtoins gather in her heart she cannot control herself and a soft cry escape from her mouth and her body shake with it that make stop Maan to make what’s he is doing ….so many thought passed from his mind did he hurt her ,is she is not stnd to his touch ,or its her past is she get tourcher by her so called husband or any other reason but he somehow control his desire and took deep breath he closed closed her hooks and slowly make her turn to his side …

Geet with closed eyes tear running from her eyes she feel so disappointed that she cannot to able to give this moment happiness also properly but its first time …and she little bit fear with this sudden assault of Maan ..

Maan slowly sup her face and wiep her tear and called soflty Geet look at me please ….geet slowly open her eyes and look to him ….she found a care ,love and worry for her he ask with worry kya hua do I scare u with my action …Geet nodded in no….she mummer its wassudden main wo thoda dar gai …but your action not done anything …

Maan ask than why u cry ….she reply wo I feel angry with myself ..i cannot fulfill your desire and cry like this …

Maan tookher in hug after reaply u sacre me while so mau=ny thought passed from my mind u are pagli do u know ….geet more hide in his hug with his word …

Maan make her seat on sofa and give her glass of water ….he is little bit surprised why she fear for intimacy she married women but he show his thought and start to make her comfatable

Other side meera with dev who tryinh to consol her and say we will meet Maan today a nd say sorry and may be now u really want his happiness than start the process of Maan Geet marriage ,meera give shock look to dev

Dec continued yes its high time and we have to make all arrangement we wil go it properly pinky called me before some time and say that Mahi accepted Maan …so today I am going to talk Maan and pinky to Geet …your present is also ready we have to visit to that place and I talk with priest today and with Maan n Geet kundali and all they have only next week …date so in short we don’t have time for cry and sad ect ect o….and trust me Maan not going to mad for long with u ..u two have ajeeb equation so don’t worry.

Now Maaneet in real trouble Maan passion showing on Geet back poor Maan pick his own ear and say sorry he make so cute face that Geet feel to pull his cheek…..a soft smile appear on her face and she pull his hand from ear and nodded in no no.

At last she call pinky and ask for her showl white showl pinky ask why but she cut call …and after half hour she enetered in Maan cabin she feel like she enterning In sher den ….she knock and got Maan voice in response come in …..pinky found Maan in his chair and Geet on sofa pinky say hello sir to Maan and went to Geet ….

Maan make so much serious face that pinky don’t get anything with Maan face but other side she found Geet with red cheery face Geet cannot hide her emotions from pinky bacuse of their friendship which is prove now also ….

Pinky handover showl to Geet and mummer main bhar wait karti hu tumahara …Geet nodded and went outside after saying bye to Maan..

Maan isreal devil who seat with balnk face in front to pinky now his desierful gaze touching to Geet soul poor girl once look her babaji and lmost she run away from his cabin ..

Just than dev called Maan and ask him about his arrivel to home ….maan also went to home he is still mad with meera……

When Maan went tohouse dev don’t give any chance to say anything to Maan and say all things ..and informed they have only one week …for all AND MOST IMP Geet say yes….

Maan look dev with doumfold expressisson dev is dev so to the point work …dev wait for Maan reply …then Maan mummer whay shall I say now….its you hobby to make me speechless ….

Dev almost hug Maan in happiness and ask him that be ready in 10 morning ..maan eyes look around for while …she is ok Maan dev say with soft smile …Maan nodded and went to his room ..he is inhappy mood and he don’t want to ruin it …..he want to talk with Geet and ask about all….

He retired to his room a nd called Geet ….who is feel so shy to talk a lso and Maan know very well …her he say softly cong Would be GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA …..

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Fantastic Update


Oh I just love Mahi finally she is the one

that calls Maan Papa

actually she gave her approval to both Maan and Geet

when she calls him as Papa

and yes he is so happy now

but at night when he sees Geet dressed in white saree at first

he is mesmerized with her beauty but the realizes everyone is looking

at her too

and he calls her into his cabin

while inside his cabin he has became bewitched with Geet

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Maan now cannot control himself and starts

romancing Geet but she feels the first touches of intimacy

and gets scared and starts crying

this part confuses Maan as he knows that she is a married woman

then why get scared for intimacy

Dev he has already planned Maan and Geet's marriage

hope Geet agrees to marry Maan

he has been in love with her since she was in college

hope finally they can be united in love and marry

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terrific update... well written

so well Maan cannot control around Geet

passionate moments

he is surprised seeing her in tears

of cos he is confused with her reaction as she was married

great that Pinky helped Geet

so Dev is arranging Maan and Geet's wedding

will Geet agree?

