Riansh FF : Sukoon *Final chapter and EPILOGUE updated pg-26 - Page 2

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Interesting start continue soon.

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CHAPTER -2 - SUKOON MISSING !

After 2 Years :


In Vansh's bedroom :


Riddhima : "aab se humare rahe alag hai , Jo kabhi nahi mil sakte ", humari kahani katam . GOODBYE Vansh .


Vansh :(screams) RIDDHIMA .


Vansh wakes up from his sleep panting .


Vansh stays still , thinking about Riddhima .


Vansh : ( IN MIND ) 2 saal hogaye mera sukoon mujhse door jaake , Riddhima meri sukoon hai usko ek nazar dekh ta toh bohat sukoon milta tha , riddhima gayab hogayi mera sukoon bhi gayab hogaya . har jagha doond liya lekin kahi pe bhi nahi mili .


As he is sitting on the bed , he hears a voice .


Riddhima : Good Morning Vansh , tum abhi bhi bed par ho , jaldi fresh up hojao main breakfast banati hun .


Vansh hears her words and immediately walks towards the bathroom , freshen up himself and leaves for breakfast .


Vansh having breakfast on the table all alone .


Again he hears a voice .


Riddhima :( excited) Vansh maine tumhare favorite omelette sandwiches banaya hai .


Vansh Closes his ears and eyes tightly and tears roll down from his eyes .


Vansh no more hears the voice and starts eating his sandwiches sobbing .


AT vansh's office cabin :


Angre : Boss humne 2 nayi places pe bhabhi ko doondne ki koshish kiya hai . lekin bhabhi abhi nahi mili .


Vansh closes his eyes in disappointment and gulps down his sorrow .


Vansh : Okay , list main next jo places hai uss main bhi doondo .Aur humare recent deal ke bare main mujhe brief karo .


Angre starts giving the pointers about the deal .


Vansh : ( IN MIND ) Jaisa waqt beet raha hai , mujhe tumhari fikar zayada bad rahi hai , main bas itna pray karta rehta hun ki "tum kahi par bhi ho sahi salamat ho"


They talk about it and they go for a meeting with the other party people .


Person : Toh Yeh conditions manzoor hai toh we are ready for the deal .


While talking with them , Vansh hears Riddhima's voice in his head .


Riddhima : KAAM , KAAM . hamesha mere saath yahi karte ho , kahi pe nahi le jate ho . Tum aise he kaam karte raho . Main tumhe chod ke chali jaungi .


Vansh : ( loudly , angrily ) No .


Angre is surprised with vansh's answer as there conditions on the deal were not that bad and he was surprised with vansh's tone .


Person : What , It's a NO ?


Vansh realizes that he said it loudly and the person misunderstood .


Vansh :( arrogantly ) NO , I was thinking something . The answer was not for you and jo bhi hai jaldi bolo , lets wrap it quickly . I don't have time .


The person feels insulted and offended with vansh's attitude as he wasn't paying attention and also his rude behaviour made him feel disrespected and insulted .


In his anger he points gun at vansh , both the groups fight each other .


Vansh gets hurt on his shoulder .


Vansh holding his shoulder , groans in pain .


Angre immediately reaches vansh .


Angre : ( tensed ) boss ?


Vansh : ( IN MIND ) Aaj tumhari ek dhamki ki dar ne war situation create kardiya , Sweetheart .


Vansh smiles by himself .


Angre looks at him puzzled .


Angre : Bhai aap tik toh hai ?


Vansh : chota sa gav hai , kuch nahi hua mujhe .


Angre : Bhai hum hospital chalte hai .


Vansh : Nahi kuch nahi hua mujhe.


Angre : Bhai aap apna khayal he nahi rakh thay aaj kal .


Angre looks at vansh's over grown beard , hair , dark circles under his eyes and his shabby appearance .


Angre feels sad looking at vansh .


Angre : Aap bas mere saath hospital chale .


At The Hospital :


The doctor treats vansh shoulder , he lies about getting hit by a sharp nail on the window to avoid the police case .


Vansh hears Riddhima's voice .


Riddhima : Dard ho raha hai kya ?


Tears roll down from vansh's cheek .


He immediately leaves after the treatment , while angre takes care of bills and receipts .


As vansh walking towards the car .


Riddhima : Vansh , kya bohat dard ho raha hai bolo ? kya main isse kiss kardoon ? dekhna sara dard chala jayega .


Vansh immediately closes his ears and eyes .


Vansh : ( sobbing )Saamne aao riddhima jo bhi kehna hai saamne aake kaho , Yun mujhe tumahare baaton ke yaadon se mat tadpao. Tumhari saari baatein yaad hai mujhe , mere kaano (ears) main goonj thi rehti hai,tadpati rehti .Saamne aajao riddhima .


Angre comes vansh running .


Angre : bhai aap tik toh hai naah ?


Vansh opens his eyes and avoids his eye contact .


Vansh again hears Riddhima's voice .


Riddhima : OH NO NO .


Vansh makes an angry expression .


Vansh : Stop it , Riddhima .


Angre : bhai ?


Vansh again tries to avoid eye contact and looks at something surprising .


Vansh : Milgayi .


Angre : ( puzzled) kya bhai ?


Vansh : Sukoon milgayi .


Vansh looks at the girl IN front of him with a beautiful smile , bouncy hair , flowy white maxi dress looking like an angel .


Angre looks at the direction vansh looking at .


Angre : Riddhima bhabhi ?


Vansh heart warms up looking at riddhima , all his fears run away from his heart and is filled with warmness and peace .


Vansh involuntarily starts walking towards riddhima , as he is lost in her .


Mean while Riddhima is near a car with a person .


Riddhima : ( smiles at man ) Maine aap ko finally red handed pakad liya . aap ko kya lagta hai aap yeh sab khayenge bina koi diet follow kare aur mera treatment asar karega aap pe . maine aap ko diet for a reason diya .


the patient becomes embarrassed and gives her a awkward smile .


Patient : bas ek se kya hojayega ?


Riddhima snatches away the food .


Riddhima : main aap ko yeh kane nahi doongi .


Patient : par kyun , main bas physiotherapy karva raha hun . mujhe diet follow kar ne ki kya zaroorat hai .


Riddhima : yeh jo aap sab kha rahe hai naah , in sab food se aapka pain aggravate hota hai , isiliye main kuch bhi treatment karva loon aapka pain he kum nahi hoga .


Riddhima snatches his food and eyes him angrily and asks him to go to his hospital bed .


The patient looks at his food sadly one last time and walks to his room silently and suddenly starts mumbling audibly .


Patient : itni sakti meri biwi bhi nahi karti hai agar karti toh main mar he jata , pata nahi tumhara pati tumhe kaisa jail tha hoga .


Riddhima opens her mouth wide in shock with his comments .


Riddhima : kya bole aap , mere pati pe kyun jaa rahe ?


Riddhima looks at him angrily and the patient walks towards his room fastly in fear .


Vansh chuckles at there conversation and proceeds towards her .


Riddhima walks to her friend , as vansh follows her .


Riddhima : Dr. Shivani , zara cab book kar dono naah . meri phone ka battery dead hai .


Dr. Shivani : why , Is viven not picking you up ?


Riddhima : No , he has some work . I have to go home as soon as i can .


Dr.Shivani : Just wait a minute .


As Dr . Shivani was booking the can they hear a car honking sound and look at the car .


Two little snow balls come out of the car and crash at riddhima .


babies : mumma .


Riddhima hugs them happily .


Viven gets out of the car .


Riddhima : tumne kaha tha tumhe kaam hai ?


Viven : Meeting cancel hogaya , maine tumhe call kiya tha , but your phone was switched off. Lekin jaldi chalo mujhe tumhe ghar pe drop karne ke baad , I need to go for the meeting .


Riddhima : Okay , lets go .


Riddhima holds both the twin boys hands .


Riddhima :( happily ) let's go .


They leave like a family of four in the car .


Vansh looks at them dumbfounded in shock .


Vansh : mumma ? Family ?


Vansh anger enrages ,angre comes running to him .


Vansh : Main mar dunga usse .


Vansh takes the gun from his pocket angrily as angre looks on enraged vansh .


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hello people , thank you so much for the liking the first chapter .


This is the second chapter , hope you like it and please leave your feed back in the comment section .


Edited by Max789 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
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she has a family, twin boys. Cute. Hoping she is happy without Vansh. Not regretting. ❤️


Vansh is as usually killer mode. 😡 But this is to be expected. No change in his behaviour.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Navdeep_08

Why did she leave him ??

Reports main kuch glt aaya 😲

Woh jaan ne keliye aage ke chapters padna padega 🤣
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

Interesting

Update Soon

Can't wait to know what was in the report

Thank you , will post it soon !!
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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: eishe10

Very nice story! Do continue soon 😊

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Originally posted by: -Ayushi-

This one's interesting, do continue 😊

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Originally posted by: veil_of_roses

Interesting... Riddhu has cancer? Or is she pregnant?

Woh jaan ne ke liye aapko aage ke chapters padna hoga😆
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Originally posted by: aartee22

Interesting... waiting for the next update 😊

thank you dear , do follow my next updates 🤗.
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Originally posted by: Arifa05

Nice start. Plz update soon.

Thank you dear , please do continue reading 🤗.

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