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Lovely updates..

Finally maaneet getting married..

Waiting for next update..

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He retired to his room a nd called Geet ….who is feel so shy to talk a lso and Maan know very well …her he say softly cong Would be GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA …..

Kuch bolo Geet want hear from your lips did u ready for it…….

Geet replyI missing Biji …..sir she say softly ..maan turn silent other side yes biji is very imp part of Maan life he get silent with name of Biji he don’tknow how to reply she is very closed to her biji is her world that get snatchlike anything.. that the part of their life damage of that cannot be repair…he think for while and a=say in heavy tone me too Geet I am also missing her Geet but today her soul going to be happy if u saying yes for this marriage …

Geet - mummer yes I want to make her soul happy sir aswell as I want to see us happy along with Mahi….

Maan feel happy with her answer ……Maan ask softly u cry in office I feel like do I cross my boundry ….

But Geet changes talk to other subject and put Maan in more confusion ..

Next day turn very hurdle burdle for all Maan and Geet confused where their friend taking them… but within half hour Maaneet feel like their heartbeat start to reach to sky….they are moving to Geet house Handa villa….geet almost froze Maan somehow manage to bring her out of car…

Just than meera appear there with key its key of this house its come to sell in my company and the name Handa so I perosnly visit here ….yesterday I contact with owner and ask this house for next 3days for your marriage ,we all want to marriage ceremony get here its for BIJI ….meera say with emotionaltone .maan turn speechless he don’t know what to say ….meera slowly went to Geet side and hold her plam forgive me Geet some time my mouth become real enenmy of mine I don’t want to hurt u but this year his pain ,his sorrow his lonliness all get toll on me and I react like idiot …so please forgive me..please ….

A silent appear there for while and than Maan turn to Geet …chale ander we have to take blessing for BIJI ,he ignore meera ..some tear gather in meera eyes but she know she desrver this treatment ..she stand silently and Maaneet entered in house so many moment of memory passed from their mind like any movie ….maan hold Geet hand and entered in BIJI room…..the new owner don’t change anything there but biji photo is not there but they feel her presence in that house …they closed their eyes and took blessing …..all wait outside to give some moment to MG its their private moment …

Geet don’t get when she put her head on Maanshoulder and tear took their way from her eyes ….maan hold her shoulder with his one hand they both are in same boat ….

\dev come to meera side and mummer are u ok dear she nodded …..dev described their marriage shadule to pinky and adi …..today evening eng tomorrow mehandi sangeet and day after tomorrow ….haldi and marriage only friend circle will be present there ….

After 10min and thou all entered in Biji room …and called Maaneet …MG somhow control themslevs and next dev give all shadule to them now they moving to shoping mall with adi and pinky …and meera and dev taking charges of decoration and all ….maan mummer thanks to dev ….devcut him and say its marriage gift from hu please don’t say thanks and all uboth deserved this ….

Maan and adi reach to mall along with Geet and pinky ..where pinky don’t lose any chance to tease Geet ….

Pinky - I have to salute MSK ….kal tumari back inti achi penting karne ke baad kaise cold cucumber ke jaise apne cabin main bête thi for while I get confused that IS HE REALLY THAT PASSIONATE … pinky give teasing smile to Geet and …Geet eyes turn Big in horror she once look to adi and Maan ..what if they hear pinky nonsense ….geet cried shut up pinky nahi main shoping nahi karungi ….pinky smile on her tlak a nd ok purane cloth main hi shadi karlo waise bhi shadi ke baad kapdo ka kya kaam ….she giggle with Geet so shocked face …..

Pinky come closed to Geet and mummer baby closed you mouth u are giving open invitation to someone rather some devil look ..pinky look to Maan side ..and Geet next moment turn beetroot red with Maan desierful gaze on her …she avoide his gaza and mummer babaji ….

All setel for Geet shopping first salse girl ask …what u want to see ghagra or sari and Maan Geet give different ans …Maan ans ghagra and Geet ans sari ….salsegirl get confused with their ans..but pinky giggle on situation a nd wink to Geet …

Maan for engement and marriage gahargra and for other ceremony go withher choice ……

After half two hour they finish shoping its Maan who make all perfect he choose best for her …..

After finish whole shoping all went to Geet house so go to Handa villa with Mahi ..they have very less time ….

Maahi on sevnth sky when she heard about their marriage ..she is behind Maan like tale…..

Engagement start in 6 pm a nd meera and dev decorated house with red and white combination which is giving devin look ……Maan along with adi and dev shift to w here he live as PG and girl shift to main part of house ….maan collage staff and firend 40/50 person present there to bless them ….they make small shmiyan in front ofopne place of main part house where cermoney take place …both looking as devin couple ..maan eyes all on Geet …many people frst time looking Maan;s this Romeo side …adi and pinky teasing Maan ….geet notted loginess in meera eyes ….still Maan not forgive her….geet who standing to Maan ….bend little to Maan and mummer she took care of your from last 10 year she talk with me beause of love for u care of you…make this function perfect ..please forgive her ….geet pointed to meera …

Maan know when he is in deepest sorrow she and dev took his care or don’t where he get lost in sorrow pain heartbreak ….he took deep breath and hold Geet plam and start to walk to meera side ….

Maan turnto dev and say dev think of my adivse u still get second marriage I will support u …he very well know about meera next mpment meera mouth open in perfect O s hape she put herhand on her waist and say with gasp …padden MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA main thik se suna nahi …..next moemtn Maan hug furming meera and mummer in soft tone don’t do this again meera ..i am not good with forgivness …he say his heart ….meera mummer I will iwill after that that cermoney get some toher color …meera dance for Geet and Maan and make all happy with her …..

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Mahi also enjoying little bit …..she is happies person on earth after ceremony Geet make her sleep somehow just than she get massage from Maan don’t change and come to outside …Geet turn red inshy …but come out and found Maan on door with holding something ….

Maan once look to her and mummer u looking stunning Geet ….kya hum abhi bhhg ke shadi kare kya ..poor girl don’t ge t his tease and say no no muje ye wali wedding chiye band baja barat ……..maan smile on his reaction …Geet make pot she get that he is pulling her leg …Maan so much want to took her in his hug and ki** her ..but after yesterday encounter he feel tense for his action he don’t want to ruin such beautiful day with cry of Geet.

Maan hold her plam and caressed its with his long finger ….and say u are happy na she nodded but her eyes on Maan palm itself …Maan say her jo bhi Geet bol dena pane mind main chup mat rehna she nodded on Maan talk…..

He hand over some package and say its for u but open it after marriage please ..geet get confused and nodded in yes ……next day mehnadi a nd sangeet on its pick all enjoyed it along with Mahi….

Third day after haldi …..MG went to get change for marriage attired and ….after two hour ..maan stunt with Geet beauty a happiness in her face adding deving beauty on her face which cannot get get unnoticed by him….he is in magical moment he feel like all get fed and only MG are their its their moment and Biji blessing them …..so many emotions pass from his heart ……some tear make his eyes blurr …adi and dev encourage him its not any dream its reality he got his manzil in all aspects …..

In next hour both get married ……after dinner all start to went from there …pinky took sleeping Mahi with her …its Maan idea and Geet get happy surprised yes their first married ..night they want to spend here in this house …..

Pinky and meera decorated Maan old room where he live as PG of Hnada villa .. Geet start to turn real tense with thought of upcoming SR …she so muchwant to talk with pinky but as usual her shyness not help her and she fail to talk about it with pinky as well as Maan she so many time thought to talk with Maan about it but get fail…..

She is still vergin her so called husband not touch once to her he married her only for her money ….he is already relationship with other women and ….that day Maan passion make her really nervous like hell ….just than door get open and Maan entered there ….geet lost her courage to look to him ….she feel so many emotions pass …Maan come and seat closed to Geet he ofund her with long veil …he pull that veil aside …and found Geet Devin face with closed eyes he get her nervousness when he found some shakiness in her plam ….

Maan thought may be her shy nature not helping her or she may thinking if she can be his need ,may be last encounter make her more nervous but today he want to make her comfortable …..

He slowly took her plam in his plam and start to carsed like his habit he say softly ..if want to take more time I am reay for wait …tum aise nervous mat hona Geet .. that day may be I make mistake please forgive me …he say with pleading tone and that make Geet open her ..

She found really worry for her andshe donnt want to ruin their best moemtn because of her shyness and next she put he rosy lips on Maan mainly lips …but that turn me wrong me she have tot talk with him but she cannot resist herself with that action he looking so handsome and charming…….

Other side Maan took that’s is her silent hint and next moment …..he deepen on deep k**** and his hand get its destiny he slowly pull the knot of her choli which give him long tease in day.. Geet gasp with Maan action a nd he make entry in her mouth …which make her forget that what his hand making with her body ….she don’t get when he open all knot …..when a cool air touch her back her windied in shock a nd she stop the ki** and with say hug Maan to save her choli not come out fully form her shoulder …she cried Maan …….

Maan chule on her reaction and say Geet u waking up devil inside me with your action …and pointed to Geet who tuching Maan totally …she almost seat on his leg…she don’t get what to do ,she feel shy touch him a nd she canot be awy from him beasue of choli….maan took perfect chance of her confued andnext moment he open legha chian with his finger …she almost hide herself and more press herself in him……

They are so much closed to eachother that hey feel after effect of eachother of their closness….she feel his hardness….maan bend little bit in that guest lecture when your gaze look to myahem ahem I also get same effect on that day also he say softly ……

Poor soul cried Maan please …and Maan hug her more tightily …..but same time he ask are u comfatble when she noded Maan make her lay down on bed and open his shemani he took read of his all cloth within second there is np truning back now …her gaze try to look his ahem but she don’t get guts …a fear grip her heart and body and she lost abilty of she want to t alk but fail in it..

Maan too that as her subbission and next moment his lips start touch her every inch of her body its hot open mouth kis88 ..he play with her blossom with his tounge his lips as well as finger she forget ..he fear and passion and desire start replace with it …now Maan start to get her body lanugae her response ..he first found her stiff that’s why he make her relax with his ki**.

Next his finger start to travel to down side inch by inch givng her time to cop up with situation ….poor soul odnt have idea what shock come surprised waiting for him..he stop fro while and ask can we moov forwred Geet ..to next level poor girl who lost in Maan assulat only nooded in ansewe and next moment ..maan took her reaming cloth and try to make entry in her …but he start to get it hard ….he thought may be she is not active from few years so….

He once look to he and found liteel bit painful face of Geet ….he called softly are u ok ..can we stop …..he don’t want tohur her in any way ….other side Geet desire on peek she cannot stop a t this point ..she nodded in no that give some courage to Maan and heapplied some force for it and next moment he isinside her but he feel something sticky liquid around his ahem and he get shock of his life …he once with little fear to Geet and its get confirum with Geet tear and painful face …..

He got all situaoon so last encounter is her first closed intimacy encounter that’s why she is in tear ….. he feel sad for moment that she don’t say anything ..she never talk her heart eaily its her habit …..but now he is stuck ….in this situation he waited for while so she sustain her pain and get adjust to him……

Maan pick her forhead u have to tale me na Geet …aise ku kiya …she somehow mummer I don’t get courage to talk with u on this subject …..maan ask again can we stop ..hum ruk jate hai …but Geet open her hazale where he found a unconditnal trust and love for him…..she say softly I know that u cannot hurt me un any way and I am ok don’t stop me also need this her face start to turn again red ….some tear fall from Maan eyes ..why is she like this …he promised himself that he make he ahpppy in all sense and next Maan took slow move and start to take her in world of passion their love ……

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Lovely update..

Maaneet are married at their hands villa..

Continue soon..

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Congrats on completing this FF

looking forward to a new story from you

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fascinating update..... superbly written

glad Maan called Geet

she is so shy

well she is missing Biji

of cos she is ready to be his

Maan is ecstatic

so thoughtful of Meera....

all the functions will happen at Handa Villa

at least Meera asked Geet to forgive her

feeling for Meera

liked that they were able to get Biji's blessings

can understand their emotions

nice that Dev asked Meera if she is fine

great that all functions will take place

not surprised that Pinky teases Geet

as expected Geet worried if Maan or Adi overheard

nice that Maaneet chose their outfits

finally Maaneet engaged

so Geet wants Maan to forgive Meera and he agrees

Meera is overjoyed

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